Open Mic: [OM KING} Moderates turned Martyrs

This was real nice bro.
A top contender.
Last 3 lines was a sick finish.
Lol @ the Miss scheme tho,


Big ups Carter Deems ... the Leatherback Sea Turtle, and the Red-Eared Slider

against Isaac Knox, no?

Ya. Sick battle. First time I'd seen him, and instant favourite.
Then I went scouting out his other battles and they were shit No-Coast vids with fucked audio.
Makes you appreciate DF&KOTDAFD!

Man, you went in! For political reasons (lmao) I don't agree with your opening statement lol. Voting on that battle actually took some time and thought and I'd be the last one to get swayed by bias. Neek the homie, but if he dropped a ball sack verse I would've told him exactly that. But you the homie too, you just don't realize that yet lmao.

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I just seen this shit.. shit was good though. Flow was good, punchline heavy.

Edited by Stalin - 24 June 2016 at 8:11am

Rut's,shit man you've been busy of late in the OM section..


Right lets address the team,
N start with the jester Neek,
Mr i'll hit you with an e.p if you suggest his text his weak,
Calls it expressive sheik, fuck that hipter shit you ain't impressing me,
Had Best well beat? ha confess it neek,
Nig Endz n Cuba voting was the death of me,
So you gone have to share that murder on a less degree,
The king of a brassic thrown, fag it shown,
You just say the same lame shit in a sarcastic tone,
It don't matter that all the attacks are passive though
We see the same lame brains lit n there gaskets blown,
Like his skill stands alone, son writing the hottest scripts
Like "Wow he gave a compliment, but meant the opposite.. thats hot as shit!"
You got the drift...
Lets be blatant i'm saying its not a gift,

(like the way your going here with Neek,your personals seem to be
focused here,do you still harbour a grudge from your last meet in
that tournament?,your punches and wording is Ripe to be honest,I
like how your getting at him,from your perspective,this segment
came off as smooth,and nice tempo,plus backed up with some factual
contents,which for me just added more weight to this Diss..)


ome of you are friends i get the propz n shit,
I aint trying to take away.. some stuff you dropped's legit
Beats that Pop like cysts, but bro.. all you got is quips,
L.a's Kesha, you got a small arsenal, bitch your not equipped
N Law don't ya'll think i forgot this prick,
If he ain't fishing for compliments, he trynna reel you in,
Everybody's a meal to him...don't ever be real with him,
he just trynna steal a win or steel ya things,
type to squeal on kin, they say time heels a thing,
Anything for Achilles, he got a nerve but Don't Feel A Thing,
This won't be new to him, he'll even say he hates me
If sons mad he''ll comeback with more hyper links than adhd,
Don't even get me onto to that,
Dude claim he sick, this dude just a hyper chondriac,
Theres more of these i really should of mentioned,
Soon as blood steps in the room, causes hypertension,

(loved the wordplay tempo in this segment,which made for effort-
less reading,real nice,shit man do you remember everything?,you
must hit your notebook hard,anyways I also thought you had some
real creative moment here too,Achilles/nerves was Ripe just to
highlight one of many,i'm diggin this,and your certainly takin
this opportunity to Diss the Mods well..nice..)

You can't hide that tension, its like a western...
Lot of killers in the room we'll see who's style is besting
But when the gun draws..we'll see this cunt fall
This John Waynes main scenes v John Wayne Gracy, I'm above Law
Much more, you know ya style aint better than sons,
I just killed you with ya favorite weapon, a hyperthetical gun,
Cuba be quiet sit back
Dude was dope 5 years ago i won't lie its fact
But now it ain't much to brake down cubes n leave him lying flat
Talk that violent chat, you just a lying impostor,
I'll leave you with more exit wounds then the lions den roster,
Russian in for you, i see you wearing 3 lions i'll stomp ya,
You'll a catch a big foot but you ain't denying this monster,
Still you always had great set ups, dude never got rattled,
Classics like "flips, unlimited bars n your first up to bat or else i won't battle"
...Sounds like a guy you don't hassle,
We used to enjoy the cheap shots like editions of razzle,
Back then he posed a threat, dude was king of the castle
Now Cube'll trout pout as he get it, its like shooting fish in a barrel
N Nig u gettin belly shots my scheming hurting ya core,
Mr hundred rhymes without reason, merging with law,
Brothers in no shows, theses heathens dirt on the floor,
Nothing funny about that a tall dude, steven Merchent of war,
Same nig different day like i heard it before...
C'mon Nig ya goon, so high you tryin to sniff the moon,
Ears tuned to dog whistles n various hits from doom,
Can't stick to one drug, but lately been missing glue
Hit's the juice...a few e's plus a doobie...he got a smoothie of his missing youth,
Gets on the keyboard, like to throw a miss or two,
I say that but you know its more than one miss or two,
I spoke to one of ya misses n that miss saw two,
One fell flat on top of him n now that miss sore too!
Hit more dudes? Nah Art n scott can live the grief,
It's a hard pill to swallow but I killed 'em with e's,
Delivered to me, like Isis I came to kill the regime,
This Killin machine just cut the fucking head off this pyramid scheme!

(Again here in this segment solid,your flow/wordplay/punches/personals/
well everything really,you have been constant throughout this verse,I
also think you've got some of the aggression out now too..lol,.this
is a well written and presented verse that also screams vent,vent vent
that harboured your frustrations,solid..)

Overal although a long piece,the tempo kept it moving well,plus the
lengths suggests you needed this to be said so to speak,i liked it
from a neutrals point,from start to finish this piece just breezed
along..good work *nods head Ripe*..peace.





Edited by Crimson Juice - 24 June 2016 at 7:25pm