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Junior Shade
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Topic: What You Think?..Posted: 22 February 2006 at 4:47pm |
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Any feedback is Welcome...
Mayne, No-Ones 'Getting Into Your Bars' like "Under Age Drinkers!!"... Stankey, lets make this a Classic.. Ok i went through a few of his battles.. Most shits played on him so i went with a few personals, the rest is generics but they all relate to him.. So yer there not random lol.. Just bein in my head for time need to use them up! .. All you need to know is.. BS(D) - BS = Bullshit .. Okie Dokie Junior's Here.... Bigg Dogg?... Yer cus its Obese your Weighing Went with the Old Style, Flow works better... -1 |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 23 February 2006 at 7:44am |
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Mayne, No-Ones 'Getting Into Your Bars' like "Under Age Drinkers!!"... i think stank, or atleast someone used that against me in a recent battle anyway, im gonna say STRONG AMA for this, because some shit was hot as fuck, like robot dance moves, hot delivery and "BS" punches, but the rest was kinda, meh ... heard it all before, levi's thing is flipped a lot now, and that wasnt a new flip for it, the lines where u had hard personals (vet tourny) the flow dropped, and seemed to hit weaker than the other shit, so i dont think its quite pro. but still a nice verse to read! |
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Cuba
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Posted: 23 February 2006 at 7:46am |
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AMA
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 23 February 2006 at 9:23am |
.. Ohwell lol .. Thanx anyway..
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Cuba
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Posted: 23 February 2006 at 12:02pm |
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Nep doesnt rank, only me, Illa, Orion...wait and see
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King Jehu
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Posted: 23 February 2006 at 12:29pm |
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Junior's Ill with Text, & you can 'Mark My Words' like my "English Teacher
Teachers only mark your paper to show you where you committed an error... |
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Bolo
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¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Posted: 23 February 2006 at 12:54pm |
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haha
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I am the one that knocks...
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 23 February 2006 at 1:24pm |
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Its not like that in the UK Bronx boy .... our teachers actually grade our papers up to a certain age. |
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King Jehu
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Posted: 23 February 2006 at 4:02pm |
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That's Bronx Man to you... and what does age have anything to do with it? Teachers don't mark your written work to tell you when something's wrong? If they let you get away with bad grammar cause you're in college and just grade your paper as a whole, you'll never improve that, and you'll never have better grades than that...
It's like me telling Junior that his verse was lacking something and not telling him where or what... think about it. |
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Junior Shade
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Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 23 February 2006 at 4:24pm |
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Lol @ me starting a political debate on teaching .. Personally, your both right..
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Junior Shade
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Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 23 February 2006 at 4:25pm |
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Oh & upping Illa & Orion.. |
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Kay B
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Posted: 23 February 2006 at 8:45pm |
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Yes, your actually both right, as the teacher does just generally mark work but he/she will also mark mistakes.
But anyway, the peice was preety nice it flowed well throught and had nice vocab. |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 6:42am |
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Meh ... my teachers at high school and primary school marked everything, gave me a percentage or a grade(A, B, C .... etc), and yea, they gave it back with errors, but they never asked me to do it again. anywho ... i see where ya coming from...... and i only went for bronx boy for alliteration, dont take it personally. |
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Fatal
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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 10:53am |
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this a spit for rank n erybodys debatin about school? Thanks alot Jehu lol.
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