Open Mic: Slick Content

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    Posted: 07 May 2008 at 4:29pm
back to flex some muscle, just a lil' work out
 
fuck with it....
 
The vocal tone’s dope, cocaine’s the substance

Covering the baseline, this snow flake’s disgusting

Falling on your ear drum as I donate the punches

The weather man on wax that obeys the drum kit

If flows are like water, I boat race percussion

The track is like a white girl, I O.J production

Yes I am explosive, a propane combustion

Blowing up the booth, as I showcase eruptions

What do I do? Hoes say ‘construction’

This ‘fella’s too ‘good’, at profane discussions

His game is futuristic once he locates a pumpkin

Chain is too terrific, a soul mate and husband

If a dame is bootielicious, ‘cause my bone game is stunning

 ‘In it’…more than the blokes say in London

This lone ranger’s stubborn, his throat bathes in Russian…

Vodka, hangovers are no brain concussions

But boy oh boy, them dome aches is something

Still I state the realness, I don’t make assumptions 

Still debate with villains, like: ‘probation’s nothing’

A drama king for sure, and my road rage is sovereign

The furious anger by which my home base was governed

I cloned Rae and Rza plus Ghost Face and Buddens

My fire was premiered, and that glow made us hundreds

No diamonds in my ear and a gold chain’s redundant 

Never needed nah nah, I’m ok with cuffing…

The game to my safe till my dough stays abundant

 

 

....i got the guts to be who i wanna be*  

 

 

 

sleep on it if ya waan' ta, batty bwoy ....i can see the views haha

 

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Fatal Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 May 2008 at 12:13am

If flows are like water, I boat race percussion

The track is like a white girl, I O.J production

 
^Dope...flow was on point throughout and had some nice lines. Good read man, keep up...
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best read so far i had on here. i usually don't comment on stuff but this one stands out.
Your whole drop was consistent

10/10 in my opinion.


Edited by Rhymez - 08 May 2008 at 1:14am
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I'd agree with Rhymez, that was well 'constructed.'
 
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