Open Mic: BipolarBate Love Poem

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   Heaven

Peace was in my dimension, trouble was just a memory
Years had passed with no intergalactic activity
Time was stopped before I became eternity eternally
Everything I stood for became my nursery
Shining moon bright, elusive nights true to life
My muse is bright, like space dementia makes outer space white
Refuse my right before I left and go forward and backwards
Toward your hazards, I'm cold as golden matter
Sold my bladder, but it's no actor
Entering your frequency, my leash has no empathy
I'm sick of me because of my repeated sympathy
Holding my ghost because my soul is dignity
Choking my soul because I'm frozen as snow
And sold my soul to Satan and gave Hell the Titanic of flows
Multidimensional gravitation my presence is everywhere completely forever
Peace is my heckler, so you sleep in the garden of Eden
Where I'm completely together 
The song I write is among the greatest of titans
I am alive still even though the Sun doesn't possess my shadow of life's planes I struggle

written in 10 minutes...

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Alien365 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 31 December 2020 Status: Offline Points: 43	Post Options Post Reply Quote Alien365 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: BipolarBate Love Poem Posted: 20 March 2025 at 7:09am
	Heaven Peace was in my dimension, trouble was just a memory Years had passed with no intergalactic activity Time was stopped before I became eternity eternally Everything I stood for became my nursery Shining moon bright, elusive nights true to life My muse is bright, like space dementia makes outer space white Refuse my right before I left and go forward and backwards Toward your hazards, I'm cold as golden matter Sold my bladder, but it's no actor Entering your frequency, my leash has no empathy I'm sick of me because of my repeated sympathy Holding my ghost because my soul is dignity Choking my soul because I'm frozen as snow And sold my soul to Satan and gave Hell the Titanic of flows Multidimensional gravitation my presence is everywhere completely forever Peace is my heckler, so you sleep in the garden of Eden Where I'm completely together The song I write is among the greatest of titans I am alive still even though the Sun doesn't possess my shadow of life's planes I struggle written in 10 minutes...

Alien365 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 31 December 2020 Status: Offline Points: 43	Post Options Post Reply Quote Alien365 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2025 at 7:34am
	Can someone give me feedback? My short little poem was written in 10 minutes only. I need more practice.

Alien365 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 31 December 2020 Status: Offline Points: 43	Post Options Post Reply Quote Alien365 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2025 at 7:34am
	I am BipolarBate$$$ from RapRoyalty.

Alien365 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 31 December 2020 Status: Offline Points: 43	Post Options Post Reply Quote Alien365 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2025 at 7:34am
	How many posts do I need to make before I can battle?