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Topic: 6 by 6...Posted: 01 November 2007 at 5:23pm |
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You cant get wit it, i flow wit the sickest
punches so sadistic they dont hit, they whip it so lick it, kick the shots like beckam hit it, call me jedi the way my thoughts have u lifted or wicked, like witches, which is y im so gifted sift through the make shift and take this, sickness..... my metas are crazy like verbal asylum Nails in ya coffin, so sharp go and file em words like ta play like hide n seek, go find em bitch my raps are nasty, u wont wanna be behind em, let it loose against you fools and i would have to sign em cuz if i was to be verbal he would be barred-- so confine him.... Set a savage--neva practice whats magic your verses lack it, so pack it u cant compete wit the generals tactic, i spit lyrical matics but that fact is My metas make you shit like lax-atives so relax a bit n jus shit wen i max da hits Im on my own neva needed no masters neva prayed as a kid cuz i dont fuck wit pastors im the one true god, yes i fatherd you bastards a martyr now, harder now from erectin plasters you niggas fake i diss u actors wit lyrcial disasters my spritual asters lay siege inside, like cytoplasm blasters Motherfucka i go raw, lay free wit- no- protection leave u trapped like saw and- maybe- still -textin you bested, im movin up and you still have no direction Words so vile a pile of venom could bring my ressurection leave myself infected wit sickeness without inspection you ni66as biters, look in the mirror n see my reflection Bitch i chop up woods wit ease call me da beaver my words murderous but i neva leave da cleaver my verses bring mircales to make u fakes believers im the star reciever on the field relievein u relievers my sports mixed up wit like punches n metas, still an achiever Im so fuckin cold better yet im so damn hot...fuck it im jus a fever -------------------------------------------- 6 by 6 i finish wit 12 but fuck bars-- i do lines i guess u can say coke owns-- these true crimes 2 down 10 ta go like dogfights-- wit blue mines meanin chamelon rhymes bring down n slew minds im through--you ni66as a joke--a fools rhyme im the father of you tools call me tim from tool time you mules are hybrid...but mostly found, a jack-ass you cant stomach my punches cause then you pass gas so say your sick and i'll believe it and call your acts ass try n mirror me but i aint you--cant see through black glass Even wit oscars you dudes garbage, so ya raps, trash that (oscar the grouch) im the fuckin king of frees, so get at me n i'll jus lash back Edited by -Sεt- - 01 November 2007 at 6:29pm |
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 5:36pm |
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Lol...Jedi Bar Was HOT. This Weren't Too Shabby Man, Some Sick Lines In Here An Flowed Well. Gotta Say Tho, I Aint A Big Fan Of Your Rhymescheme In The First 6 Verses, Was Cool In The 7th One Tho. I'm Jus Picky When It Comes To Rhymes, This Was Hot Tho Man.
Good Way To Finish Off, 6 by 6 Thing Was A Cool Idea. Good To See You Spittin Again...Keep It Up |
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 5:40pm |
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not everyone can have the same rhymescheme...then that would be boring
lol (i already told u that though lol)............thx for feed homie
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 6:09pm |
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6 by 6 i finish wit 12 but fuck bars-- i do lines
i guess u can say coke owns-- these true crimes That definitely hit me on point. I like that. But, I was always fuckin' that OTHER white bitch. Miss Crystal, feel me? Coke's okay, but I'd prefer throwin' it into a pot w/ bakin' soda an' lettin' Jimmy crack corn, ya know? That'll get you money. ANYWAY!!!!!
I liked it. Piece was pretty decent. Expected nothin' less.
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Spent six months hurtin' who I shoulda been supportin'/
But I was nervous, I was stupid, I was pushin' for abortion/ |
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 6:12pm |
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lol ya im not as good as you lol
thx for feed bro, and did u not get my pm? |
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 6:14pm |
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Yea, but you're fuckin' PM box is filled up.
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Spent six months hurtin' who I shoulda been supportin'/
But I was nervous, I was stupid, I was pushin' for abortion/ |
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 6:16pm |
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I thought this was a cool read...Was feelin a couple lines and i can see ya improving as long as you keep active and droppin stuff like this...BTW, my fav. verses were the openin one and the last one don't know why though they just stood out more in my mind...
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Posted: 01 November 2007 at 6:17pm |
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thx for feed homie...i'll try to drop more....jus been busy ya kno lol
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Posted: 04 November 2007 at 7:36pm |
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This was good, a nice read...content wasnt amazin but flowed/rhymed well, stay at it
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Posted: 04 November 2007 at 8:27pm |
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Jedi bar was dope..was feeling this showing some good promise keep writing dude
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The original comeback kid
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