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Junior Shade 
Superior Member 
Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
 Topic: Fatal Vs. UnaBomber..Posted: 10 October 2006 at 4:44pm |
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 11 October 2006 at 10:58am |
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Check check yo.... |
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Junior Shade
Superior Member
Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 13 October 2006 at 3:06pm |
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Imma be dropping tonight at some point...
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Junior Shade
Superior Member
Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 14 October 2006 at 4:51pm |
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I just typed my verse then somehow clicked the wrong button & lost it all.. For fucks sake..
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Mackie
Standard Member 
Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1505 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW |
Posted: 14 October 2006 at 5:30pm |
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lol i always click dat fukkin clear form button..
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Junior Shade
Superior Member
Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 15 October 2006 at 2:07pm |
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Aiight, sorry about dropping more than'a few Flash play's just no-one's used them well i dont think, & there's nothing much else to say.. Fuckin' lost my last verse somehow, personally this is not better than the last one but meh..
Expo- According to The Dynasty's little expo's on each member, Flash aka Fatal 'top's' most people in the battlefield's..(lol).. He's also on'a little winning streak....
I've wanted to fuck you up for'a while now...
Flash 'top's' no-one in the field's, shame it's true..
Kid's i'll 'make like his avy' an' leave this "baby, blue" Plus your records'a joke, what's happening dude? Your "racking up win's" but from battling newb's Im shattering crew's, ya'll get dumped an' bent, right.. ..look at this "bitch Flash" like'a "drunken Hen night" Your lyrically more 'garbage' than the trash in the can I'll 'serve you for dinner', it's literally "Flash in the pan" Kid your dogdy poo, an'i guess you should step son Plus your crews'a "fag patch" an' not'a 'nicorette one' Una could drop filler an' still smash in your dome Im in 'detention alone', the way J's in'a "class of his own" [chea] Your wack an' we know that this rook is'a loser Kid we don't want "Flash,-back" cus we "look to the future" I know what your dropping is trash an' it's spam ha!.. ..Una can 'picture it', he's got "Flash on his camera" Junior "Make's Shit Happen", you try an' just do this Kid the "only thing your topping" is The Dynasty crew list [word] Im eating your team an' one-by-one there shaken Im'a 'burn your streak' like i've "over done your bacon".. Your not even close to the level you think you are..
The Janitor..
Junior aka UnaBomber..
Assassins..
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 24 October 2006 at 2:46pm |
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Aite yo...i havnt started this yet but will get around to it soon...i know u aint a bitch n aint gonna trip on my wait...but will do soon tho...-1
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 26 October 2006 at 7:05pm |
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I've wanted to fuck you up for'a while now...
^fag...
Ima explain some shit because i want everybody to understand my drop...First: I got alota flips and personals in here...Una used to go by the name Junior Shade, then jus Junior, hence the Shade play...the "Best" crew here used to be Renegades which was led by Orion, the "Best" on LA...Junior always wanted to be a Renegade...Ikon/Game called him out and he ducked "because of the tourny" lol...In one of my first battles, some scrub used the "flash in the pan" line which happens to be REALLY similar...Junior jumped to like 3 different crews...didnt get ranked pro untill AFTER Orion Left...Orion=O...J=Junior, J=Jenna Jameson...
Sorry bout the essay^ i jus want everything to be clear
Ok...
Tops none in tha feild? N Battlin Newbs?
Well YOU do 2 bitch, An next Im TOPPIN YOU!
I aint stoppin fool..ya Flash jokes are played
Ya bitter its true, cuz you were REJECTED BY RENEGADES!
Packed wit Personals, smash generic wordplay any day
Its like im "Flippin tha switch" the way "Flash outshines the Shade!"
Im stoppin this gay, This "Crippled Boxer's" "Punches are Lame!"
If you Clean Shit Up, WHY THA FUCK YOU KEPT DUCKIN GAME?!
Its a fuckin shame, switch roles im Murkin this Fan
Whens tha last time dinner was EVER SERVED INA PAN?! (dumass!)
Im hurtin this man, Slash J like Shish-Ka-Bob
Theres nothin left to say? So the Kid-Bit-A-Nov! Lmao
...Pop Pop Pop...*moment of silence*
Fuck a Bomber, Yous a Coward, Make this Bitch Fold 2
You only won the tourny CUZ MACKIE DICKRODE YOU!
Yous a clique whore too, its true ya jump crews quick
like Re enacting Porno Flicks, J Jumps Dudes Dicks! (jenna, ya ho)
While i Flow Sick, your Decent but even the Best Told Ya No
Why you think it took O leavin for u to FINALLY GET PRO? OH!!
So..I give U an L, Underestimate me, Ya Gave It Away
Dont Worry
This Aint Tha First Time that F comes 1st Before J!
Im Closer Than YOU Thought, Bitch
Fatal...
Aka Flash...
