Open Mic: A childhood witness FT SwordedStylez (true storys)

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Yeah it's long but its also dope...Kay SS

....A child see's no demons....
At least that's what ya lead to believe, instead ya deceived
Some of us are raised by psycho's, who aren't clever so breed
Spotting certain actions an events, ill break down an explain
To me receiving gifts and smiles, to being beat downs the same
.......

A normal Sunday night, dinner by six bath n bed
Watching top of the pops, at cheesy songs laughter spread
Until that one second my fathers mood suddenly changed
See id come to realise that with him nothings the same
"Get me a beer bitch" is what i heard him say, "no she said"
But it slipped out, fear lit up her eye's...She know's she dead
Slowly looking over he rose from his seat, approaching my mum
"Get to your room kevin" Me and mum are about to have fun
Rolled up a full clenched fist, struck hard to the face
Knocked down the ground so hard, usually he left hardly a trace
 He'd lost it as he continued to kick hard with metal toe caps
"Leave her alone" as he swung at her stomach heard it go crash
Had to help her, even as a young kid i shivered but ran
Thinking over, "your meant to be a father, n considered a man"
She lay weeping in the corner blood from eye's n lips
I stood staring petrified neither of us would survive this flip
Unforgettable sickening images lie in my head, grabbin my wrist
A ten year old boy wondering why's it's happened like this
Violently dragged across the room to a tiny cupboard
Pitch black n with spider webs the entire wall inside was covered
Slammed shut, i heard the lock twisted re-inforcing the door 
Im desperate to escape, pushing kicking an forcing some more!
Identical down to look cause facial swellings the same
Listening to my mother screaming in pain, yelling my name
Blamed myself, soon slowly i turned to self harm instead
 Locked away i violently lashed out at myself, swinging arms n legs
Tired myself out with screaming and tears leaving eyes red
An everytime the screaming stopped, id wonder if she'd died yet?
Sound of foot steps approaching not it's my turn to pay
The door swung open as i covered my eye's and turned away
Im calling an ambulance, he wisperd aloud to scare
"Mum had an accident, she slipped and tumbled down the stairs"
"You'll tell them exactly that" he gave an evil stare n said
Silently looking over, laid in a heap, im scared she dead
That night my father left the house, forced to stay with family
Couldnt sleep that night, visions of a man who say's he's manly
Years later it's a blessing that he left, supposed to be mean? 
Promise myself i'll get revenge, on an assaulting machine

...True story

       my teeth shatter, i'm scattered, mouth explodin in pain
hard to see as i prepare fa the next blow t'my brain
hear the crowd chantin', as my vision starts t'clear
this kid's a fuckin psycho'n he's missin half an ear
i take a glance t'my right, uncle's chantin t'fight
i pick myself up, lookin for my chance t'survive
i can't back out, i jump'n sink my teeth in his neck
start t'claw this kid t'pieces til he bleeds from his chest
now he's on the floor, i'm fuckin kickin his head
look down at his wasted body, shit this kid could be dead
i feel hands on my shoulders, someone dragged me away
'congratulations rob, you are the champion today!'
but shit aint right, fightin fa men t'gamble on
feel my heart pound in my ears like my own battle song
i feel numb as i walk t'see my uncle'n get my money
"how is that kid?" 'Forget it, Rob, it aint fa you t'worry"
but when he leaves, i follow, need t'see fa myself
how little is life worth? havin t'bleed fa ya wealth
i hear voices, the door's ajar, i take a look in
kid's cryin on the floor with my uncle above him
'You call yourself a WINNER?! You got beat by my nephew'
'a waste of fucking space, that's why ya mum don't respect you'
i see a glimmer of steel'n the intentions are clear
my uncle reaches down and severes off the rest of his ear
'see what u made me do? you worthless piece of shit!'
'clean that fuckin ear up 'fore you bleed out on the carpet!'
as the kid starts to move, i see what's in for the kid
my uncle's best mate ronnie runs up, kickin his ribs
a year older'n me at ten, but how tragic a life?
3 grown men are carvin pieces from his back with a knife
i see my little cousin sami, i run over to stop her
uncle john comes, grabs my hair, smashed my head in the lockers
picks up our sammi, 'look what silly robby did!'
takes her back into his office doesn't give a fuckin shit
Ronnie comes, gives me a smoke, "You shoulda stayed well away"
"you got paid, ok? you fell off ya bike as ya played!"
i nod my head, get my bag, get changed'n cruise home
hoody to hide the swellin, walkin slow with bruised bones
i get in, put the money in the food jar in the kitchen
little bro asks what i been doin, but he don't know what he's missin.....

