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CHAIN 
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 Topic: Screen FlickerPosted: 28 May 2013 at 6:31pm |
 Moving through them districts Neutral and distant I used to do it differently Goon from Aruba This shooter did a little bid Came back reclusive “Humans are a mystery” Said that to myself In a room full of wickedness…hey Guess he’s in tune With who the fuck he really is While I’m still here Rooting for the syndicates Dueling with myself Exuding that I’m sinning, kid Lunatics whispering: “exuberantly sinister!” Coins on my eyes Doomed in the river Styx? Nah, not just yet Though the truth’s inconsiderate And shit is real When you feud with constituents Niggas is weak It fuels all the lividness Dudes wonder What’s he doing with that gift of his? Hindered by the curse Of being too meticulous… ”nothing”… Yo, I ain’t even nigga rich Looking like I just Flew in from a business trip …pffff I ain’t moving, though The loot is soooo limited Might as well give The croupier my dividends She… Looked at me and said: ”stupid ain’t some shit u iz” Not word for word ‘cause Susan’s mo’ articulate That’s not her name. I’m wooing over lyricists I’m kicking game All woozy from the liquor, bitch Lunatics whispering: “exuberantly sinister!” Put two and two together Root out the slitherers And figure out what Losing is a symptom of Stop saying no ... ‘cause the word 'Yeah' Is not just something June is in the middle of |
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fuckoff
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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 6:41pm |
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Looked at me and said:
”stupid ain’t some shit u iz” Not word for word ‘cause Susan’s mo’ articulate lol dopeness. gift of his was delivery as well. always catch your flow when im readin ya shit man props..
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The_Guy
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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 6:51pm |
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wow this flowed so great...the multi's were awesome and the picture gave it some real good imagery....i caught your flow as soon as i starting reading
Yo, I ain’t even nigga rich Looking like I just Flew in from a business trip …pffff I ain’t moving, though The loot is soooo limited Might as well give The croupier my dividends great job on this |
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 6:58pm |
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Hindered by the curse of being too meticulous ...yes
Real nice read chingy. Ace flow going on right thru Couldn't make sense of that last Section? |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 7:12pm |
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Fuck. I hate when someone picks up on my favourite bit before I get to quote it haha
The bit Fuck Off said. Fuck man, beautiful flow. The whole 4th section. Boutta send you a PM my dude.
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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 10:16pm |
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Good work Chain..
You got that short bar flow down.
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