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Kiki Spirez 
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 Topic: #SlutRapPosted: 24 May 2014 at 3:35pm |
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The OM animal, knashing on my Hannibal Lecter bit, Flexer puts names in a title for rivals to check the shit, Get the whip bitch, go flash the jewels.. Act the fools, Actually actualizing the actions that wrap you in a rappers feud, Actor dude.. Does it matter who slaps your stale group? The tale routes in the scoop that your fail was a scaled coup, Bail.. Shoot.. Like Madrid fans singing for a winger, Hail? Cute.. Buncha doppelgangers swinging for a ringer, Flick the middle finger - Up. Tell 'em how it's going down, Pun scout.. You 'suck the fun out', like ya' blowing clowns, Rolling round on the floor, doors won't open to losers, Wrote 'em to be used by the bruised and the bruisers, Boozin' in Hooters - Tellin' my date what i'm expectin', Losin' to users you moved dudes, but not by respectin', Check in to the 'Vet Inn', and reflect on the service you get, Stay forgettin' the cheques, bet we purge in the debt, Merge in the sex - Learn what your audience needs, Tits and clit relieve tension, but don't mention they bleed, Wench on the knees saying, 'DON'T LOOK DOWN ON ME!' Round C's, so downin' those E's til she's astoundin' with D's.. |
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Kilo G
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 3:53pm |
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wow, one tough and enjoyable verse right here my mate , concept and wordplays were dope and it flowed smoothly all together, I like to read many of these.. Good Job.
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 3:58pm |
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Appreciate it man. Haven't wrote in a little bit, so vented on this.
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 4:07pm |
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I agree I like the concept. Yay for slut raps lol. Over all good piece had the multis going on and stuff. I just would have wanted to see more slag bars lol
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First off fuckers I'm a cunt mission in life is just to wind you up a cunt I won't go texting you back on t.v. I'm the worst phone a friend you can have
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 4:09pm |
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Thanks man. That'll be the next Open I think, went for 'slut' to be more global, cos I don't think the rest of the World have 'slags'.
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 4:15pm |
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I'm from the states we def use slut over slag I just like how it sounds lol.
What I meant was more bars directed right at sluts/slags/hoes etc. |
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First off fuckers I'm a cunt mission in life is just to wind you up a cunt I won't go texting you back on t.v. I'm the worst phone a friend you can have
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 5:30pm |
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This was raw man....those opening few barz, damn.....I see you keeks... lol But your ryhme schemes were flawless and was hitting the whole way through. The way you word your shit line for line just keeps the reader reading. The structure to each bar is attached in different way. I feel like you really got your own style...
Good shit man and good to see you back n droppin verses.
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 5:38pm |
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Cheers man, good to be back.
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 5:44pm |
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Hey pm me your phone number and ill give you feed via a phonecall
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 5:46pm |
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Dude, you're Canadian, those phone bill charges.. #IAintAboutDatLife
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 7:19pm |
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Good shit bro. You dropped some dope shit. I liked the "Blowing Clowns" line that shit was funny as hell.
Nice to see you dropping verses again always a great read. |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 8:05pm |
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Salute. Just checking your shit out now.
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 8:21pm |
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Actor dude...does matter who slaps your stale group
The tail routes in the scoop that your fail was a scaled coup Sickening. The internals were  I think you just might be the best at transitional rhyming...if that's a thing. |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 25 May 2014 at 9:01pm |
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Appreciate it my man. It's something I always try to work on and get better at.
Good to see you around btw. Give me a PM sometime you're free, we'll have a chat, maybe write another classic. |
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Posted: 31 May 2014 at 5:40pm |
They do they just don't know it. 
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Posted: 23 September 2023 at 7:42pm |
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LA be dead but it shouldn't just DIE....
2023 up in here and all we got is the very real threat of a Beans Vs Stalin battle being the last thing ever posted on Lyrical Assault.... Thankfully it will be a double no show, so things could be worse for real Time machine time then,it's what's I'm saying Kiki, yeah.... that brother had some skills he mastered on this board... |
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