Spit for Rank: The Lyrical Rapist

I've seen your current verse, its NOVICE...lol

Hes not lying..your bars are stetched to fuck which means no flow..you have the concept of wordplay and multies down..but tbh you should get ranked about high novice..but if you can fix your structure you should move up to ama in a quick minute..no one cares how long it took you to write the verse thats just considered stupid on your part for not taking your time..adjust or put up with the critisism

So Much..For Doing Bars Properly I Guess'd..

(My Old Battle -From Another Site) --
Dude Name I Was Battling Was..CinCi.Nati.Boy

"Since He/Cinci" Felt My Punches I'll Leave This "Boy" Rattled In Two-States, You Up To "Bat Man"?? No Ones Feeling The "Joker" Like I'm Battlin 2-Face,
Ask Your Wifey Will She Catter-To-A-Bruised-Face, Cause With These Punches, I'll Have Your Plans "Crumbling Backwords" Like Tornadoes-On-A-News-Chase.

(Cinci-Nati-Cincinati-Where He's From-His Name)
(2 Face/Joker-Always Saying Rhymes-But No One Likes Them)
(Tornadoes- News Chase It)

When I Jab A Slight-Bruise-Iz-Felt,..You Saying "UnTouchable Izn't Hot"?? I'll Put Your "Brain In Ya Hand" So You Can Keep Ya Thowts-To-Ya-Self,.
You Not A Snitch??,.. I'll Put The "Ice Pick" To Your Chess, And Make Your Alzheimers-Melt,. Put Your "EyeBalls In Your Pockets" You Can't CryOut-For-Help,

Your "Week/WeakLing"s Punches Wouldn't Be Fealt If You Wrote-For/Four-Months, You'll Still Get "Ate/Eight Up" Like A Couple Lesbians Having Sex-Wit-Some-Queer-Chumps,
Ya Not Getting Arrested By Cops,..But Your Luck-Ends-Here-Punk, Beef With This Stupid Fuck-I-Fear-Non, Cause "Nati Iz Pussy" Don't Need To See "Bars" To Make "Tears/Teirs-Cum/Come"..

(Four/For-Doubled-Eight/Ate)
(Tiers/Tears- Cry When He See's Bars-Jail)

(IGHT ENOUGH OF THAT) -FREESTYLE..

Put My Soul On Pages, Az I Renact Greatness Dissin Come's With No Price, Set The Thread To Blaze, Feel The Hunger That I Am Enraged With??,.
My Talent Embodies The Lost Art, That Romans Left The Hollow Intinties Sacred. Speakin In HyroGliphic Terms, Ya Skillz Was Never In The Prophecy So Save It.
Can't Stop The Dynasty Of Amazement, Your Rhymes Sublimenaly Wouldn't Phaze Scripts, Soccumb To Your Wack Writes Izn't The Part Of My Nature,
Dieing WithOut A Probable Cause, Your Mind Iz Commited To Failure, Can't Flip The Morality Of Your Fake Tricks, Embedded The Corpse Of A Lame Bitch,.

Path Of The Great..

How Do I Set My Mind Level To Flourish To The Top??,.. I Know, Put Letters In In These Threads And Slowly Watch Them Drop, This Iz The Truth Don't Need Ya Props
If Your Name Don't Involve Numbers Than Your Not On My Watch, Snatch The Thorough Breds Down, Now I Begin My War And Climb To The Top..
Leaving Memories Faded As Your Brain Iz Declined From A Glock, My Mistress/Mis Stress Iz My Bitches, So My Rival??,. Ya Not, Even Lucifer's Hands Couldn't Servive On My Clock
Instead Of A Bliss Death, Ya Only FullFilment Iz Hell, Clean The Floor With Ya Corpse Using Ya Torso As A Mop,..

