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    Posted: 10 January 2005 at 4:03pm
  • First to 5 EXPLAINED votes wins (explanations to be judged by me), 3-0 is a KO
  • all verses are 4 bars each person, (so a total of 8bars each team)
  • Crew votes will not be allowed when a team consist of members from the same crew
  • No Flips/feeding - since its blind drops
  • Posting Verses: see Tournament Rules to find out how to submit your verse
  • Votes: Votes must be judged on the team as a whole, if you feel one member wasnt as good, this must reflect your vote.
  • Deadline: Sunday 16th January 2005 12 midnight (GMT)
  • Non-Brit's please be aware the deadline is BritishTime, and not your local time
Team A = -Orion- & King Jehu
Team G = Senor Perfecto & 20theTruth
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 January 2005 at 6:50pm
Orion & Jehu:

(INFO: 20's name is Warren, warrant-ripped. He was gonna be on a track with Hard Target, but HT's label said he wasn't good enough. Bold = Orion)

Yo Stalin, Game, We gunnin' fa you, haha... OK, let's dispose of these... check it

20 the crew's weakest, laugh at this beaten fool tryin'
It's ironic, my punches' substance leave The Truth lyin'
Uncouth violence'll leave ya scarred wit' strife
See Warren-tripped so he'll be behind my bars for life (owned)

Perfecto and I can relate... I'm the cruelest
Let's do this, where's your crew list? You're basically crew-less!
I bruise kids and prove it, check 20's blue lips
and truth is, well, orion's taking care of the dufus...

Rip this cat, ain't shit to rap so fuck ya tracks, bitch
Think you hot audio, but Teezy's label SNUBBED YOUR WACK SHIT!!!
You talk a big game but you always murked n' wrecked son
Who have you beaten that's good? No further questions...

Yeah, but Perfecto would still lose to the weakest renegade ranked
cause we've beaten him more times that we did frank
You've been spanked and we won't let you get one vote
Our punchlines set up and executed, while you've become jokes

Biatch

Perfecto & 20theTruth

Yo...

This fat Dominican faggot had never shagged a guy of mixed-race,
Until he wished for a shooting star to shoot cum all over his face,
Now the Fuck-King's addicted to how Orion's dick tastes,
And for his next hit... he must do whatever his Leader dictates,
I diss fakes... like celebrities... real Stars and Royalty,
Eight hard hits with all your energy from steel bars can't foil me,
If you're wondering how I know so much about your abusive past and your youth...
It's cos I've got insider-information about your crew... and that's TheTruth...

[Je-Who]

Get off Pun's Dick, Spick, i heard his schaft started chaffing
Sodomize his asshole - so that's why he's "Big O", how's his juices tastin'?
The fagat tries to produce but all you can do is make loops ya fruit*
You from BX? Well i'll put dem holez in ya da size of Hula-hOOps.

[Orion]

I'll check ya then wreck ya, you got ya Fat Dominican Ho next to ya
You beatin' us? Is like Frank tryna drop his dsylexia [Not Happenin']
Y'all not LA's champs anymore - Like Kobe and Shaq...
So fuck galactic royalty - i'll take pleasure whippin' this fat fuck and half-black

*loves Big Pun
*All he uses his Fruity Loops the for producing shit
*Jehu's Dominican...
*Galactic Royalty = Orion [space-n-shit] and King [royalty]
*Jehu's fat and -Orion- is only Half-Black...

Adios...

I wrote the first bit... 20 wrote the [Je-who] and [Orion] bit and the explanations... and I wrote the Adios... with emoticon...

Adios...



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 January 2005 at 7:03pm
Vote = OnJ

Felt they were more creative and had harder hittin punches...The 2bars and switch thing worked nicely for y'all, I didnt like Orions openin 2bars but afta that u threw sum nice punches...good personal on 20, where on the flip side I thought 20 and Perfecto had mainly flimsy personals...I liked Perfectos closer but the rest was kinda cheesy 2 me, and yeh 20s punches were doin it 4 me at all really

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 January 2005 at 8:03pm

Renegades- Orion... This was nice, i guess....the first bar was alright. I liked the warranty line, just because it was worplay and personaly laced together. Nice Punchline. Also No other questions finisher on ur half was pretty good, that was a bit of a slap to the face. jehu..ur verse was nicely flowed off orion's cos ur style is very similiar. Your flow was totaly nice, constant and didn't mismatch ur multies The finisher kinda lacked it.

20 and perfecto-perfecto...ur vere had a brutal style to it, this was a viscious style verse and i like it, i was rooting on that but the sex punchlines let it down. They've got immature. a long time ago..they aint interseting. Ur verse lacked overall complexity like wordplay and similies. 20, this was pretty decent too, i liked the kobe and shaq line. The rest of the verse didn't match up to that line tho, u didn't pack as much heat. Good work to 20 and perfecto on researching ht personals.

Vote: Renegades, because they had more solid punches, creative lines, complexity and a nice flow. Peace

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 January 2005 at 8:21pm

^ they pretty much sum'd it up

Orion and Jehu came wit all the shit 20 & Perfecto didnt.. better Punches/Wordplay/Personals... Flow was good from both Teams... Senor came better than 20... 20 came aiight i guess... i jus aint feelin' his battles much, no more, as he simple mos-a the time...

Vote/ O.J

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 January 2005 at 6:04am
orion and jehu win by KO

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