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    Posted: 30 January 2006 at 11:47am
a diss to someone who cries about every vote...orion will tell you, he was involved in one of the dudes outbursts.






Its Not In My Nature To Give Thought To A Hater
But Gore, You AinT Shit Like Throwing Rocks At A Crater, Im Greater...
Age Twenty Five Cryin Left And Right, With No End In Sight
And You Lost That Maiden Battle, But To You That Shit is "Pending", Right? (1)
Ha, None Of This Would Have Existed But You Persisted Bitch
Now Ima Have You Saying Sorry Faster Than Twizted Did (2)
You Nothin But A Bitch, A Fairy...Pullin Big Words Out Of A Dictionary (3)
Say That Ya Spits Are Scary, And All Of A Sudden You Actin Like A Visionary
Listen Very Carefully...You Aint A Doctor, A Devil, Or Surgeon
You Just A WANNA BE.. A Faggot, A Loser, A Virgin....
Dont Come At Me Like You An Elder Wit Lessons To Teach Me
Unless Its How To Bitch My Way To A Win When SomeBody Beats Me (4)
Defeat Me? I Wont Give You The Time Of Day, I wouldnt Throw My Rhymes Away
To Some Bitch Whos Gonne Cry And Sway, The Entire Day (5)
Your Diss Got Three Replies, From Me, Demise And Frank Barrone
While You Steady Beggin For Attention Like Bitches On They Camera Phones
Surgeon My Ass, How You Makin Cuts Wit A Paper Knife?
Fuck A Weapon, Ill Just Break Your Modem In Order To TAKE YOUR LIFE.... (6)



1. when he began losing to barbie (maidein china) he stopped the battle before the winnin vote was cast, and said the battle was on hold for now

2. twizted started beef with me, but soon squashed it sayin he was wrong

3. ask orion...all he does is find some nice vocab and work his lines around it...half the time it gets so boring..

4. if he loses...hell bitch about it to admins and get his d/r's to help out

5. all he does...cry and sway, trust me

6. he cares so much about rank, and the website...so i say its his life, hes 26!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2006 at 11:48am
and out of no where ... haha


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2006 at 11:50am
Well this had it all within the 16, the closer was killer, some of the filler was less effective/original than it perhaps coulda been, but on the most part this was on-point... PRO
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2006 at 11:51am
thanks, wanna tell me the filler parts u werent feelin? so i can work on it    
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2006 at 11:53am
Feelin' It.. Up wid the Pro's Teq










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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2006 at 12:00pm

Quote Say That Ya Spits Are Scary, And All Of A Sudden You Actin Like A Visionary

Seemed based a little too much on rhyme, not that it didn't make sense, but it just seemed hollow... a lot of setups are filler but it's usually made obvious... what's more annoyin' to me is when people try and make their setup clever or a simile or even a punch like it'll score extra points, when it's blatantly setup... setups are setups... that's not to say this rule always applies, but here that's just one such line I wasn't feelin'

Quote Listen Very Carefully...You Aint A Doctor, A Devil, Or Surgeon
You Just A WANNA BE.. A Faggot, A Loser, A Virgin....

Potent but played...both in general and with regards to him... not to say you're the only one guilty of it, but yeah, you said what was there to be said but maybe a little too plainly for ur own good, even if that was the intention

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2006 at 12:03pm
nice...how bout ya favorite parts?






















im just harassing you now
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2006 at 12:06pm
Pending punch is real hot, doesn't read that well in text but I know how u mean it to come thru, it's hoht shit, camera phones shit was funny, closer was just wow shit
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 January 2006 at 12:17pm
T.Sun is now a Pro 

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