UK vs US: Orion v 2smooth [Text]

Orion:

Yea someone on his team has said he's a free win for me, he still emotional 'bout gettin' kicked from Renegades, was bitchin' in private 'bout it the other day, The Game fell on stage, some of his crew have agreed (in private) he's essentially bein' stupid, Anna Nicole is a dead ex pornstar, Bush had some polyps removed from his ass lately, Willie Lamond got knocked the fuck out with a dislocated jaw, Slope is another word for Oriental-Asian people and USA lost in Vietnam, his brother died gettin' run down by a car... There's more that might need explaining too but really you should get it all regardless... And I can back all of this up if he starts crying and claiming it isn't true or isn't fair or some shit, which will probably happen when he loses

Wipe Out...

You got it in fa me 'cuz you jealous of the infamy
But ya country's ALREADY SAID thatchu a FREE WIN fa me!
It's tru, and he got a thing fa me, we seen it's blatant
Hell he couldn't be TooSmooth about shit as a kemo patient
STILL bitchin' 'bout gettin' kicked, this fake's enraged
A west coast faggot trippin', kinda like The Game on stage
Ya crew's embarrassed, you're outta control
Gettin' publicly fucked so much you'll end up like Anna Nicole
Type to diss lyin' outcha ass, it's evident, look
You couldn't pull sickness outta there if you were President Bush
You'll probly say I ducked Kon like I ain't kill him before
See you're predictably played wit' a soft touch like bitches in sports
Cryin' in denial, just face it that I'm boss
Like Willie Lamond when we'll see ya diss-located with a loss
Everythin' you have'll be played, this kid ain't hard
US goin' down the Slope to death like this was 'Nam
Call yaself Smooth but you lyin' sucka
'Cuz this motherfucker's run down and dead already, just like his brother
Now you dead too, ya mother's cryin' in shame
Sayin' I'm the son she never had, killin' it instead of dyin' in vain

Stop the fight... it's over

Ill vote on this later...though i will say talking about his brother isnt on O....Though my vote will not be judged on that i just think u took things to another level and it wasn't cool...

thanks for the vote, DTK... good looks... 1-0 me...

Oh and it's a battle...don't be like omg so uncalled for...the objective is to diss...diss means disrespect... Maybe I'd have shown him some respect and taken it easy if he deserved it, but he runs around like a bitch so he'll get treated like one

you know what? feel free to keep posting an' swayin' an' bitchin'... cheaaa... just do what you do, bitch...

bla bla bla .... sway sway sway.....

O, 2s, both your posts are gettin hidden untill the battles over.

keep out of the thread till its over

*edit* that goes for you too DTK


Edited by Scotty32 - 31 July 2007 at 2:26pm

LMAO then that must be someone else...maybe the other Canadian...seriously my bad...sorry...lmao man oh man, even the best of us make mistakes...

Orion - Opener wasnt the best. forget the no link bullshit, but in general its quite a lack punch in such a battle, second bar was hot, Smooth punches are a bit played, but shit, this was flipped in a different manner, good shit, Game punch was nice, not killer, flow was cool, Anna Nicole punch was hot i dont know where DTK was sayin' that shit was played, the bitch has only been dead a few months, i dont get how its played. none the less, its a dope punch, President bush line is hot, you're showing real consistency here, bitches in sports line is hot, encorped wit' some hot wordplay to assist is, Willie [Limond] punch was dopeness, may have gone over the head of non brits, cos they aint know about Amir, but the wordplay was hot as hell, and the punch in general was shit hot. Nam line was a bit blahh, wasnt feelin' it, a bit indirect and unnesecary, The brother line was hot. Im sorry smooth for ya loss no doubt, and yea its touchin' borders, but the other voters are trippin' on this shit and i dont get why, its not like he dissed your brother direct, he used him to aide the punch, and just cos its ruthless, aint mean you gotta get ya knickers in a bunch (aimed to voters). Closer was nice, should have been killer for a closer, but it was still hot. Overall, this was a mad consistent verse with a couple of killer bars, flow was sweet throughout, and aside from a couple of ailing bar, this verse was hot.

Smooth - Opener was cool, nice wordplay with a solid punch to wrap it, second bar was mad confusing tho, i mean, i understand the concept, but i just dont think the punch was effective. anywho, the follow up was hot, the lawyer shit dont get used enough on him, which is mad considerin' how many lawyer punches there must be out there, but yea, was feelin' that shit. The crew link punch is a little bit blahh to be honest, first and foremost because there is a link, its just on the avy spot of the crew members. Yea theres no link on the crew pages, but the punch is a little bit redundant for me, not effective. The james Ayebola thing, man. That shit had so much potential, but i think the way you worded it was wrong. Claimin' him to be a former heavyweight is a mistake, because hes not, and thats why i think the punch missed, but shit that coulda been something special. The mayweather/de la hoya punch was fire, there seems to be a bit of a boxing theme in this battle, haha, but yea that was shit hot, Gassed up punch was a bit of a waste, for me anyway. cant really explain, i just dont feel the punch. The massive hole shit was funny, nice nameflip, fall o shit was a nice flip, nice punch, nothin' major an' out of the ordinary tho, and the closer was nice. again not killer, but still a solid punch.