Edited by Kay B - 16 November 2007 at 7:40pm

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Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: A childhood witness FT SwordedStylez (true storys) Posted: 16 November 2007 at 7:39pm
	Yeah it's long but its also dope...Kay SS ....A child see's no demons.... At least that's what ya lead to believe, instead ya deceived Some of us are raised by psycho's, who aren't clever so breed Spotting certain actions an events, ill break down an explain To me receiving gifts and smiles, to being beat downs the same ....... A normal Sunday night, dinner by six bath n bed Watching top of the pops, at cheesy songs laughter spread Until that one second my fathers mood suddenly changed See id come to realise that with him nothings the same "Get me a beer bitch" is what i heard him say, "no she said" But it slipped out, fear lit up her eye's...She know's she dead Slowly looking over he rose from his seat, approaching my mum "Get to your room kevin" Me and mum are about to have fun Rolled up a full clenched fist, struck hard to the face Knocked down the ground so hard, usually he left hardly a trace He'd lost it as he continued to kick hard with metal toe caps "Leave her alone" as he swung at her stomach heard it go crash Had to help her, even as a young kid i shivered but ran Thinking over, "your meant to be a father, n considered a man" She lay weeping in the corner blood from eye's n lips I stood staring petrified neither of us would survive this flip Unforgettable sickening images lie in my head, grabbin my wrist A ten year old boy wondering why's it's happened like this Violently dragged across the room to a tiny cupboard Pitch black n with spider webs the entire wall inside was covered Slammed shut, i heard the lock twisted re-inforcing the door Im desperate to escape, pushing kicking an forcing some more! Identical down to look cause facial swellings the same Listening to my mother screaming in pain, yelling my name Blamed myself, soon slowly i turned to self harm instead Locked away i violently lashed out at myself, swinging arms n legs Tired myself out with screaming and tears leaving eyes red An everytime the screaming stopped, id wonder if she'd died yet? Sound of foot steps approaching not it's my turn to pay The door swung open as i covered my eye's and turned away Im calling an ambulance, he wisperd aloud to scare "Mum had an accident, she slipped and tumbled down the stairs" "You'll tell them exactly that" he gave an evil stare n said Silently looking over, laid in a heap, im scared she dead That night my father left the house, forced to stay with family Couldnt sleep that night, visions of a man who say's he's manly Years later it's a blessing that he left, supposed to be mean? Promise myself i'll get revenge, on an assaulting machine ...True story my teeth shatter, i'm scattered, mouth explodin in pain hard to see as i prepare fa the next blow t'my brain hear the crowd chantin', as my vision starts t'clear this kid's a fuckin psycho'n he's missin half an ear i take a glance t'my right, uncle's chantin t'fight i pick myself up, lookin for my chance t'survive i can't back out, i jump'n sink my teeth in his neck start t'claw this kid t'pieces til he bleeds from his chest now he's on the floor, i'm fuckin kickin his head look down at his wasted body, shit this kid could be dead i feel hands on my shoulders, someone dragged me away 'congratulations rob, you are the champion today!' but shit aint right, fightin fa men t'gamble on feel my heart pound in my ears like my own battle song i feel numb as i walk t'see my uncle'n get my money "how is that kid?" 'Forget it, Rob, it aint fa you t'worry" but when he leaves, i follow, need t'see fa myself how little is life worth? havin t'bleed fa ya wealth i hear voices, the door's ajar, i take a look in kid's cryin on the floor with my uncle above him 'You call yourself a WINNER?! You got beat by my nephew' 'a waste of fucking space, that's why ya mum don't respect you' i see a glimmer of steel'n the intentions are clear my uncle reaches down and severes off the rest of his ear 'see what u made me do? you worthless piece of shit!' 'clean that fuckin ear up 'fore you bleed out on the carpet!' as the kid starts to move, i see what's in for the kid my uncle's best mate ronnie runs up, kickin his ribs a year older'n me at ten, but how tragic a life? 3 grown men are carvin pieces from his back with a knife i see my little cousin sami, i run over to stop her uncle john comes, grabs my hair, smashed my head in the lockers picks up our sammi, 'look what silly robby did!' takes her back into his office doesn't give a fuckin shit Ronnie comes, gives me a smoke, "You shoulda stayed well away" "you got paid, ok? you fell off ya bike as ya played!" i nod my head, get my bag, get changed'n cruise home hoody to hide the swellin, walkin slow with bruised bones i get in, put the money in the food jar in the kitchen little bro asks what i been doin, but he don't know what he's missin..... Edited by Kay B - 16 November 2007 at 7:40pm


