Open Mic: 4 bars. 4 minuets.

Nobody can stop my storm from the acts, a virus; hack into the minds of these whacks,
Grip tha gats, flip the hats, stick a dick, up in these clits and pass,

Matter of fact, what you spit is a crap,
needs to be scrapped, so im dumping 
that in a trash,

Trap and then Detach your neck from your back
And let you realise there is a thing called "skill"which you lack,

So mess with me, but come real strapped,
Cuz TiTU is known to burn all the metas to the ash
(this is a trap)

Feedback guys.

I wouldn't be infatuated with putting out x amount of bars in x amount of minutes. Work on a full piece and take your time. That means coming up with a title, content, and really thinking about your wording. I'm not saying to not "keystyle" pieces. By all means, write as much as you feel like it. I'm just saying save the ones that you go back to and really work on to post as an open mic. This, and verses like this, feel like throwaways or a practice run. It's more helpful to you if we can feed something you really spent time on. 

Thanks yall. And i got it man