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CHAIN 
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 Topic: Scarred Wolves & Old GloryPosted: 15 April 2014 at 11:01pm |
 ... Back to the murder spree, the bad words that nurtured me Verbally, they battered me, badgering my purity Back when my mind used to battle immaturity Baptists didn’t want it, bruh, I bashed them with obscurities Back when we was backwards, we babbled insecurely, we… Found out soon enough that the baggies couldn’t cure the greed Urban bacteria, our baggage was infernal heat Baffled by the cold, turning Bambi’s into curried meat Poisoned by the lives of bastards living worry-free Poisoned by the lies of ambassadors of burglaries They tried to set us up…and this was said to us: “Love could never trump…a basket full of currency” Take away that basket and the Batman ain’t no Hercules Basking in the struggle I just tapped into what worked for me Tapping out was wack and I had to get it urgently Back-to-back dramas happening concurrently Happiness was burning up from Babylon to Germany Gladly I just turned it up and gats as long as Xerxes feet… Never fired at me just to have my mom in surgery… Waiting rooms praying to a god I do not worship, she… Made me move wiser tho’ I’ll pause a nigga mercilessly Still a child, spitting out…arsenic and mercury Torch the place while giving all you arsonists the third degree Look at y’all fronting like my articles ain’t worth the read ... HG |
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 15 April 2014 at 11:32pm |
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Gaahdaamn this is some fly stuff. The entire thing is a quotable, man.. it aint even funny.
I guess this is my favorite part; "Poisoned by the lives of bastards living worry-free Poisoned by the lies of ambassadors of burglaries They tried to set us up…and this was said to us: “Love could never trump…a basket full of currency” Take away that basket and the Batman ain’t no Hercules Basking in the struggle I just tapped into what worked for me " But the Bambi bar before this section was INSANE as well. dawg you killed it.
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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Posted: 15 April 2014 at 11:35pm |
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Multies were off the chain, flow was even more off the chain. This whole thing was off the chain. No pun intended either. Just such a good piece bro.
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Posted: 16 April 2014 at 12:07am |
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Dam chain I had forgot how dope your drops are the rhyme scheme was genius the opening all the way to the batman ain't no Hercules was just bannanas. The inners threw out just kept u sucked in this might just b om of the month from wat I seen its between u an ex with the unpredictapilities of life with manc an trizzy right behind y'all with two kings. As always its a pleasure reading your drops stay up an sorry for not including hg in my piece it won't happen again sir
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Posted: 16 April 2014 at 5:55am |
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Great imagery! Flowed well. 4/5
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Posted: 16 April 2014 at 9:49am |
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You got mad skills bro, everything was on point. |
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Posted: 16 April 2014 at 9:51am |
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good drop man opening and ending was damn good
"Torch the place while giving all you arsonists the third degree Look at y’all fronting like my articles ain’t worth the read" i liked this line dude
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Posted: 16 April 2014 at 1:58pm |
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Fucking ridiculous. The alliteration through the first half of the verse was just crazy. You already know how good this is man, solid drop as usual.
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Posted: 16 April 2014 at 2:07pm |
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This was heat!! Chain you just come outta know where and drop dope shit. lol Your opening barz were fuckin crazy! Shit was ill bruh...
Your flow was so on point and the ryhme schemes were fire.
Nice to see a Chain drop to slap da shit outta the OM's.
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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 12:24am |
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damn....I love how you disappear for a while and then always come back with something like this. I mean just the classiness of how you set everything up is really just on another level than anyone else. The flow and the smoothness is just so raw and pure. How you kept the same ennding rhyme the whole way thru should never go unnoticed...that is some serious talent my friend....cheers to you
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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 2:45am |
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Getting my Chain fix in, so nasty bro you already know
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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 3:25am |
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FINESSE....if I cud only use one word to describe yur writing style
That wud be it. Damn CHAIN, this was smooth my dude. Every line Seems to glide off one another, like butter....  ....and the way thatYou held yur rhyme scheme and multis together was cool as fuk! Batman aint no Hercules/Happiness was burning up from Babylon to Germany  ......my dude lol....this shit was HARD CHAIN, another Pro drop from youKeep'em come'n HG |
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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 5:46am |
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Made me read it twice. good shit man.
I would quote some stuff but everyone already has. very nice. |
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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 9:15am |
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Back when we was backwards, we babbled insecurely, we…
Found out soon enough that the baggies couldn’t cure the greed Urban bacteria, our baggage was infernal heat Baffled by the cold, turning Bambi’s into curried meat They tried to set us up…and this was said to us: “Love could never trump…a basket full of currency” Such an intelligent and creative way to drop knowledge. You never seem to lack in your skill and for me personally, anytime I finish reading a piece from you, I think, "His skill has no limits". What's baffling is how natural your verses seem to come off and how effortless they appear. You got me feeling like I suddenly attained your skill of rhyme as I read on and start thinking I could easily drop something equally great immediately...until I finish your piece and I lose the skill. Ill as always, sir. |
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 12:21pm |
That's the best way to put it so far. You make the reader feel like you, CHAIN. When you're stylin', the reader is stylin'. When you're invincible, the reader is invincible. When you're the hulk, the reader is the hulk.. until the piece ends and then we're just a bunch of regular old Bruce Banner's again. You give the reader confidence in themselves and that's a crazy thing to do man... it's rare.
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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 3:40pm |
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*shakes head*...shit was ridic! the way you combine everything together, shit you're just operating on a different level technically
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Posted: 25 April 2014 at 4:10am |
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Whaaat? This dude still killing shit this hard?? Damn Rui, you ain't missed a step. This shit was fly as fuck. Rhyming and metaphors still set to kill. That Hercules bar, like damn.
CHAIN fan for life over here, you straight got me inspired and that's been hard to do lately. |
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