Fatal Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Fatal Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 November 2007 at 2:24am
	Damn this was some crazy shit....kay had a really deep personal verse...flow was great and the story was tight...i remember alot of the shit you told me over msn a while back and you really tranlated that into a dope verse...tig had a dope verse too...flow was tight and the story was crazy as hell...thats some fucked up shit if that really happened...really nice collabo guys...props...


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	kay - decent - emotional piece... didnt feel as though i was IN the situation, so it wasnt as real to me.... it was like someone was telling me the story so it was powerful, but not as powerful as it could have been, some lines were tight, some wording was off, forcing some multis, personal piece tho, so not going to rip it apart SS - story was good, got the point across, story slightly unclear in places as to what was going on, maybe intentional to show you didnt know all what was happening? like kays a few standout lines and an emotional piece

Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 November 2007 at 8:52am
	Thanks fatal n woods, n yeah fatal both are true storys And woods you really wouldn't wanna picture being in that situation....it aint a nice picture lol


Rameez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 31 July 2007 Location: Brampton, CDN Status: Offline Points: 3922 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-40-4 Form: NWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Rameez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 November 2007 at 10:37am
	Well kid I felt ya story.. sorry to hear that chaos in ya family and you too SS I guess a story about ur personal life is what makes the rap better as if u want to put all your feeling in to it.. and I see that here...Any way it was nicely putted together..


Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 November 2007 at 11:55am
	lmao @ 41 views n 4 replys....lazy fucks Thanks ram, feeds appreciated


DressToKill Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote DressToKill Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 November 2007 at 12:02pm
	Kay- If the story's true than I am truely sorry I could never imagine..but shit like this just doesnt do nothing for me because I cant relate..but none the less the story telling was good and it was realistic I could see the position of the child..good descriptive.. SS- I was feeling the story I never seen the topic done before..Your descriptive was good and I liked the rhyming even the lil bit of uk slang hehe..nice job though
	The original comeback kid

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	thanks for the feed guys, and DTK, not many kids had to fight for money so they could help feed their family, so i guess you wouldn't have seen the topic before.
	Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)

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	Good shit guys.. kay like i told you on msn this is up there with the best shit you've written, emotion was crazy, you told the story really well,. SS your shit was nice too, some bars didnt rhyme but that didnt takem uch away, the whole T'survie T livin T'fight, was amnnoying at first but i got used to it. thought kay told the story alittle better but , both were tight. and soem fucked up shit if any of that is true.
	Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now

Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 18 November 2007 at 5:41pm
	Thanks ice and it's ALL true


Freeda5thDawg Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 19 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 1324 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-1-0 Form: WWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Freeda5thDawg Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 18 November 2007 at 6:13pm
	which makes it even better...i cudnt help but feel for both of u guys...shit seemed like some really really tough times, and dats jus by readin...cant imagine the experience...this was all good though, both of you evenly told the stories well, i cant choose a favorite...and both delivered it wit some balanced flows...definitely a great collab, maybe even a classic...styles really impressed me, and i expected nuttin more or less from kay, always have the topical thing down...great shit u 2...


Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 18 November 2007 at 6:37pm
	Thanks freeda, props Classical? Iono...for readers to decide


Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 November 2007 at 7:43pm
	Uppin...deserves more feed


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	Nice Verse You Two. Both Verses Were Real Direct And Had A Lot Of Feeling Behind Them.

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	Dope Collabo Guys Kay- Some Heartfelt Emotion in that piece, good flow but choppy in places. I've heard many of that kind of situation ur piece is in and in know how it sounds and to listen to u express ur emotion bout somethin like that DOPE!! SS- good story, dope flow, good multi's, THis had the entire package for me but the story didnt really shine through your lines so it was hard to pick up the story but i fink i followed it :D DOPE drops guys maybe we'll see some more in the future??


Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 December 2007 at 8:15am
	Thanks guys....props