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 Topic: Kiki Spirez Vs Tri-ClopsPosted: 07 May 2014 at 9:32pm |
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5 Bars Long Bar Style
Due 72 Hours (Not Say'n We Need That Much Time But I Never Know) Respect To U, And The Voters Lets Keep This Clean I Feel That Since Im Face'n A Top 10 Battler, That We Should Limit The Voters Only People With 100+ Points Should Be Allowed To Vote.. This Way It Ensures Experienced Voters Who Are Known Around The Site Or Would U Like The Points To 300? Let Me Know
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 07 May 2014 at 9:35pm |
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100 suits me, I trust the site, by and large, to be fair. Whether it's new members or old.
I'll get this up in the next half an hour.
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 07 May 2014 at 10:16pm |
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*Trolled his try-out thread, was all for having me as a 'Veteran'. Tri-Clops = T&C = Terms and Conditions.. Nobody reads them. *Said only votes from 100 posts or more, which he doesn't have at the time of setting this up. *Crew is Masters of the Universe.. Uni = University.. *Said people are auto in his crew if they beat someone top 10, if he loses this, then, yeah.. *In Rugby you get a 'Try' by smashing the ball down in a certain area, then you get given a kick to get inbetween posts for extra points. Gonna be weeded quick.. Cos T&C's known for 'nobody reads the shit', A meter ticks on his free parking, cos Ki's dark when the throne rattles, Rolling, cos he chose rules, where HE couldn't vote in his own battles, Newbies dirt, I assume cos he didn't ride through with his doody work, Dude be hurt cos school is the only time he rules through a Uni-Verse, Zoomin' on a fruity burst.. Guys exuding old news cos we can't both lose, 'In if you beat top 10' - Clop only went and got thrown from his own crew! I'll own you.. I've flown through with a 30 minute verse, could be ugly, Smashing down for a Tri, then kicking through posts.. This should be Rugby. |
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Tri-Clops
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Posted: 07 May 2014 at 11:21pm |
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Thought U Was Going Long Bar .. Hope I Dont Get Criticized Just Because The Bar Lengths Are Different
Anyways G/L L. Inc. You Fakes Rhyme'n Soft, In A Battle With Texts, Im Here To Push His Wig Back, Like His Tupee Fly'n Off This Faggot Get'n Crossed Off The Food Chain I Recall, Just Kinda "X-Spirez", Cuz He Another Fruitcake Die'n Off Grab Ya Hurst, Im Here To Expose Who Has The Whacker Verse, It'll Be Clear To All, Whose Never Mastered Words The Difference Between Kiki And Tri When Craft'n Terms?, I Dont Have To Explain What I Just Said Afterwords! Believe Me Its No Homo, But Yolo, So Bro Imma Rape This Ameture, Trick'em Behind The Threads Like The Greatest Matator Ya Rhymes Get Slain With Crafty Words, Im An 8Th Ur Caliber, But Still Got "Ki Fallin All Day Like Tired Sayain Janitors" I Got This KIKI Roast'n In Bulk..... U Got The Weight Around Here, .......But Now U Gunna See Me Post'n And Sulk Im Nothing To His Muscle, But See Me Owning The Hulk, My Verse'll Leave Him With "Slimmer Chants" Than "Ethiopian Cults" About My Crew? Im Glad U Didnt Take The Offer, He "Pussy In Real Life", Dont Hate The Story, Hate The Author You Get'n Slain And Slaughtered, As Im maim'n Honor,.. Closest Thing To Have'n Balls On The Net He Got? Is Play'n Soccer |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 07 May 2014 at 11:36pm |
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That's long to me man, wasn't trying to fuck you over.
GL.
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 08 May 2014 at 2:37pm |
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Kiki
Wanna-be leader sits on a thread I trolled - LOL - He's still believin' it,
Gonna be weeded quick.. Cos T&C's known for 'nobody reads the shit',
Nice opener 3/5
A meter ticks on his free parking, cos Ki's dark when the throne rattles,
Rolling, cos he chose rules, where HE couldn't vote in his own battles,
LOL, ok punch, that is kinda funny tho - 2.5/5
Newbies dirt, I assume cos he didn't ride through with his doody work,
Dude be hurt cos school is the only time he rules through a Uni-Verse,
Nice crew name flip - 3.5/5
Zoomin' on a fruity burst.. Guys exuding old news cos we can't both lose,
'In if you beat top 10' - Clop only went and got thrown from his own crew!
Thought this could have been worded better bruh - 2.5/5
I'll own you.. I've flown through with a 30 minute verse, could be ugly,
Smashing down for a Tri, then kicking through posts.. This should be Rugby.
