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    Posted: 03 August 2013 at 7:25pm
Typed this on my phone when I was on the bus, thought I might aswell post it up

I'm the man on the stage with the masses applaudin him
I'm the jack of all trades and the master of all'a them
I'm the one to change the aura when I come in a thread
I'm the guy who scares the monsters sleepin under the bed
I'm the beast who makes Daleks hide behind the sofa
I'm the one who just made Kiki laugh cos I'm a joker
I'm the beacon of hope at the top of the steepest of slopes
I'm the dealer for those who are fiendin for D.O.P.E
I'm the force to be reckoned with, check the text that I bring
I'm the secret exposed in the last breath of a king

I'm PB
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Nice little written. Ive got a million of these Ill never use - its like keeping your claws sharpened. This was my fave bar

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I'm the dealer for those who are fiendin for D.O.P.E
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I agree with, Manc..this is the type of piece that you keep your mind sharp with. Nothing spectacular but it did its job. Keep it up, dude
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Yeah, was nice for what it was. 

The first bar was my favourite, and I did laugh at the Daleks reference haha
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Loved it dude. Last line was crack.
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