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 Topic: 3 minsPosted: 11 September 2007 at 11:15am |
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is what it is........ prewritonio
wont take cheap shots, that will make him cry n� buckle ill just leave �K silent�, but not with my knuckles kay�s got no money, it�s like theres a cheque drought cause at his dead end job, the only time he get�s checked out I shouldn�t waste my time battling someone I despise and don�t respect cause his topicals are easier to predict, than sunrise and sunset his topicals are weak, yet he�s claming he�s the hardest kay couldn�t �draw you in�, if he was a sketch artist |
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 11:35am |
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Decent shit. Dunno about the 3 minutes... but that's irrelevant.
Couple decent plays. The "sketch artist" an' "K silent" plays were probably your best. Keep it up.
Curious now.... You two got problems or you jus' fuckin' around?
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Spent six months hurtin' who I shoulda been supportin'/
But I was nervous, I was stupid, I was pushin' for abortion/ |
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 11:48am |
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it took 3 minutes to write that? damn...you slow.
Anyway, was a decent verse, if short, some of the shit was pretty good play-wise. flow was aite. peace.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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mcwoods
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 12:06pm |
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na no problems haha, we'll im just messing... gives me summit to write about..
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 3:21pm |
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I don't get the whole 'I wrote this in x minutes, aren't I cool' that seems to be going around these days...no-one cares how long it takes, only whether its good or not...3 mediocre bars and one good one (sunset)...stay at it
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Kay B
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 5:45pm |
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wont take cheap shots, that will make him cry n� buckle
ill just leave �K silent�, but not with my knuckles Nice play, though iv seen it before but not on this site so here's its origonal, multi was also off my OWN knuckles woulda made the multisbetter  kay�s got no money, it�s like theres a cheque drought cause at his dead end job, the only time he get�s checked out Not bad though not a personal hit as im not even checkout trained at work lol i also earn quite a good wage I shouldn�t waste my time battling someone I despise and don�t respect cause his topicals are easier to predict, than sunrise and sunset Multi was off at the end, the first line had an extra syllable though the play wasnt too bad iv seen better, also my topicals arnt predictable to everyone just smart people lol his topicals are weak, yet he�s claming he�s the hardest kay couldn�t �draw you in�, if he was a sketch artist Seen the play before and i also don't claim to be the hardest...so it was ok but didn't hit too hard Overall not bad, iv seen better from you i can quite believe it only took three minutes cause if it took longer id be thinking wtf....but overall it wasn't bad [ego]mine was better [/ego] Edited by Kay B - 11 September 2007 at 5:46pm |
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mcwoods
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 6:09pm |
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lol, thanks for the breakdown everyone
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 7:16pm |
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. ..Next time take more than three minutes Last reply dropped u down a level leave you there for good ...Leave this victorious battle axed, as i fuckin tear up woods "Kay im better", See now you gone n said it to insult me Claiming your doper?...So why'd I have to edit your multis? I'll beat him so bad, he'll think he is on an acid trip Woods coming hard? please, he's even lacking a flaccid dick Fuck'in prick, two victory's and suddenly ya heads startin to swell Picking up a decent record...shame u didn't start it that well ...Again..Fuck you Edited by Kay B - 11 September 2007 at 7:17pm |
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 7:38pm |
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Kay you asked me to feed yours so il concentrate on yours...first bar is original was feeling it set the tempo nice little bar...second bar was aight a little personal in there..worked in nicely...3rd bar was funny lmao had me laugh the multies were dope...and the closer was dope imo...nice hit..solid..overall no really downfall here..nice verse man |
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The original comeback kid
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 8:31pm |
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Kay, nice rhymes...good plays...funny verse was feelin it...edit multies line was funny...good shit
Uhhh...you too woody lol |
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 10:28pm |
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Whats with all the beef.. cant we just put it at an end
nah...
With me ya'll stepped into hell, the frunt entrance
Cuz ima put an end to this like my first sentance
Dont tempt this, i'll hit harder then 2 mike tysons
Take ya bitches to school like i had my class 4 license
With my writings i kill, You dont wana step to the plate
Cuz i'll take kay down like when he trys to masterbate
im extremly bored.. 2 second key
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 10:42pm |
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haha decent man decent..
