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 Topic: How to create a Punchline ?Posted: 30 September 2006 at 1:49pm |
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First step: is.....your thinking process....expand your mind further out to things you wouldn't ever think of before but knew about it like 3 sec's ago.
Second step: Try to add key-words and phrases that the reader will understand from the begining, then use it into a humorous way or well personal attempt.
Third step: House-hold-Punchlines.....for example a line from cassidy..."I"m off the hook like a cordless-phone "< now.. that was pretty simple yes....but niccas was gonna nuts when they first heard that.
Final step: ^ I should you a regurlar household-punch example...but lets get alittle deeper within a creative term....another example by Murder Mook...."I'll have u hooked to machines, where it sounds like trucks backin-up" < damn....not thats like beyond creative and will have you think on some other shit....Well the main point is just expand your mind worldwide and dont be afraid to come with a wack line because it's ur elevation stage in process for being acknowledge as 1 of the greats like alexander lol....chea
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 11:10am |
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like this
u should catch the dift like addicts on chronic
my mind is blown worst than hypnotic
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I resemble the tooth fairy by the way i am taking your crown!!
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 12:22pm |
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 1:44pm |
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what do u mean no???
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I resemble the tooth fairy by the way i am taking your crown!!
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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 1:46pm |
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Because that punchline didn't make any sense...you're almost dissing yourself...
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Posted: 31 October 2006 at 11:47pm |
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ooo lol,,, what happned if a re wote it like this
u an''t shit without the ingredents in hypnotic
ur mind is blown out worst than addicts on chronic |
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Posted: 01 November 2006 at 11:47am |
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Yeah, that's slightly better...I'd consider rewording the setup though as I can't get a meaning from it
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Posted: 02 November 2006 at 5:35am |
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don't know how to do that. and if i were to gives clues to the meaning i would drop a verse before that then drop the punchline |
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Posted: 02 November 2006 at 5:41am |
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you cant get addicted to chronic like nicotine etc... look at veterans battle verses.. id read ikons or orions if u wanna see punches
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Posted: 02 November 2006 at 10:54am |
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4660&KW=Perfecto
This is also a fine example... |
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Posted: 04 November 2006 at 2:33am |
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damn that battle is dope
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Posted: 29 December 2006 at 1:35pm |
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so its like ........leave you left like a machine out of power...
leave you without an umbrella in a shower?
basic i know but is that it ? |
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Dominance beyond your grasp
That life you talk, I walk the path/ I rip lames, give cause for casts I spit flames, like rocket packs |
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Posted: 29 December 2006 at 4:16pm |
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orion was overrated! lol
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Insert something rappy here
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Posted: 29 December 2006 at 8:21pm |
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king jehu can u help me on punches and multis
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Posted: 29 December 2006 at 8:30pm |
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If your willing to learn i'm always willing to help...
Holla @ Unorthodox.. My MSN is on my profile.. Edited by Junior Shade - 29 December 2006 at 8:31pm |
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Posted: 29 December 2006 at 8:56pm |
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yer are you online now mate ?
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Dominance beyond your grasp
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Posted: 04 March 2007 at 3:23pm |
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lmfao i forgot i made this thread...and never replied back from the comments hmm....well besides looking at vets old lines....some of ya'll need to peep some audio cats who do punchlines a lot.....hmm i say the best from philly holds that part down lol..."Coughs" cyssero < lol
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Posted: 04 March 2007 at 4:41pm |
Oh no you didn't motherfucker...
This nigga mad 'cuz no one used one of his battles as an example... yeaaa what?!
Haha... Sparta tho... well done on resurrectin' that one... it was good... dunno if it's the best to showcase PUNCHLINES, maybe to showcase long, aggressive verses...'cuz we did dislike each other... but straightup punchlines, I had a fair few but that other guy doesn't really do punchlines
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Posted: 04 March 2007 at 4:55pm |
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^Yeah, maybe...there were some really nice hits from both of ya though(ICS one had me hooting, btw), probably enough for the dude who wanted help to be getting on with
Edited by sp�rta - 04 March 2007 at 5:04pm |
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Posted: 26 March 2007 at 1:59pm |
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nigga you pussy cept u missen da slict section/
ill take da life outta u sumthen like c-sections/ |
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"i take da life outta you like a c-section"
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