There is the Ki we know, Solid ending, cool concept and punch - 3.5/5
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L. Inc. You Fakes Rhyme'n Soft, In A Battle With Texts, Im Here To Push His Wig Back, Like His Tupee Fly'n Off
This Faggot Get'n Crossed Off The Food Chain I Recall, Just Kinda "X-Spirez", Cuz He Another Fruitcake Die'n Off
Ok opener, - 2.5/5
Grab Ya Hurst, Im Here To Expose Who Has The Whacker Verse, It'll Be Clear To All, Whose Never Mastered Words
The Difference Between Kiki And Tri When Craft'n Terms?, I Dont Have To Explain What I Just Said Afterwords!
haha, this was nice you did flip his verse which I dont believe is allowed, but nice shot - 3/5
Believe Me Its No Homo, But Yolo, So Bro Imma Rape This Ameture, Trick'em Behind The Threads Like The Greatest Matator
Ya Rhymes Get Slain With Crafty Words, Im An 8Th Ur Caliber, But Still Got "Ki Fallin All Day Like Tired Sayain Janitors"
The "key/Ki" plays are dead, they have been overly done, this would have worked better if you shorten up ya barz, most of your multi's are not even relevant to the punch. 2.5/5
I Got This KIKI Roast'n In Bulk..... U Got The Weight Around Here, .......But Now U Gunna See Me Post'n And Sulk
Im Nothing To His Muscle, But See Me Owning The Hulk, My Verse'll Leave Him With "Slimmer Chants" Than "Ethiopian Cults"
Decent play here, but I think the long bar is hurting you and comes off to wordy. 2.5/5
About My Crew? Im Glad U Didnt Take The Offer, He "Pussy In Real Life", Dont Hate The Story, Hate The Author
You Get'n Slain And Slaughtered, As Im maim'n Honor,.. Closest Thing To Have'n Balls On The Net He Got? Is Play'n Soccer
Nah, this just didnt hit at all..1.5/5
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This was a decent battle for both of you basically droppin off the top. So Props to both of you. With that said, Tri you def have the basics down and if you clean up your verse you can def do some damage. If you are goin for multis make sure they work with the punchline so the build up is there for the harder hit. Try to think outside the box alittle more. Ki, you def have dropped much better but you clowned him on a few things with his crew, the rules of this battle and his crew name. You had more punches landed overall...
MVGT - Kiki
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Rapper T
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Posted: 17 May 2014 at 12:55pm |
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Kiki Spirez Wanna-be leader sits on a thread I trolled - LOL - He's still believin' it, Gonna be weeded quick.. Cos T&C's known for 'nobody reads the shit', This was a good opener, that concept was dope A meter ticks on his free parking, cos Ki's dark when the throne rattles, Rolling, cos he chose rules, where HE couldn't vote in his own battles, This was aiit, that first line could have been developed more towards TC Newbies dirt, I assume cos he didn't ride through with his doody work, Dude be hurt cos school is the only time he rules through a Uni-Verse, This was aiit, nice rhymes and structure to dis the name for the crew, something about it didn't hit as hard as the concept could have but good concept Zoomin' on a fruity burst.. Guys exuding old news cos we can't both lose, 'In if you beat top 10' - Clop only went and got thrown from his own crew! First line of this one could have connected harder but an aiit concept in the second I'll own you.. I've flown through with a 30 minute verse, could be ugly, Smashing down for a Tri, then kicking through posts.. This should be Rugby. This was a rough bar but aiit, concept was a good way to nameplay Tri, the setup could have connected a little more directly but it was aiit as a closer Tri-Clops: L. Inc. You Fakes Rhyme'n Soft, In A Battle With Texts, Im Here To Push His Wig Back, Like His Tupee Fly'n Off This Faggot Get'n Crossed Off The Food Chain I Recall, Just Kinda "X-Spirez", Cuz He Another Fruitcake Die'n Off This read like a filler made up line, then a little more filler with a nameplay and then some more filler in honesty, it was aiit for description but as for where it was directed, most of this was generic Grab Ya Hurst, Im Here To Expose Who Has The Whacker Verse, It'll Be Clear To All, Whose Never Mastered Words The Difference Between Kiki And Tri When Craft'n Terms?, I Dont Have To Explain What I Just Said Afterwords! Like your setup line was a separate statement again so the punch that wasn't hitting that hard didn't really get there any easier Believe Me Its No Homo, But Yolo, So Bro Imma Rape This Ameture, Trick'em Behind The Threads Like The Greatest Matator Ya Rhymes Get Slain With Crafty Words, Im An 8Th Ur Caliber, But Still Got "Ki Fallin All Day Like Tired Sayain Janitors" Similar to first bar and second bar, this one you rape him and compare him to a tired fictional made up dragonball z cleaner type character, this one didn't play out that well I Got This KIKI Roast'n In Bulk..... U Got The Weight Around Here, .......But Now U Gunna See Me Post'n And Sulk Im Nothing To His Muscle, But See Me Owning The Hulk, My Verse'll Leave Him With "Slimmer Chants" Than "Ethiopian Cults" Generic bar once again, your multies are aiit throughout and the concepts are starting but need to be tied together with punchlines About My Crew? Im Glad U Didnt Take The Offer, He "Pussy In Real Life", Dont Hate The Story, Hate The Author You Get'n Slain And Slaughtered, As Im maim'n Honor,.. Closest Thing To Have'n Balls On The Net He Got? Is Play'n Soccer Similar to the first bar again, your style was legit and your rhymes and internal rhymes were there but to battle, read up about how to get beat up and develop your punches so you're settin' 'em up and knockin' 'em out. Stay up, keep elevatin' Even with the shorter bar, MVGT Kiki Spirez 3-0 KO
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Scotty32
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 5:38pm |
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Reptillian's vote is disallowed as he doesn't have 100 points. So it's 2-0 to Kiki.
