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    Posted: 07 February 2008 at 3:53am
I'll give this rankin' thing a shot ...

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Didn't Feel Like Gettin' Told That I'm a Newbie Tonight

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Like Dominos I'll Knock You Flat And Yell "Adios!"

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Like I Washed My Dick Before I Fucked The Prom Queen

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And Leave Ya Askin' Questions Like This Fuckin' JO$H Kid.


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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote SinniX Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 February 2008 at 4:08am
Shit I can't read rules obviously....get this is closed, haha
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You know what your doing...flow was on point...work on ya punchlines more
 
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i say low ama....  your punches are corny... and very simple... work on those... 
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That was the other thing, I didn't read the rules so I didn't know it was supposed to be a battle verse, haha.  I fail.
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