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J504 
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 Topic: - Cloak and Swagger -Posted: 05 July 2011 at 4:20pm |
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Craft words in fire like the backdrop to Hades
J's a black-Smith like James Todd from the 80's I get underneath your skin like a case of the scabies cause You're easier to fuck with than wasted ladies Puttin' heads in boxes like my name is Spacey So far up in these pussies I can taste the babies Poundin' puppies- KO'n k9's like a case of rabies Bitches missin' like Scott Peterson misplacin' Laci The new breed- succeed in proving how your game is basic Imma Boss, so Jet, Son -I make a name like Spacely Causing mad static like I've erased the stations then I'm putting you on blast like it's Face the Nation My mission: envisioned - so it's time to head for collision Full-on conditioned - wound-up like dreads that are twisted Role reversal on pussy vets like I'm expectin' kittens Goin' wide open like legs in my Expedition Subliminal in text - man, I'm speaking "sex positions" so you can fill in the blanks like a check that's written Split lines when I spit - equipped, mind set to test intuition I multiply by nines, divine I leave your text in division Perplex inhibitions - won't see me stress indecision Resist resting through rounds- flexing is the best intermission Grab your extentions, so now that I have your attention: To avoid a lyrical assault, a collab is the best intervention
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 4:24pm |
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You're easier to fuck with than wasted ladies
Puttin' heads in boxes like my name is Spacey So far up in these pussies I can taste the babies..  *DEAD* I can tell you were just vibing with it here.. But those few lines were on something else.. Nice one man haha
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Manc
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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 4:35pm |
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hahaha!
Rhyme scheme was simple throughout the start of this verse, and then it gets more complexed after the first few bars which made this an enjoyable read. Along with the multis which were relentless, one after another - and the crazy plays you had in more or less every line lol - this was a nice drop kid. I loved this part. Made me splutter a bit ..... Role reversal on pussy vets like I'm expectin' kittens Goin' wide open like legs in my Expedition |
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Madeye
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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 6:14pm |
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very nice read. Clever opener... laughed at lines: "wasted ladies", "taste the babies",
and "flexing is the best intermission". The visual there was just funny.
Seen harder hits from you though, tbh. Nice read though, nonetheless.
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 6:56am |
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Craft words in fire like the backdrop to Hades
J's a black-Smith like James Todd from the 80's ^^Da fuccin sicest opener I seen in eons! So far up in these pussies I can taste the babies ^^LMAOO That shit was fubnny as hell! Perplex inhibitions - won't see me stress indecision Resist resting through rounds- flexing is the best intermission Grab your extentions, so now that I have your attention: To avoid a lyrical assault, a collab is the best intervention These last four barrs was sickk! Come on! Admit it! Caint nobodyy fucc witchoo J. You be on a whole nuther level my niggah! Causing mad static like I've erased the stations Now if that aim't creativity then what is? |
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 7:31am |
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Good drop, for me not many stand out's but and an over all, the flow was there and a nice bit of wit'
Ya line of the day had to be "Split lines when I spit - equipped, mind set to test intuition I multiply by nines, divine I leave your text in division" |
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 9:44am |
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Read this a few times now
Good quality drop J An the smoothest ov reads as ever wit ya work Face the nation was my fav line here Good ups my man |
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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 3:51am |
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"So far up in these pussies I can taste the babies" <---- best line imo
this shit was dope J
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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J504
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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 9:09pm |
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Thanks for the looks on this, fam.
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