Down Fall

Enlighten My Presence With The Grace An Fame Of Which I Proclaim, If You Took A Picture From My Life You Would See A Perfect Frame,
Bodies Of Water You'd Have To Catch Me, Serpants Wouldn't Be Up To Playing Those Games, Stay In Ya Lane With The Weirdo'z An Clowns Of Pain, Sad Dust Of Which Only Become,.
Nothing, Just A Window Of Oppertunity Waitin For The Pro-Pain, Growin Hairs With Every Spark Of My Words, Like A New Invention Of Rogain,..
But The Fissure In The Sky Only OverShadowed My Reign/Rain, Enough To Clear The Cross Of Christ On My Chain,. Only Left Tears Of Loved Ones Of Nights To Distain,
But When I'm Gone,.. Thall Shall Remember My NameOnly The ProtoType Of Lyrical Fights In This Game,..A Damn Shame
(Alzheimers-Disease In Which You ForGet Things)


A More Recent Battle --
Dude Name Was -The Child


Got Em Scrambling With His Writes, Like Hiz Palms-Iz-Infected, Cause Me "ChOpPiN HiM In ThE FrEeZeR" Iz The Only Way He'll Be Cool-Calm-&-Collected..
Like "GuNz AnD LiMbS" Metaphore's, My Arms-Are-Connected. I'm Know To Be A "LaDy KiLLeR" Bitch,!! My Charm-Iz-Perfected, Lyrically Insane-With-Scripts
I'm Aiming-Clips, Until Hiz Flame's On This Thread'z-Been-Ripped, Act Up,?? Like Angry Women During "OrAl SeX" Use These Hands To Beat Your Brains-In-With,
Remain-A-Pimp, Don't Begin With The Jive-Talk, Thinking You Can "StEp OvEr Me",?? Then I'll Put Your Brains On The Side-Walk, Tough-Talk You Better Reasurt-Ya-Style,
Taking Shots,?? Then I'll Let Gunz Remburse-You-Pal/Pao, Just Because Your "BoDy In ThE AiR" Don't Mean-You-Versatile, Dude You Can't Murk-My-Spew.
Cause You Bitch,.. The Only Time You Was Willing To "EaT A NiGgUh FoOd" Was-In-A-Hospital, Cause The "ChiLd WiLl GeT SoNnEd"d Like The Rest Inside-His-Crew,.
Regroup-You-Seem-Kinda-Stressed, The Only Way You'll "ReIgN SuPrEmE" Iz In A Beauty-Contest


~Peace~

NOVICE,..WTF,?? DO YALL EVEN KNOW WHO DA HELL THAT IS,..???
he's beaten people that yall wouldn't even dare to battle,. and yall
say he's a novice,?? yo UnTouchable.. this site is full of hater's dawg,.

and UnTouchable,. is on 2 other sites i'm on,.. 9th wonder, and -AFR-
and he's a mod on one of those sites,. and ranked a heavy weight on both..
and as soon as he comes to this site,.. you guys start hating and saying stupid shit

Yo,.
UnTouchable.. this site don't deserve TALENT like yours REAL TALK..

Not to be on his dick..
but i've seen enough hating on this site,..


 

All this talk about hating...yet I see none...just constructive words of wisdom.

The Forbidden One wrote: NOVICE,..WTF,?? DO YALL EVEN KNOW WHO DA HELL THAT IS,..??? he's beaten people that yall wouldn't even dare to battle,. and yall say he's a novice,?? yo UnTouchable.. this site is full of hater's dawg,. and UnTouchable,. is on 2 other sites i'm on,.. 9th wonder, and -AFR- and he's a mod on one of those sites,. and ranked a heavy weight on both.. and as soon as he comes to this site,.. you guys start hating and saying stupid shit Yo,. UnTouchable.. this site don't deserve TALENT like yours REAL TALK.. Not to be on his dick.. but i've seen enough hating on this site,..

The link there was a reaction to LB members coming in acting like arseholes. Which would imflame any community.

You cant even find a flow in his bars..it doesnt matter if you have the tighest 19 sylable multies and awesome wordplay..no one can read your shit if it has no flow..so tell your boy to fix his structure and he should be good. Were not hating at all..we critisize someone you consider dope then you pull out the "hate card"..

WTF??? IF YOUR NOT A S4R JUDGE, DONT FUCKIN POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (ASIDE FROM HANGIN WHO'S A MOD)