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Calibra 
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 Topic: Calibra vs LuckyDPosted: 15 December 2009 at 5:35pm |
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No flipping/feeding Crew votes allowed Due Friday? |
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Lucky D
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Posted: 16 December 2009 at 4:46pm |
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Due Friday is good
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Lucky D
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Posted: 16 December 2009 at 4:50pm |
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Had some time...
Yeah ya opens are good...but ya battles lack heat
Like that bitch Cali's Bra...you could never trap D
What ya gonna speak... about lettin' a biter in our crew
New Era let a biter in...in fact he's tha leader... thats you
Is thats true?...I tear down castles..leavin' you stuck
Asked about a topical battle...but I'm too dope so you ducked
Cuz I'm on Top o Cal...gonna drop nameplays I've heard them before
Hittin' like a .22 Calibra..fuck that..like a derringer poppin' tha floor
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Calibra
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Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Posted: 18 December 2009 at 4:08pm |
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Nice to see you focussing more on pre-empting my verse than dissing me...
Kept stacking up the losses, didn't choose to improve Instead, you turned to battlin' the noobs in ya crew Have you people heard his audio? It's truely weak spittin' He's got the fuckin' mic presence of the Microsoft Speech system New Era stays at the top, for you success is never due Cause you need to be a team, not possessive of ya crew So LA's like the playground I was handed the keys for And you only exist in this bitch just to balance the see-saw! |
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 18 December 2009 at 8:06pm |
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Lucky: Lol @ your opener. Although ive seen this concept used against Cali, u added the vh1 bitch into it (forget which show she was from lol) which was a good twist. However, i wasnt feeling the wording, i feel you could have been more aggressive and worked it to hit much harder... Next two lines are ok. Again, ive seen this used against Cali like 3 different times before and you didnt nearly use it in a fresh or creative way... Hahaaa topical duck was dope. Great personal... Closer was a huge let down after reading your previous bar. You gotta end wit a banger cuz thats whats gonna stick in the reader's mind.
Overall, you had one really good personal that i like while the rest of the verse pretty much needed punches that should've been worked better or that were played.
Calibra: Lol @ your opener. Good funny punch... Dissin his audio was good, especially since you happen to be pretty good at audio... Possessive of ya crew coulda been worked waaaay better. Doesnt really hit for me.... Hahaa closer was good. Worked very nicely.
Overall, good verse, only one punch that i wasnt feeling. Rest was consistantly good.
Vote: Cali, jus had the better overall verse with the harder hitting punches. Good shit yall.
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Lucky D
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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 8:11pm |
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Thanks for votin' Fatal....
Good Verse Cal...
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Calibra
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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 8:13pm |
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Cheers Lucky, you too.
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Cuba
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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 8:33pm |
Nice to see someone swaying!  Vote = Calibra Lucky had a coolio verse, liked the biter stuff even though that could have been a more knock-out type punch...you had a couple of coolio wordplays in there, and I liked the idea of pre-empting name plays...problem with that kind of diss is that if he doesn't do it then it comes back onto you...topical was a good punch. Calibrizzle had more advanced verse, better rhyme schemes, better wording of punches...good personal disses. Coolio battle.
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Fatal
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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 8:44pm |
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He took that swaying bit outta Kay's book lol
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CHAIN
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Posted: 21 December 2009 at 5:03pm |
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Yeah ya opens are good...but ya battles lack heat
Like that bitch Cali's Bra...you could never trap D (dope ...but it could've been worded better)
What ya gonna speak... about lettin' a biter in our crew
New Era let a biter in...in fact he's tha leader... thats you (9/10)
Is thats true?...I tear down castles..leavin' you stuck
Asked about a topical battle...but I'm too dope so you ducked (lol 8/10)
Cuz I'm on Top o Cal...gonna drop nameplays I've heard them before
Hittin' like a .22 Calibra..fuck that..like a derringer poppin' tha floor (wasn't feeling the closer)
Kept stacking up the losses, didn't choose to improve Instead, you turned to battlin' the noobs in ya crew (8/10) Have you people heard his audio? It's truely weak spittin' He's got the fuckin' mic presence of the Microsoft Speech system (9/10) New Era stays at the top, for you success is never due Cause you need to be a team, not possessive of ya crew (looooll 9/10) So LA's like the playground I was handed the keys for And you only exist in this bitch just to balance the see-saw! ...iight (9/10) i'll go with Calibra 'cause his verse was more consistent and it had harder punches |
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Kay B
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Posted: 21 December 2009 at 11:41pm |
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3-0 ko...cal wins
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