A reminder (again!) to members. Do not spam battles. Posts should be votes and verses only! |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 9:03pm |
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Fair enough Scotty, I just didn't say anything, cos the dude made the rule, then seemed to want to back off from it..
Can we get a vote that'll either start a comeback, or finish this please? |
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Posted: 28 May 2014 at 11:34pm |
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KiKi
Wanna-be leader sits on a thread I trolled - LOL - He's still believin' it, Gonna be weeded quick.. Cos T&C's known for 'nobody reads the shit', this was a decent opener. set up could have tied into the punch more but nice personal A meter ticks on his free parking, cos Ki's dark when the throne rattles, Rolling, cos he chose rules, where HE couldn't vote in his own battles, this is where expo's are useful. liked this. nice hit Newbies dirt, I assume cos he didn't ride through with his doody work, Dude be hurt cos school is the only time he rules through a Uni-Verse, meh. thought this was forced. didnt like this Zoomin' on a fruity burst.. Guys exuding old news cos we can't both lose, 'In if you beat top 10' - Clop only went and got thrown from his own crew! cool personal. felt you could have ran with this and killed him I'll own you.. I've flown through with a 30 minute verse, could be ugly, Smashing down for a Tri, then kicking through posts.. This should be Rugby this was cool. nice concept felt you could have worded the punch to be more harsh TRI L. Inc. You Fakes Rhyme'n Soft, In A Battle With Texts, Im Here To Push His Wig Back, Like His Tupee Fly'n Off This Faggot Get'n Crossed Off The Food Chain I Recall, Just Kinda "X-Spirez", Cuz He Another Fruitcake Die'n Off i thought this was decent. mostly filler but nice punch Grab Ya Hurst, Im Here To Expose Who Has The Whacker Verse, It'll Be Clear To All, Whose Never Mastered Words The Difference Between Kiki And Tri When Craft'n Terms?, I Dont Have To Explain What I Just Said Afterwords! nice personal here. thought this was cool. but again allot of filer Believe Me Its No Homo, But Yolo, So Bro Imma Rape This Ameture, Trick'em Behind The Threads Like The Greatest Matator Ya Rhymes Get Slain With Crafty Words, Im An 8Th Ur Caliber, But Still Got "Ki Fallin All Day Like Tired Sayain Janitors" cool punch but your set up is wack as fuck I Got This KIKI Roast'n In Bulk..... U Got The Weight Around Here, .......But Now U Gunna See Me Post'n And Sulk Im Nothing To His Muscle, But See Me Owning The Hulk, My Verse'll Leave Him With "Slimmer Chants" Than "Ethiopian Cults" nah..played punch and abunch of filler About My Crew? Im Glad U Didnt Take The Offer, He "Pussy In Real Life", Dont Hate The Story, Hate The Author You Get'n Slain And Slaughtered, As Im maim'n Honor,.. Closest Thing To Have'n Balls On The Net He Got? Is Play'n Soccer kinda played. stretched... overall i was surprised with TRI's verse but his bars were so stretched and all filler. if he just kept it simple and had his set ups tie into the punches he could have took this. Ki's verse was decent was more creative with his punches and his set ups were nice.. Vote Ki for better punches multis flow the whole gig 3-0 KO Ki close this mod
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Posted: 01 June 2014 at 4:51pm |
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KO for Ki
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