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PoeticAssassin 
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 Topic: PotpourriPosted: 03 February 2012 at 8:54pm |
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My status has reached across the streets to the overseas Controlin' keys so the fiends will kneel as this soldier speaks I'm overly ornery but still I'm contortin' cords so corealy Content to condem them causulties with sentance... sorcery Hell sent, you ignoring me?...you've been bent, I'm floorin' peeps Deplorin' the morbid torments to have these mormons mournin' me I've been sworn to speak, my sound warns like swarms of bees Slienced the lambs, my lectures are canniblistic I'm born to eat Yes, I've grown with heat, been shown the streets they knowin me Between the project halls when she falls to her knees and blowin' me Ahhhhhhhhh..she works with both hands, my shaft is flowin' seed Lovin' to swallow my essence but your pressences is that of ho in need I'm demented so to speak cuz I've had to melt faces like snow in heat Now you bitches is on my dick like a crack whore that's owin' me So many are oh so weak, I errode the rock from the oceans deep Most couldn't catch a flow as a 14 year old ho in heat...You straight potpourri
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Gemos
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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 1:11am |
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I've been sworn to speak, my sound warns like swarms of bees Slienced the lambs, my lectures are canniblistic I'm born to eat killed it right there liked the ending too, all in all good flow man
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CHAIN
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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 2:04pm |
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dope, u've been hitting us with these 'freestyles'
but i'd like to see a 'topical' from you
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 7:40pm |
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Always worth checking out ya work
you def got ya own recognizable way with this shit it's cool reading! Props on that
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 7:48pm |
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holy shit the flow was off the charts on this damn....absolute perfection on the flow aspect...you stayed on poitn the whole time never falling off...
very nice drop....but lets see some of your written shit |
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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 8:33am |
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Dang...I been goin thru all the opens and tryin to see all the ones I missed. I def dig the opener here that shit was raw. You def got some nice rhyme schemes. I remember feeding a couple of your drops and I can see you just keep improving and thats what its all about. I would also like to see a full topical from you.Thatta be dope. Properz
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