Overall - This shit was a close battle. Orion came very very consistent with a collective of solid punches and a few killer punches, and Smooth hit hard when he hit, but had a few punches that were misses for me. I think, when it comes down to it, Orion had a much more consistent verse, and thats what took the battle, Had smooth just bettered a one or two of his bars, he would have got it, like i say, i thought it was close as hell, but consistency was the key here,

Orion GMV.

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Right....

Orion

You got it in fa me 'cuz you jealous of the infamy
But ya country's ALREADY SAID thatchu a FREE WIN fa me!
Dope i dont really care for what people are saying about proof bullshit, i  KNOW alotta people expected you to win this including myself, i aint goona lie...so nice personal and nice witty punch to open with not the hardest hitting one ill read im sure but still nice
It's tru, and he got a thing fa me, we seen it's blatant
Hell he couldn't be TooSmooth about shit as a kemo patient
Haha nice, personal and decent play had humour too had me smiling nice bar
STILL bitchin' 'bout gettin' kicked, this fake's enraged
A west coast faggot trippin', kinda like The Game on stage
Not bad, first time iv seen this play so its origonal but i can see it becoming played VERY quickly lol, Nice though it landed and was worded nicely
Ya crew's embarrassed, you're outta control
Gettin' publicly fucked so much you'll end up like Anna Nicole
Haha iv seen alotta anna nicole plays but this was worded nicely which made it fresh...nice hit
Type to diss lyin' outcha ass, it's evident, look
You couldn't pull sickness outta there if you were President Bush
Dope
You'll probly say I ducked Kon like I ain't kill him before
See you're predictably played wit' a soft touch like bitches in sports
Lol nice, flipped a punch he was likely to drop which took ammo away from him and landed a punch...i like it
Cryin' in denial, just face it that I'm boss
Like Willie Lamond when we'll see ya diss-located with a loss
Dope
Everythin' you have'll be played, this kid ain't hard
US goin' down the Slope to death like this was 'Nam
Nice play...hit well
Call yaself Smooth but you lyin' sucka
'Cuz this motherfucker's run down and dead already, just like his brother
Though i disagree with using his brothers death im not goona have that in mind when i vote, like nep said this DID HIT and it did hit well, it was a decent punch whether i agree with it being used or not
Now you dead too, ya mother's cryin' in shame
Sayin' I'm the son she never had, killin' it instead of dyin' in vain
Again same as above....nice punch

Overall - As i expected REAL dope verse O, flow was on point as usual and all punches landed....very impressive though i expected nothing less


2mooth

Claimed he left... but quickly ran back guardin' his spot
...How's O 360 degrees, but still the farthest from hot?
 Dope, nice play and decent punch...good opener landed nicely

...let's go...
 
think you're 'dope'... but really you're one of the worst around
'cuz you're only an 'O' - even in the U.K. you aren't worth a 'pound'!
Nice, again good play and the punch landed, was delivered nicely
an' You ain't structured, but you swear ya' rhymes are proper
Lawyer my fuckin' ass! Even JUDAS denied your offer!!!
Lol laughed at this when you first showed me it on msn, goes alot deeper than the first read...nice personal
i'll make ya' suffer... the truth is ya flow stinks
you and dope is like ya crew page, homie... there's no link!
This was ok but didnt hit as hard as his crews not around otherwise they would have a link, fell off here it wasn't a bad punch but iv seen similar shit used before
PUSSY... you ducked Shav again because you know he'd fold ya
but now this 'former heavyweight' is gettin' shot like James Oyebola
Nice
you 'may weather' under these shots when they destroy ya'...
'cuz your punches are outta their prime... like De La Hoya!!!
Dope, decent play and it hit
man, you suck! you're just a bitch, so i'ma leave you smacked, chump...
chose ya' nickname from a star 'cuz all you'll ever be is "gassed-up"!!!
LOL dope
...doesn't that suck?? everyone see's that i'm smashin' Sul...
you wack fuck! your style's like ya' name... it's a MASSIVE HOLE!!
Dope
i'll bash ya' skull quick and let ya' mind disolve slow...
'cuz you claim your a leader yet i'm makin' ya' FALL, O!! (follow)
Nice, rhyme is abit off but thats probably just my accent
he says that the site is dying? well now i'm breakin' this ho...
...L.A. is FINE... it's common to have a NEGATIVE O!!!!!
Dope....nice closer

Overall - Again REAL dope verse congrats on that for starters, had some real nice punches, real nice personals flow was dope...

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Overall - This was REAL hard to decide a winner like everyone else has said i enjoyed both verse's alot, both had real dope verse's both had dope personals and both's flow was on point....For that reason i have to vote on who's verse i enjoyed reading more and who was more consistent and for that i have to go with Orion, simply because smooth had that one bar (The crew link one) that i didn't see as origonal or as hard hitting...it was weaker than O's weakest bar.....Hope its broke down enough but this was REAL close guys......

Vote - Orion

Dope battle


Edited by Scotty32 - 01 August 2007 at 5:29pm

You voted for O u idiot how can it be aimed at you lol...

....No nep it wasn't aimed at you