Open Mic: Propz When It's Due

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    Posted: 30 May 2014 at 11:41pm
Props When It's Due

I'm just giving props when it's due…
No, I'm not getting soft on ya, I'm just dropping the truth
Before I re-capture ya'll attention, and start popping shots in the booth

Arthur, I apologize, we should be the tag champions
But I became transparent, turned into a rap transcient
but your still a true champ, with a well deserved title
Sometimes I think you wrote the wordplay bible…
Nigma, your one of the most intelligent writers
The most abstract topics and verses, 
and ya flow couldn't be tighter
Fuck Off, the most chill of these bastards
Puffing mary, then getting a topic to start killing these rappers
Following up with UN.. Who will fill you with laughter 
Ink, Cuba, and Dress have some of the best battle verses I've seen
From personals, to packed punches, to perfected words on the screen
So you know you getting flames from any posts from em' dudes
But I gotta say I have learned the most from you, Cubes….
Exo, Kiki, Manc, with every drop is just embers
Them dudes got some of the verses that I've only remembers
Exo's so crisp with detail, in each line that is written
and when manc writes I thinks he sneaks nitrous oxide in the system
and what's obscene, 
is that keeks' has one of the best flows I've ever seen
Trizzy, I'll admit it too, I didn't like you at first, 
You were cocky and arrogant, then didn't drop a verse
But you had skill, so all the bullshit just gay, 
But that's okay,
You came back with better presence than christmas day..
Tits, Shank, beans, and that bitch ash accelerated
Escalated their verses and really elevated
Brenn, got one of the most artistic minds round' these stupids
Those sick ass sigs man, I really don't know how you do it.
Point Blank, another writers that goes toe to toe
Against the best writer here he would easily hold his own
Although it isn't too often that we really see him
He's started one hell of a crew in VM.. 
Jay, pops in an out, but is definitely the potent type
and we all know chains has the best open mics, 
But it all comes done to, moments, hype
Focus, Life,
Waiting for the next time you can hold the mic
Or take the time to show what you've written
So us as a community can sit back and listen…
… We tight… 
Scotty, you made the best of the sites.. 

So if I left you, There aren't any knocks on you dudes. 
I was just writing off the top of my head, key styling this shit.. 
and giving these props when it's due..


….. Prepare for the reincarnation…. 






Go my Minions!


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^^^^^^ WOW!!!!!

Welcome back Law!!!

LA Missed you!
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Solid read man, props to you. Havent seen a shoutout om in a long ass time so it was fresh as well as dope.
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This was dope man, I agree with Nig that it's refreshing to see. I appreciate the shoutout, I'm glad to see you back and doing your thing again. Stay up 
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Thanks for the feedback guys. 
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This was chill, solid read and loving the concept. Nice piece law.
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Cool read homie........ Thanks for the shout
These topics are. Tough but I think youve got the best one yet
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Nice drop here law glad to see your back stay active
I'll explode at the drop of a dime like proximity mines
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Nice concept. Get very few positive feedback pieces unless it's crew hype. 

Liked the 'came back with a better presence than Christmas day' line. 

Very nice dude. 

And on a personal level, if you genuinely think I have a good flow, then thanks.
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Flow through this was really fun, you played with it a lot and it gave it the feeling of a real freestyle/freeverse. Nicely delivered, I like how you didn't force any multies and jus sat back and let the words come natural, excellently done. 

Nigma, your one of the most intelligent writers
The most abstract topics and verses, 
and ya flow couldn't be tighter

I love the way you drop this last bar, I love those pocket schemes and you did this well.


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Thanks for all the feedback again.
And kik, no problem
But how the hell you get a battling ban lol? 
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Solid piece Law, enjoyable read...

Good to see you'll be back on your grind.

Props on the shout out btw.. lol
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Thanks Tre
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*nods*

Good return verse, reflective, honest, flowed through nicely...let's see what you bring to the OM now...
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Nice verse Law. Flowed extremely well, a good read on all aspects of the verse.

And thanks for the mention, I appreciate it.
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Nice, enjoyable verse with a cool concept.
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