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YUNG PHENOMENON 
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 Topic: YUNG PHENOM V.S. UNABOMBERPosted: 19 June 2006 at 6:05pm |
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RULES
4 BARZ OR (8 LINES)
NO CREW VOTES
NO D/R VOTES
ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED
1 ROUND
VERSES MUST BE IN BEFORE MIDNIGHT WEDNESDAY
CONSIDER THIS MY CHECK IN
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 19 June 2006 at 6:48pm |
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YUNG PHENOMENON
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Posted: 20 June 2006 at 7:45pm |
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ayo check it- homie my gun is known-ta-blast cuz i blaze-fools...& ya rhymes gettin thrown-da-trash like yesterday's-news....mess wit me & ya dome-will-get-smashed n ya face bruised/-1
to be on top, damn these-cats-thirsty...this kid's not on my level, wat makes u think he's-dat-worthy...i'll put "1 ROCKET" to ya chest like a "T-MAC-JERSEY"/-2
i'm stealin dat #1 spot so u never know how a crook-mihgt-move...gettin ya ass beat is wat playin by da book-might-do...i usually on spray guys but da heater can cook-dikes-2...& i'm the reason yo son don't look-like-u/-3 & -4
aiight there's my verse go ahead and drop
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sparta
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Posted: 21 June 2006 at 11:42am |
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YUNG PHENOMENON
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Posted: 21 June 2006 at 6:38pm |
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aiight thanx for da pops homie
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 22 June 2006 at 9:42am |
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I'll drop in a few hours, just watching the footie..
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 22 June 2006 at 1:13pm |
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Nice little warm up for the tourny,
Oh & i counted your lines an got 10 everytime, so im matching it.. & if you think you dont have 10 i'll show you, you do..
Phenomenon?, i reallllly dont think so.. A son?, nahhh ya had a wet dream then you woke up & sorry to brake your heart but its your avy.. lol..
Chea..
Junior Aka UnBomber Aka IJustFuckedYouUp
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YUNG PHENOMENON
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Posted: 22 June 2006 at 3:25pm |
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yo i only see 7 full then add the half lines and dats 8 i don't see 10 but it's all good so vote up
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 22 June 2006 at 6:02pm |
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homie my gun is known-ta-blast cuz i blaze-fools...
& ya rhymes gettin thrown-da-trash like yesterday's-news....
mess wit me & ya dome-will-get-smashed n ya face bruised/-1
to be on top, damn these-cats-thirsty...
this kid's not on my level, wat makes u think he's-dat-worthy...
i'll put "1 ROCKET" to ya chest like a "T-MAC-JERSEY"/-2
i'm stealin dat #1 spot so u never know how a crook-mihgt-move...
gettin ya ass beat is wat playin by da book-might-do...
i usually on spray guys but da heater can cook-dikes-2...
& i'm the reason yo son don't look-like-u/-3 & -4
Line wise, thats how i saw it..
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 23 June 2006 at 10:25am |
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Uppano..
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sparta
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Posted: 23 June 2006 at 12:12pm |
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I'd say Una to take this. YT had some nice multis and rhymes, especially his first verse, but Una's verse was just more advanced. I was liking the 5-syllable rhyme at the end. Nice couple of personals in there too.
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 2:28pm |
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Oh shit i forgot about this one lmao..
1-0 me upping..
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A.g -rem
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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 3:07pm |
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my vote yung p
to be on top, damn these-cats-thirsty... this kid's not on my level, wat makes u think he's-dat-worthy... i'll put "1 ROCKET" to ya chest like a "T-MAC-JERSEY"/-2 only becuz that line stood out da me vote yung phenom |
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rest in peace
anita gerogeita remore after tha death of my alter ego a angel is born A.g-rem |
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 4:49pm |
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Get fucked lmao..
1-0 me..
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Mackie
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Posted: 23 July 2006 at 8:42am |
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vote Una for better clowin and punchlines, flow was nice nothing special enough to win. not much else to say...
young phenom ya style is played to fuck and sayin u gunna shoot sum1 ain gunna win u a battle. |
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 28 July 2006 at 4:57pm |
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2-0 me cus Youngs votes were not in the slightest explained..
Upping Ko so this is closed before i leave..
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Senor Perfecto
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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 4:29pm |
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Multiple rhymes vs. Multisyllable rhymes...
Yung Phenomenon... multies were ok... Flow and wording of punches were good too... but you had two three-line rhymes which equates to one and a half bars each... Heavy emphasis on multies resulted in filler set-ups but good punches... especially the closer...
UnaBomber... rhymes were forced due to attempts at four or five-syllable rhymes... Standard set-up-punch-set-up-punch structure was effective but punches need to hit harder... Good attempts at wordplay though one was played... Maybe the personals against your opponent have expired... but I don't understand the "Problem"...
Vote: Yung Phenomenon...
Adios...
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 4:45pm |
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Lol, was expectin' Una wit' a easy KO...Maybe I'll read the verses if I got time lata... And yeah, A.g rem's vote doesnt count as it wasnt explained well enough... Una, next time please ask a mod or the vote isn't officially cancelled... Not sayin' I don't agree that vote should be cancelled (it is as of now), but Scotty and the mods would prefer you asked than said it was cancelled... 2-1 UnaBomber, and it's 1st to 5 votes now.. This shit's been open for a while now... Uppin'...
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 25 August 2006 at 3:03pm |
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Lmfao @ Senor.. 2-1..
Come on people.. Upping..
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Posted: 09 September 2006 at 2:41pm |
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i vote fa una...he had a better verse with more, harder hitting punches...The only think i like from yungs verse was the t-mac shit...and another thing i hated about his verse was it was hard to read...if una wouldn't have reposted it, i wouldn't have voted...But yea una for more consistent punch and more in the verse...
Una gmv
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