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    Posted: 02 January 2010 at 4:15pm
Its crazy to bet against me when I'm droppin' them hot bombs
'cos like kids putton socks on in the dark, I'm constantly odds on
investinmeproperly.com, I'm controlling the votes..
and if you doubled up against me, you're just folding your notes
Puttin' cash up against me, its expected to blow
because I gamble with my fists, and always put my bets on the nose
I'm exceptional, yo, my Strike Rates prolific, A top gunner
I'll win at any length, while you just backing them non-runners
You make your choices on luck, mine are made with precision
So when I start counting out the pounds, you look to trade your position
swap places with me, get in with the winners pack
spittin' gas as the days biggest NAP is chillin' out, sittin' back
When I gamble my cheese, its just like selecting cheddar
because even though I betfair, I'm a better bettor.








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nice. liked the closer. good metas
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Cheers Mackie.






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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote King Jehu Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 January 2010 at 8:06pm
Nice shit, and I like that it got better as it went along and ended with a cool closer.
Insert something rappy here
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Yes sir! I liked this ish!

Good... um... good stuff!

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some creative shit again, lol

interesting read, I was feeling the metaphors and allllaaa that and the closer was powerful
 
 
 
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Nice man
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cos like kids putton socks on in the dark <--best punch setup in the history of rap.



























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^ haha clowned by that fool
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I don't see how I was clowned, exactly....






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