Open Mic: Castles on Quicksand

i been in love, and y'know sometimes the feelin really sucks
when ya give someone ya heart ya let'em beat'n leave ya fucked
opened up t'the pain, it's like ya weakened in ya trust
makes ya future look bleak, coz evil demons feindin lust
ya see this shit will manifest even in teh sweetest chick
ayo she'll start off as an angel, then become a bleedin bitch
coz girls is awesome it's true, but yo don't fall for it dude
call relationships dope? fuck that i'll call it a noose
take a glance at her eyes, she trappin mans with her lies
when she dances makes her ass shake like the answer t'life
yo that shit is hypnotic, she like "ya want it, you got it"
then a few months down the line she ruunin off with ya pocket
so ya left broke, ya broken hearted'n stressed so
ya stealin jus t'eat until ya start t'feel klepto
respect bro, it's what ya want but you won't get it
when she's taken all ya money'n fucked you up you'll be left quick

y'know sometimes i'm paralyzed by pain..........

too many times in my past reside inside my brain
times of drug fueled insanity, sickness, nighttime strain
chicks who tore my soul t'pieces, it's like my lifetimes drained
y'try t'build yaself up, n'peeps just knock ya down
put yaself out on a record they jus mock ya sound
sometimes it's hard man, t'put yaself on the line
show them who ya really are it's all spelled out in a rhyme
never doubtin ya mind, but peeps is tryna sow hurt
try t'rip you into pieces when they find it don't work
y'gotta fight man, n'push t'make ya shit happen
try ya best t'make it work'n take ya place in this pattern
in the tapestry of life, we weave our thread t'the whole
when other lives'll cross the loom it's like a test fa ya soul
will they knock you out of synch or will ya tread the same line
or will the picture unfold as to young hearts are entwined....

y'know some say emotions is fa blokes who is weak dudes
but each tune i write is all t'show what i been through
some peeps'll spin the line that life is jus' what ya make it
but how d'ya choose t'prosper when ya options is basic

thats just sick as fuck.