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    Posted: 15 June 2013 at 9:29pm
iight 8 bar verse due by midnight today or it can b sooner it really dont matter.no flips first to five wins good luck this is chineck
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 June 2013 at 4:27pm
Ya raps awkward and garbage/
only time i seen l.s.d buck is when im watchn milwaulkee!/
Change his wardrobe to hospital garments" ya fates to b demoralized
So ima put this nygga in his place lyke apartheid!/
My bars fire..turn him into a stain on the street hell get maimed for the cheap/
u from africa? Well then that explains y he stinks!!
Turned his dame to a freak....he get no support no love
The taurus snubll take l.s.d off the street like the war on drugs!
U cant deny my respect once i ride on his set
ill maraude him at midnight send his [tribe on a quest!
Spittn bars im just comfortable this cowards not live my only interest is to punish him
y would i lie? Put the suppressor on the wesson/ then i muzzlim!
This clown aint impressed shit he bound to get slept quick
knew he was pussy....when i had to go remind him to check in
If u was scared whyd u accept then?
He knew the consequence....knew hed end up wit his skull crushed/
so l.s.d nowhere to be found....like a drug bust!

Expo-l.s.d= ellis d… montay ellis plays for the bucks
Apartheid-africas version of civil rights basically
Midnight marauders was the name of a tribe called quest cd....he from africa...tribe
I lie=allah muslim=muzzlim muzzle him

Good luk 2 lsd
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 June 2013 at 11:44pm
EXPOS
*He had a beef with O block
*Most females bear the name Zinaii
*He posts most of the time in diss the person above you(this expo is related to the 1st bar)
*Drogba got robbed at a hotel and authority couldn't find the burglar(s)

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In that thread you post a lot shit like you're ill
though
You're weak I could beat you to death with a feather
pillow
Your verses completely lack substance like rock
music
So what are you gonna do to me!?show me a desperate gimmick
He couldn't post an avatar!?must be a family
fount
If you couldn't do that then you're missing a chromosome count
You complained about O block like a girl who got
crossed
Better yet like he was left with the aftermath of
holocaust
When he was beefing with O block he developed
schizophrenia
Don't believe me?what he perceives to be big is smaller,here's a clincher
(zinaii vs l.s.d)
I'll terrorise ya more than Hitler when he was in
distress
Rappers like you come up with one plan like
RDP houses
When people hear the name Zinaii they first think the person is a female
Your parents gave ya that name!?-for sure they were expecting a female
Don't try to raise the roof on this battle or might get
chopped
There's no way you could hit like Drogba getting
robbed
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 June 2013 at 11:47pm
good shit l.s. Uppin uppin uppin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 June 2013 at 12:05am
MVGT Zinaii because his rhyme flow waz better and waz easier to read and understand i thought l.s.d waz way off realy weak he had a few good points /punches he threw at zinaiis name but it jus didnt flow well and never connected
both verses were not the best but i do feel zinaii took the win   both need alot of work l.s.d more so then zinnaii ,,,, and with that being said

VOTE#Zinaii
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 June 2013 at 12:09am
Originally posted by L.S.D L.S.D wrote:

EXPOS
*He had a beef with O block
*Most females bear the name Zinaii
*He posts most of the time in diss the person above you(this expo is related to the 1st bar)
*Drogba got robbed at a hotel and authority couldn't find the burglar(s)

Show time
In that thread you post a lot shit like you're ill
though
You're weak I could beat you to death with a feather
pillow
Your verses completely lack substance like rock
music
So what are you gonna do to me!?show me a desperate gimmick
He couldn't post an avatar!?must be a family
fount
If you couldn't do that then you're missing a chromosome count
You complained about O block like a girl who got
crossed
Better yet like he was left with the aftermath of
holocaust
When he was beefing with O block he developed
schizophrenia
Don't believe me?what he perceives to be big is smaller,here's a clincher
(zinaii vs l.s.d)
I'll terrorise ya more than Hitler when he was in
distress
Rappers like you come up with one plan like
RDP houses
When people hear the name Zinaii they first think the person is a female
Your parents gave ya that name!?-for sure they were expecting a female
Don't try to raise the roof on this battle or might get
chopped
There's no way you could hit like Drogba getting
robbed
weak I could beat you to death with a feather

