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D.Von Doom 
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 Topic: Doom-10pm in Chicago(Attention Whores)Posted: 10 June 2016 at 5:40am |
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<iframe src="http://www.audiomack.com/embed4-thin/daofficial1/10pm-in-chicago" scrolling="no" width="100%" height="62" scrollbars="no" frameborder="0"></iframe> People need to learn how not to comment on things they know nothing about. You know what it means when you assume.
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Endeavor
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 9:16am |
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There's something wrong with the link bro, the embed ting don't work. The track is dope as fuck though. Your delivery is and remains brutal as fuck. Flow is insane. Beat is dope as fuck.
Dope. Edit: What's the beat yo, the samples are mad dope!
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#Bananas
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D.Von Doom
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 5:35pm |
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It's drakes beat 4pm in Calabasas. Appreciate the feed
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:03pm |
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Easier way to hear the track
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:26pm |
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This was cool bro, you had some nice metaphors in there. Not a fan of the sneak dissing, I feel like that's kind of weak, and not cuz it's a sneak but because they weren't really any hard hitting bars. But overall I thought this was a decent remix, definitely a nice flow, good rhymescheme. Would like to see you on a full length original track. Oh and on the mixing i would say take a little off the low end for the vocals, make them brighter. That's about it for my feed. Nice track.
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:30pm |
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Saying I'll jack E(jackie) like mila kunis is direct. And he knows I'm talking to him. So it's whatever anyone can get it at this point. Also it's funny thag yo don't like sneak dissing but that's all drake does....interesting.
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:38pm |
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Yeah man I liked it,nice bouncy beat coupled with well delivered
lyrics,I noticed you had some aliases in this also,didn't feel like a Diss track though,still this took nothing away from the ambience of the track overal,I also thought you displayed some real nice mic presence here too,you kept on the flow throughout which made it sound like a polished track,all in all an enjoyable audio,and your voice seemed to complement the beat to be honest,well done with this...peace. |
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D.Von Doom
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:40pm |
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Appreciate the feed crim
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Endeavor
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:45pm |
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Yeah, Neek said the same thing so here I am still wondering of Doom dissed me or not. If so, read my response! If not, read my response and specifically the last line lol
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#Bananas
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Mission
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:54pm |
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You by your own admission don't fw drake so it doesn't make sense for you to do exactly what he does. Idk, ya'll my fam, I don't like seeing the amnimosity between everybody, elite definitely got you with his response tho. I'm really sayin if you're gonna diss at all, bring better bars because I know you got more than that in you.
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:57pm |
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Cut the hoe shit out. There's is no family there. Elite is a manipulator that u let play you wayy too many times. And I'm not worried about shit his comes out with
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:57pm |
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pretty good stuff. ..had some nice stretches of flow. what software you use?
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 10:59pm |
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Audacity
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 11:00pm |
That's dope tbh |
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 11:09pm |
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If it was all bars like that I'd say this was fire, but that was the only stand out punch to me. And no one's maniputating me, I know what's going on with everyone I involve myself with, I'm playin my cards for the long game, it's all love man.
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 11:30pm |
that's pretty solid for audacity. nice use of some of the vsts. |
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 11:32pm |
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Thanks I appreciate that
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Posted: 10 June 2016 at 11:33pm |
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Dude... I said it many times before...your presence and delivery be on point. This was nice
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Posted: 11 June 2016 at 3:53am |
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confession booth woulda sounded crisp. i really enjoyed this man, youre at the level where i could listen to this on shuffle and enjoy. i feel your delivery has been impressive but youve stepped up the pen game here. Some solid punches, very well executed wordplay, and smooth flow/transitions. Really nice verse
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Posted: 11 June 2016 at 3:55am |
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Appreciate the feed. Didn't know you listened to my work
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