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    Posted: 26 October 2015 at 2:29pm
Hi guys
 
I collab'd with Senor Perfecto and Lyricalist on the open mic section called 'Asylum' and wondered if anyone could critique my verse ? I have been writing a lot more lately and just wanted tips on how I can improve or things I should have done differently.
 
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Form: LLLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 October 2015 at 3:25pm
I will drop one or two things about that later
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Form: WWWWLW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 October 2015 at 8:57pm
There is a sticky topic in the open mic specifically around how to get feedback on your verses, creating a thread like this isn't it...

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