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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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Topic: this was a dissPosted: 30 January 2006 at 11:47am |
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a diss to someone who cries about every vote...orion will tell you, he was involved in one of the dudes outbursts.
Its Not In My Nature To Give Thought To A Hater But Gore, You AinT Shit Like Throwing Rocks At A Crater, Im Greater... Age Twenty Five Cryin Left And Right, With No End In Sight And You Lost That Maiden Battle, But To You That Shit is "Pending", Right? (1) Ha, None Of This Would Have Existed But You Persisted Bitch Now Ima Have You Saying Sorry Faster Than Twizted Did (2) You Nothin But A Bitch, A Fairy...Pullin Big Words Out Of A Dictionary (3) Say That Ya Spits Are Scary, And All Of A Sudden You Actin Like A Visionary Listen Very Carefully...You Aint A Doctor, A Devil, Or Surgeon You Just A WANNA BE.. A Faggot, A Loser, A Virgin.... Dont Come At Me Like You An Elder Wit Lessons To Teach Me Unless Its How To Bitch My Way To A Win When SomeBody Beats Me (4) Defeat Me? I Wont Give You The Time Of Day, I wouldnt Throw My Rhymes Away To Some Bitch Whos Gonne Cry And Sway, The Entire Day (5) Your Diss Got Three Replies, From Me, Demise And Frank Barrone While You Steady Beggin For Attention Like Bitches On They Camera Phones Surgeon My Ass, How You Makin Cuts Wit A Paper Knife? Fuck A Weapon, Ill Just Break Your Modem In Order To TAKE YOUR LIFE.... (6) 1. when he began losing to barbie (maidein china) he stopped the battle before the winnin vote was cast, and said the battle was on hold for now 2. twizted started beef with me, but soon squashed it sayin he was wrong 3. ask orion...all he does is find some nice vocab and work his lines around it...half the time it gets so boring.. 4. if he loses...hell bitch about it to admins and get his d/r's to help out 5. all he does...cry and sway, trust me 6. he cares so much about rank, and the website...so i say its his life, hes 26! |
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES
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Demonic
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X Fade II Joined: 06 August 2004 Location: Cardiff Status: Offline Points: 3463 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-4-0 Form: LLWLLW |
Posted: 30 January 2006 at 11:48am |
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and out of no where ... haha
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-Orion-
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Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 30 January 2006 at 11:50am |
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Well this had it all within the 16, the closer was killer, some of the filler was less effective/original than it perhaps coulda been, but on the most part this was on-point... PRO
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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Joined: 25 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 1091 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 30 January 2006 at 11:51am |
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thanks, wanna tell me the filler parts u werent feelin? so i can work on it
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES
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ILLSTARRR
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LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 30 January 2006 at 11:53am |
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Feelin' It.. Up wid the Pro's Teq
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-Orion-
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Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 30 January 2006 at 12:00pm |
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Seemed based a little too much on rhyme, not that it didn't make sense, but it just seemed hollow... a lot of setups are filler but it's usually made obvious... what's more annoyin' to me is when people try and make their setup clever or a simile or even a punch like it'll score extra points, when it's blatantly setup... setups are setups... that's not to say this rule always applies, but here that's just one such line I wasn't feelin'
Potent but played...both in general and with regards to him... not to say you're the only one guilty of it, but yeah, you said what was there to be said but maybe a little too plainly for ur own good, even if that was the intention |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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Joined: 25 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 1091 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 30 January 2006 at 12:03pm |
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nice...how bout ya favorite parts?
im just harassing you now ![]() |
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Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES
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-Orion-
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Posted: 30 January 2006 at 12:06pm |
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Pending punch is real hot, doesn't read that well in text but I know how u mean it to come thru, it's hoht shit, camera phones shit was funny, closer was just wow shit
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 30 January 2006 at 12:17pm |
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T.Sun is now a Pro
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