Hey LSD...so you mention O block in an attempt to diss...but you said could beat you to death with a feather pillow.what did you do next?jump up and choke a giraffe?you know where you bit that line from.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 June 2013 at 2:51am
1-0 uppin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 June 2013 at 3:32am
Yeah that's a bite
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 4:13pm
heres my once every 24 hours up for votes
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 5:51pm
I'm looking now Vib. Where exactly is the bar bitten from... i've done both a site search on LA for 

"You're weak I could beat you to death with a feather pillow" 

and pulled up nothing at all and then the same search in google with quotations to see if i can get a direct match, both lead to nothing. Could you link me to the exact line that it was bitten from, that you're referring to? If its a concept we have had many discussions about this before now and if it's not a word for word bite and only a used concept worded differently then as far as i'm aware thats constituted as fine. so LSD is in no bother.. I am however on the lookout now you've mentioned it, obviously your search may bring back different results to me as you know what you're looking for/where you found the bite. As far as i can see its a concept thats been used differently and that is it.. 

As for my vote.

This is a hard one to call... LSD's way of wording sentences maybe due to english not being his primary language made his flow naturally choppy, his rhyming words again caused some problems as Rameez had a similar problem back in the day with words he thought rhymed but didnt.

Zinaii again the flow was choppy and there were few punches but they dont hit hard much at all... i think you went too technical with your rhyming words and tried too hard with the personal/location nameplays and as they were too indepth and not a witty 'roll-off-the-tongue' pun they dont look as slick as they should be expected to be..

However due to the fact i read both verses multiple times, i have to give Zinaii the vote for the reason of, he tried much harder at damaging his opponent. but the punches in general were very poor.. if i'd have to score it i'd say majority of the lines in this battle would have been 1/10 or 1/5 maybe one or two pushing at 2/10 for the effort involved... no big hits here... It was like watching peewee football in the states where they tackle with flags.

in battles here you expect the superbowl in every battle with the likes of Jared Allen crashing the lines and Ray Lewis smashing the RB into oblivion! none of it here..

Anyways.

Zinaii  2-0!


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 5:57pm
@ ceejay - i've never really been one to "snitch" per say, but when i see a blatant bite (especially from a person whom many people admire) from one of my favorite rappers of all time, eminem. It just rung a bell. here is your proof CJ. Bitten straight off of the marshall mathers LP.

song is called "Get you mad" by Eminem.

He also used it in a freestyle before he was signed to aftermath with percee P, here is the video.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gbRhVO-K7Qo

he also stole the set up for that punch.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:07pm
Quote You talk a lotta shit, but you was never ill though
I'm sick enough to beat you to death with a feather pillow


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:13pm
Dayyyyyum - LSD bit Em


LSD must be trippin' <<<<<< hahaha see what I did there Wink
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:15pm
Yeah and the fact that he asked a question about slim recently made it quite obvious he had intentions of biting
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:15pm
its the same old story with the BigGame/Manc Drama

"more confused than a baby in a topless bar"

As far as game was defending himself, he used merely a concept of the line that manc used...

You're weak I could beat you to death with a feather pillow - LSD

You talk a lotta shit, but you was never ill though
I'm sick enough to beat you to death with a feather pillow - Eminem

Close but no cigar... 

just my two cents, if LSD is getting done for this... surely BigGame/Manc should be relooked into?

seems fair no?

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:19pm
Woahhhh there - just to make that clear - BG bit ME - not the other way round LOL




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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:21pm
dude,i dont agree!bitten concept,whatever...he needs to be penalized or sum shit.

I mean....your logic implies that O blocks innocent basically!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:22pm
^^^^ Agreed - biters need punishing
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2013 at 6:28pm
Lets all beat that tired old dead horse that is "ban biters".

End of the day, you need a line somewhere, otherwise I'll ban the lot of you for biting my letters!

Locked till its sorted.
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