Open Mic: Calm Down

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Put in different genres, who's rap and who's trap?
Worrying about who's wack and who's that 
Sharpen up your pencil, forget who's fat
Hov's millions or Dre's billions. Get off dudes laps 

Bring drama, suspense, reality and vivid imagery
Try a collaboration or two bringing synergy 
Word association, techniques and fitted symmetry
Then same again and if it works, try visit a trilogy

And fuck up the place like they did in Tripoli 
Do it like the greats, dont limit injury 
Nicki Minaj is the pot calling the kettle black
Sophisticated ignorance; what twisted sympathy

I choose to Keep Calm and no more with these bombs 
If I explode like Busta and Em, I'll leave you to read psalms 
My genesis bringing endless menace like Venice is 
I'm generous, the focus is always on what's irrelevant
Emphasis on my nemesis, I just happen to be a pessimist
The relevance: I'm a business man; I replenish shit 
The good don't win, look at crook bankers and their premises
I'm in my element, stay away from sin and preach elegance

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Real Hip Hop Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 18 March 2014 Location: London Status: Offline Points: 290	Post Options Post Reply Quote Real Hip Hop Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Calm Down Posted: 04 July 2014 at 6:36am
	Put in different genres, who's rap and who's trap? Worrying about who's wack and who's that Sharpen up your pencil, forget who's fat Hov's millions or Dre's billions. Get off dudes laps Bring drama, suspense, reality and vivid imagery Try a collaboration or two bringing synergy Word association, techniques and fitted symmetry Then same again and if it works, try visit a trilogy And fuck up the place like they did in Tripoli Do it like the greats, dont limit injury Nicki Minaj is the pot calling the kettle black Sophisticated ignorance; what twisted sympathy I choose to Keep Calm and no more with these bombs If I explode like Busta and Em, I'll leave you to read psalms My genesis bringing endless menace like Venice is I'm generous, the focus is always on what's irrelevant Emphasis on my nemesis, I just happen to be a pessimist The relevance: I'm a business man; I replenish shit The good don't win, look at crook bankers and their premises I'm in my element, stay away from sin and preach elegance

SwordedStylez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote SwordedStylez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 05 July 2014 at 10:27am
	Yeah this was pretty good. Rhymes were simple but effective. Content was farely generic fare but you pulled it off ok. Stay up.
	Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)

Freeda5thDawg Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Freeda5thDawg Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 05 July 2014 at 6:40pm
	Your style reminds me of Chain's. Not so much the style of writing but the smooth and chill vibe I get from your delivery. I'm not comparing, I'm more-so praising writers like you both who really come off aggressive even though the style of writing and execution has a laid-back vibe. Thought the message portrayed here was clear and anytime I read your stuff I always feel like it would do so well as an audio. You show a lot of composure and discipline in your style...never look to try and force ideas or rhymes. Very clean flow throughout. Good job, man.