More predictable than sun set and sun rise was cool i thought haha.. overall it was nice.. keep it up woods |
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 10:47pm |
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Ice ice baby
All right stop collaborate and listen Ice is back with my brand new invention Something grabs a hold of me tightly Flow like a harpoon daily and nightly Will it ever stop yo I don't know Turn off the lights and I'll glow To the extreme I rock a mic like a vandal Light up a stage and wax a chump like a candle Dance go rush to the speaker that booms I'm killing your brain like a poisonous mushroom Deadly when I play a dope melody Anything less than the best is a felony Love it or leave it you better gain weight You better hit bull's eye the kid don't play If there was a problem yo I'll solve it Check out the hook while my DJ revolves it Ice ice baby vanillla (x4) Now that the party is jumping With the bass kicked in and the vegas are pumpin' Quick to the point to the point no faking I'm cooking MC's like a pound of bacon Burning them if you ain't quick and nimble I go crazy when I hear a cymbal And a hi-hat with a souped up tempo I'm on a roll and it's time to go solo Rollin' in my 5.0 With my rag-top down so my hair can blow The girlies on standby waving just to say hi Did you stop no I just drove by Kept on pursuing to the next stop I busted a left and I'm heading to the next block The block was dead Yo so I continued to A1A Beachfront Avenue Girls were hot wearing less than bikinis Rockman lovers driving Lamborghinis Jealous 'cause I'm out getting mine Shay with a guage and Vanilla with a nine Reading for the chumps on the wall The chumps acting ill because they're so full of eight balls Gunshots rang out like a bell I grabbed my nine all I heard were shells Falling on the concrete real fast Jumped in my car slammed on the gas Bumpet to bumper the avenue's packed I'm trying to get away before the jackers jack Police on the scene you know what I mean They passed me up confronted all the dope fiends If there was a problem yo I'll solve it Check out the hook while my DJ revolves it Take heed 'cause I'm a lyrical poet Miami's on the scene just in case you didn't know it My town that created all the bass sound Enough to shake and kick holes in the ground 'Cause my style's like a chemical spill Feasible rhymes that you can vision and feel Conducted and formed This is a hell of a concept We make it hype and you want to step with this Shay plays on the fade slice like a ninja Cut like a razor blade so fast other DJs say damn If my rhyme was a drug I'd sell it by the gram Keep my composure when it's time to get loose Magnetized by the mic while I kick my juice If there was a problem yo I'll solve it Check out the hook while Shay revolves it Ice ice baby vanilla Ice ice baby (oh-oh) vanilla Ice ice baby vanilla Ice ice baby vanilla ice Yo man let's get out of here Word to your mother Ice ice baby too cold Ice ice baby too cold too cold (x2) Ice ice baby keyed this in 23.45 seconds. |
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Posted: 11 September 2007 at 11:43pm |
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LMFAO
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Posted: 12 September 2007 at 7:07am |
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Sad thing is those are the dopest lyrics mackie's ever posted
Edited by Kay B - 12 September 2007 at 7:08am |
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mcwoods
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Posted: 12 September 2007 at 9:50am |
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Kay used to be good, but now he�s slipping ill skin you alive, cause my rhymes gory cause I tell a story�. HE tells a situation he don�t know how to draw people in or how to keep im yeah they�re written good, but they leave people sleeping he can rhyme shit well, but that aint what topicals about its about a sick story with turns, make people try and figure it out see I can always rhyme better, maybe get better flow wise too but your born with story telling, and I aint inside you! see you can write it perfectly, but if it aint about shit youll lose it again easy, try and understand that dick next time think OUTSIDE the box, have a fucking idea that�s creative so im the master.. ill teach you on msn� fuck it, ill even grade u |
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Kay B
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Posted: 12 September 2007 at 6:02pm |
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Kay used to be good, but now he�s slipping
his topical�s? you don�t need a glass ball to predict� em Do you wanna repeat that second line any more times? |
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Posted: 12 September 2007 at 6:07pm |
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im just making the content of my verses more predictable than your topicals.... (inflates head)
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Posted: 12 September 2007 at 6:08pm |
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c'mon Kay... don't take that shit!!  ... shit is too funny...Edited by 2smooth - 12 September 2007 at 6:08pm |
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Posted: 12 September 2007 at 6:16pm |
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lol, tbh i aint one for tha "fuck ya'll's" or tha shit talking.... kay just been catching that hump lately cause i lyrically raped him twice in his best area....
and because he caught the hump ie prewritten jibs/big head jibs? .... it got me to making comments/purely jokes... ie that lyrical rape comment a few seconds ago.... just messing with him that i beat him.... just for kicks lol... then he takes tha jokes tha wrong way, saying i got a big head ( which is just stupid ) and then few verses back and forth.... ill happily battle him in any and every format.. |
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