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Topic: Why NotPosted: 27 March 2011 at 5:55pm |
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Its been forever since I did a text piece so I figured I'd bless a keystyle lol... aww man
Exit wounds gotta dumb swift phantom step I need another head to put up on my mantle ledge My schemes is mean within the standard sets Writtens full of pistols but never brandish threats When you see the gun smoke is when the cannon rest An mc that control the line like a Manning strength Aeros dynamik no lighting on my landing strip Burying artists from the garden like I planted scripts In a fight, you'll hit the floor like a tantrum trip 625 a tandem trip, flip, on some random shit Nerds bugging, watch out, I'm a hurt someone Herbs fluxing full circle like circumference We meet half way like dividing by two Like I advise you to not rely on the size that I do An animal on the track, the booth is my zoo Guerrilla warfare from anywhere I fly through Set traps in formats from blueprints of war graphs You can calculate the outcome with poor math The Lord slash like ninjas in sword class Results worse then a Accord dash... After a Ford crash Call me MC 187 yall never store cash My bored raps are strong enough to rupture thorax Yall cant stomach the pain inside ya core plas Acid burns the lining of ya shit like a war gas Yall are luke warm, I'm Luke wit the suit on My kung fu Bruce arm is identical to its true form Move on, a different origin room has orphanage Me and you is comparin' apples and oranges A master of forigein scripts translator of ancient scrolls The creator of blantant blows as tasteful as baking rolls A cadence close matched wit agent probes Placed wit modes to collapse our agin globe Its time to write a beautiful chapter thats unremovable after Viewing death as cold as a funeral chapel Loosen the lasso my noose is suited for assholes For anyone thinkin' they on my level is provin they half slow Runaway like a Kanye interlude to tracks bro One verse hit ya spine starts pertuding ya back bone Mad data in my mind like computer disk chips God damn, I got hot hands like Lucifiers fists Brain on low function im losin my wit Fight writers block every day after abusin the brick I knew it was done, finished, my feet are too numb Blizzard outside got me freezin' to none Ice in my veins watch how im writin this pain Igniting a flame to fortune but its slightly insane Grab a glass pour out Sprite for the lames Usually a 40 but i'm not right in the brain Typin this lame written made me sit twice in the rain Soakin from these tears feel life in the same Shed light on my reign a warrior weapon and sheild Sever the steal of blacksmiths embedded with fear Iraq with, bombs home made with a scratch sniff Armor carved into my gear like aracnids Havin you starin down the barrel like its attractive Opposite pulse of energy like twin magnets Pill popper more tablets then in a cabnit Of ya neighborhood addict, addicted to asprin Open a bottle top, light the tip for a molotov Go ahead and call the cops i'll break the glass like moslitof You'll see the havoc that the nozzle cause Shit'll rub over ya bones like a fossil bronze All in all, my methods are atrocious Death wishes are provoked with set switches so ferocious Even pet fishes get slit throats quick I'm the best that ever wrote shit Every line you could quote it on some chill shit
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CHAIN
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 7:05pm |
i came in to this thread thinking i was gonna read some newbie bullshit, but this had me like ![]() very entertaining read keep dropping! |
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SGC
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 8:07pm |
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thanks man
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 8:18pm |
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Armor carved into my gear like aracnids
Havin you starin down the barrel like its attractive ^^ Cool Call me MC 187 yall never store cash My bored raps are strong enough to rupture thorax Yall cant stomach the pain inside ya core plas Acid burns the lining of ya shit like a war gas Ha ha Vicious! Set traps in formats from blueprints of war graphs You can calculate the outcome with poor math I like this one also.....clever Alot of nice concepts....still got that Aero touch
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 8:22pm |
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"bombs home made with a scratch sniff"....yo this shit was raw...very nice drop...i thought this was gonna be some newb bullshit as well but i was very wrong...i love this style of rhyming...very in your face type of shit...good drop
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 9:33pm |
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thnx both of u
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 10:14pm |
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Oh okay - you got me like woah! lol
Very, very surprised. I spose it's just the norm nowadays that we see a newb drop n expect a raw script - but hell - I shoulda know that Que wunt be bringing no shoddy shit here lol
This was tighter than a nun with a chastity belt on!
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Aeros dynamik no lighting on my landing strip
Burying artists from the garden like I planted scripts
Clever shit that right there.
This whole peice was nice though yano - I'm genuienly lookin forward to seein more from you and if you got any audios ....
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 10:53pm |
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i already got an audio posted... ima get back on my grind i may record tonight, thnx for the comments
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 11:35pm |
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Really liked this! Given me a lot of inspiration as I'm just starting! That start was the best bit though I think! Had real flow to it! Keep it up!
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L,Pac,Biggie,Proof...Gone But Not Forgotten!
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 11:38pm |
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props..
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 2:45am |
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thumbs up.
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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 3:21pm |
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Yeah mane, this was another nice verse right here. I'm impressed with what i've seen from you so far. Good to see some new talent here at LA!
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 8:27pm |
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good looks man
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