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AshleyKaos
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Topic: prophecy of a legacy (posted correctly)Posted: 25 October 2013 at 11:13am |
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Its two fifteen xactly
and i just cant sleep try to smoke some weed to put my mind at ease but i still continue to think , like einstein with all these thoughts runnin through my mind all i seem to think about is ways to improve my unique style and technique constantly jotting my ideas down even got a mini pen and paper pad that i carry around this is the only way to express my thoughts acuratley with out misconceptions or skewedd misdirected allegations shit, what did you just say bitch ? ya thats my opinion, get over it im a bomb you dont wanna make me tick tick tick tick boom EXPLODE ! like an atomic bomb splitting its form for rap i was born , its in every step i take god pre - meditated all these raps i make my spot in this rap game is straight fate destiney in the form of perection my passion for this shit is infectious my lyrics pierce all theses readers minds you are now infected garuntee imma be the best there ever is and the best there ever was mark my words , call this the realest shit you ever heard swear on my life or watch my grave burn be careful in position of opposition soon it shall be my turn |
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riddledan
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Posted: 26 October 2013 at 3:28am |
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Not the worst I've seen but no were near the best this ain't a diss read me out TAKE TIME with the words you rhyme and just as much on the concepts read it over n over and try and improve it till ur sure its the best it can be self hype belongs in the OM section but make sure u back ur hype with the things u write
Its clear u have a passion for writing the pen and pad line screams that out so give ur passion more time Eg I sometimes will think of a subject then write down a number of opening bars then siv through the shit to get to the one that is best I do the same for the closing bar after I have spent some time on the middle ones If noticed about my self and I have seen it in others too that u can write some shit down and think its on fire butthen some next man or gal will tthink it sucks its in our nature to self hype that's why this site is good because people tell u how it is so u can improve Don't Lose It USE IT Stay up |
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