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    Posted: 09 May 2008 at 10:50am
.......True Shit.......
 
Beat: Flipnotic a.k.a. Grizzly-Defining Hour
Can be found.....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=573430&songID=5518357

ya cry-on-my-shoulder thats what saved-you-at-night....
now ya minds-gett'n-older but what gave-you-tha-right....
to invade-in-my-life n start cause'n-me-pain....
yo i'm honest-n-vauge n i'm appualled-by-ya-game....
tha ways-of-my-life is written all-in-my-name....
i'm brave-n-i'm-rightoues stand'n broad-in-tha-rain......
i'm try'n-to-explain that i'm start'n-ta-break.....
yet ya mind-is-in-a-phase were ya heart-is-in-vain.....
see ya try'n-to-erase all that crawls-in-ya-brain.....
by find'n-all-the-ways not involved-in-ya-shame.....
ya focused-on-a-path were ya cause'n-me-pain......
i notice-n-i-laugh cuz i've talked-of-this-day....
it opened-up-a-path were my thoughts-are-insaine..
n it's broken-like-tha-trash thatcha brought-to-my-aid...
use'n sickness-as-a-reason to go take'n-what-we-own....
your conviction-is-your-treason you created-in-tha-note.....
your tear'n-up-my-heart.....my visions-gett'n-weaker.....
i'm stare'n-at-tha-bars as ya listen-in-ya-speaker....
told-me-you'd-return.....in seconds-i'll-arrive.....
i'm scroll'n-at-tha-terminals to check-arrival-times.....
got colder-n-my-nerves n infection-in-my-mind....
ya boarding-wasn't-true with greyhounds-other-times....
annoyed-n-then-confussed made a lay-out-of-tha-lines....
now i'm sorting-it-ta-proove i can break-down-all-ya-lies....
theres a point-at-which-ta-choose if i'm take'n-out-ya-life....
or if it's me-ya-seem-ta-be forever lay'n-down-beside....
i've seen-tha-senery were we'd make-out-all-tha-time.....
it's not the same-ta-me when tears-run-down-ya-face.....
ya take it blatently and all ya fears-become-embraced....


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Really feeling this... Street, get at me on MSN... [email protected] ...
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that shit was sick hommie. im gonna type my verses like that cuz its easy to read the way you say it. also a good beat for that is

http://youtube.com/watch?v=BL_6cPjjxuM




ya cry-on-my-shoulder thats what saved-you-at-night....
now ya minds-gett'n-older but what gave-you-tha-right....
to invade-in-my-life n start cause'n-me-pain....
yo i'm honest-n-vauge n i'm appualled-by-ya-game....
tha ways-of-my-life is written all-in-my-name....
i'm brave-n-i'm-rightoues stand'n broad-in-tha-rain......

hottest text ive ever read so far ever even though i havent been texting that long.


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appreciate the feedback.....yah i'll hit you up right now....
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Not bad man like J said i was feeling it, needs some touching up (which im supposing J will help you with) flow was on point and general content was decent...nice job man
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thanks...what do you mean touching up??
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Originally posted by Junior Shade Junior Shade wrote:

Really feeling this... Street, get at me on MSN... [email protected] ...
 
^ Get at me Street!... I want you dow with Unorphadox... Just click on the crew on th left and "apply" if you're intrested & we'll go from there...
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yo i did hit you  up....never got an e-mail back...let me look into it...i'm hungover right now but i'll get at you....
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Aiiight... Looking foward to hearing from you...
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Street, your new here so jus letting you know that Junior is one of the best on the site...so joining his crew wouldnt be a bad idea...
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wow junior i see you've built yourself a rep.....thanks for the info fatal i will definently keep that in mind on my decision....i am new to this site and thats why i want to weigh my options...but i do greatly appreicate the offer.....it won't be long for a reply...
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ohh shit, where the hell did that come from?
 
you ain't no newbie to this shit, not at all lol
 
that's the illest rhyme scheme i've seen in a while
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yo appreciate it alot man....means alot...
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