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DressToKill 
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 Topic: FreestylePosted: 01 January 2008 at 11:01pm |
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Dress Is Back,These Kids Must Of Lost Their Logic
My Mouths A Talkin Moshpit That Makes Me Pocket Profits
The City Never Sleeps,So I Ride Solo Knowin Men Are Fiends
Yall Remeber Me?Smart Rhyming Thats Set Into Clever Skeems
Im A Low Maintenance,Heavy Hitter With No Patients
My Flow Spins On A Set Axis,That's Always Switchin Rotations
With A Tone So Contagious,That If You Take It You'll Die On It
Damn With A Sickness Like This Your Medical Bill Will Sky Rocket
I Been On This Rap Shit For About 2 Years But Managed To Capitalize
Left But Now Im Back On The Rise,Throwin Down That Crack In A Rhyme
But Its Not Made For Feinds,Im That Rap Star That Made Your Dream
About Going To Create More,See?Its More Addicting Than Takin Morphine
Was Bred And Born,Into This Breed Then Was Givin A Pen And Horns
Greatness Was Made Onto The Page With Every Setence Formed
Spewing Horrid Metaphors,Chokin Kids With A Mics 10 Inch Cord
Then My Mind Grew Larger,And My Brains Engines Roared
G2G For Now..Might Add Later
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DressToKill
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Posted: 02 January 2008 at 10:56am |
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No feed what so ever..?
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ProFound
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Posted: 02 January 2008 at 11:12am |
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you feed mine il feed yours?
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Freeda5thDawg
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Posted: 02 January 2008 at 3:30pm |
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"But Its Not Made For Feinds,Im That Rap Star That Made Your Dream
About Going To Create More,See?Its More Addicting Than Takin Morphine"
this lines messed up da perfect scheme...and was kinda weak... now that that's set aside, the rest was nice...multis were delivered nice, the rhyme scheme was definitely well applied...ya opener was my fav cuz it flowed real koo...medical bill line was koo and captilize/crak in the rhyme lines were nicely put...enjoyable overall, nice key man... |
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DressToKill
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Posted: 02 January 2008 at 4:19pm |
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Thanks free and yes Nick you idiot I will..
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Fatal
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Posted: 02 January 2008 at 9:14pm |
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I was feelin this...
Im A Low Maintenance,Heavy Hitter With No Patients
My Flow Spins On A Set Axis,That's Always Switchin Rotations
^Dope Overall very nicely done....flow was nice throughout and had some good lines...keep up
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DressToKill
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Posted: 02 January 2008 at 11:16pm |
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Thanks Fatal
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Posted: 03 January 2008 at 2:52pm |
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flow was cool...think it was best in the br fatal mentioned, IMO...was a cool piece..nothing standout but cool none the less...i dont like some of your multis but its part of your style so what can ya do
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Posted: 03 January 2008 at 10:44pm |
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Cant please everyone eh?But thanks for the feed
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