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    Posted: 06 February 2008 at 12:19am
smokin that chronic like Dre was producin
immediately rappin yo fuck introducin
my skills and intelligence got battlers losing
call out a rapper and have him refusing
cops wanna get me, what excuse they using?
they call it first degree verbally abusing
it's confusing, this rookie got mad skills
you aint harder with penis enhancement pills
cause most of you are posers fake stories composers and expositors
talk all shit you want and hide behind PC monitors
so like Osama I'm terrorizing and bombing
these noise makers that think they're something
ashes to ashes, i'll do you nothing to nothing
do like Canibus and autograph your coffins
don't say i ask for it, i'm just kickin the real
like my homeboy Guru did on verse one of Mass Appeal

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This was a pretty basic verse. Work on ya content and rhymes. Check out some verses by our established members in our Open Mic section or battles in our Battle section to see what good verses look like.
 
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