Topical Tyranny: Round 2 - Battle 2 : Votes

verse 1 was ok nothing special the fact it was a true story added something to it but flow seemed choppy imo and no lines really stood out, the general story was ok and i did keep reading but i wasn't too excited about what i was reading...not a bad by all means, just not great

Verse 2 dope verse really liked it, general story was dope and the message in the piece was real nice vocab was used well and i enjoyed reading it.

Verse 3 Dope story loved the way the guys actions just twisted at the end he went from being calm to completely losing it and becoming preety much a crazy motherfucker! Interesting read also holds the message about not holding in what you feel cause one day it'll all come out in the wrong place at the wrong time and the consequences could be fatal...dope drop

Verse 4 Nice story, vocab was nice only thing i didn't really like was the line length really fucked with the flow here imo, i had to keep stopping and starting may of been how i was reading it but flow just seemed choppy, apart from that it was a nice verse and again a good message inside the drop

Overall this was a nice battle 2 dope verse's one real good one and one that was just good, verse 2 was a clear winner in this imo i just felt the story more, my second vote was a toss up between verse 3 and 4, both had good story's but i had to go with verse 3 for the reason stated above about the flow seeming choppy in verse 4 so the verse didnt have the full effect on me that it could of had...dope battle

Verse 2 & Verse 3 gmv

Verse 1
Alright read, flow was okay, and the fact it was a true story made it a bit more interesting. Main problem with this one is it didn't grab me in the beginning and draw me in, made the verse boring for me. Just felt like it was missing a certain something

Verse 2
This verse was really dope, very good use of vocabulary and flow was top notch. The way it was written made me wanna see how it turned out, and the ending was a nice touch too. Really not much too more for me to say, dope drop

Verse 3
Another dope read, flow was on point, and good use of multis. Only thing is I felt the second half wasn't as strong as the first, lacked the emotion imo. But none the less it was a good read, and you did your thing.

Verse 4
A good story, but the long lines killed you. That and wasn't feeling the wording too much. It was an interesting take on the topic, but the bad flow was what mainly killed you. Made it really hard to follow or get a good feel for the story.

Vote goes to Verse 2 just an all around better drop than the others.