Dynasty...Darkside Bitch
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 26 October 2006 at 7:14pm |
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BTW Tha Mackie line refers to Mackies verse in the tag battle against ikon and ice...he claims he voted for junior because he didnt like ikon...no beef mack...ya still ma boy BLUE! lol
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Mackie
Standard Member
Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1505 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW |
Posted: 26 October 2006 at 7:17pm |
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i will vote bu i dont get this So..I give U an L, or is that jus coz u doin the aphabetical thing wit f n j?... also lol @ mackie punch, verse are always better when my names in it..
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 26 October 2006 at 7:21pm |
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It alphabetical shit lol...also glad u like tha shout...
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I-kontinue
Veteran 
The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 27 October 2006 at 12:15am |
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Good battle...
UnaBomber... A verse full of wordplays... Some good uses of them, but a handful didnt hit very hard... Flow was just Okay... Flow is one thing ya need to incorporate, and it seems you've went back to ya older style. This wasnt Simple Yet Complex... The underlined words and bold stuff displayed ideas you had, but didnt seem to be thought out enough to land hard hits.. resulting in forced lines/ideas. A verse that Would have topped most, but I really think you underestimated Fatal on this one... Fatal came with a more polished verse... Flow was on point.. Ya had the personals and worded them very nicely.. Alotta people may have the personal, and may not how to turn it into a diss, but you really imppressed me on this... Wordplay used came off effective... Only line I wasnt feeling was the closer... You gotta end hard! But keep droppin' like this, and stay active in the fields... Be consistent like this, and you'll cop a prettiter rank... v/ Fatal |
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2smooth
Standard Member
Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 27 October 2006 at 12:35pm |
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aight, here's the real breakdown... una - opener, nice, personal w/ the avy... not the hardest punch but effective, flow was on point... 2nd bar was nice again, lol, good punch, direct bar... 3rd bar was aight, nothing special... play was kinda funny but not that effective... 4th bar was a great idea, but couldve been worded more effectively IMO... still a good bar... LOL @ 5th bar... shit was fuckin' funny... good play/ punch... 6th bar was big uppin' yaself... 7th bar is a good play/ punch... nice and direct, too, gj... 8th bar, more of the same, good bar... 9th bar, good idea and nice play, punch landed, but couldve been harder... closer was a tight play, lol... overall, good verse fatal - opener was kinda wack, bro... flow was off, mismatched the rhyme... wasn't much there IMO... 2nd bar, ehh... maybe he IS bitter, but that would've been a long time ago... that was never even his crew (he might have wanted to be a Renegade, but idk so it's w/e)... flow was better here tho... 3rd bar was niiiice tho, good shit... good play/ punch... 4th bar was kinda weak again... cleaning shit up has nothing to do with duckin' people... the setup ruined the punch for me here... 5th bar, haha, nice flip, but it was kinda forced ("murkin' this fan")... still hit tho, good bar... 6th bar was weak... flow was off again, rhymes mismatched, and it wasn't really even that strong a punch (couldve been worded better or something cuz the idea was aight) if it landed... wasn't feelin' it... 7th bar, decent bar, direct... flow is better here, too... only thing i wasn't feelin' is that he got 5 votes to win, not just 1... takes away from ya punch... 8th bar is fire, tho... nice play/punch and FINALLY ya flow is on point... good bar... 9th bar was weak... flow and rhymes mismatched again, and it just wasn't worded well enough to have a good effect... closer, ehh... kinda forced ya idea here... but it was a good idea... just didn't come out as well as you thought it might... overall, not bad, actually a lot better than ya old shit was... good job... opener - una although fatal came correct, and had a lot better verse than i would have expected from him, he just didn't match una here IMO... therefore, |
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dalinquent
Superior Member
Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
Posted: 27 October 2006 at 10:37pm |
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Nice battle...
Una...nice verse, nice plays as usual...i felt ya opener was pretty good regardless of avy changing colors...i remember that baby blue background so it hit...next bar was okay...didn't get the next one though, that may be cause i dont feel like thinking though...the next bar was nice, concept was okay...detention shit was nice...flash back shit was hot...
Flash...also a good verse...first bar seemed filler-ish, second bar made up for it though...good personal...the flash outshine the shade shit...pure fire...not much more mentionable in the first verse besides the chorus...second verse was good too...opener was nice, good excution of the personal...again not too much more mentionables until the end...last 2 bars was hot...
Overall, I think this was a nice ass battle...Una came as he always does with hella plays and shit...some nice hitting shit in there...there was some shit i didn't get but fuck it...Flash, I didn't expect that from you...You came pretty damn good...You fought good from the underdog spot...The only reason I think you loss the battle was becuase too much of ya verse wasn't hitting for me...
UNA gets my vote for consistency...though I feel flash brought his a game...he just didn't execute good enough to take home the W
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Junior Shade
Superior Member
Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 28 October 2006 at 1:58pm |
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Props to Flash but you got alot of shit twisted homie.. Im not swinging but alot of your 'personals' are false.. anyway keep them rolling im not botherd..
Cheers to my votes, game urmmm whatever...
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 29 October 2006 at 7:16pm |
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^Yea whut ever...lmao @ shit not hittin...i aint gonna bitch bout tha votes, i know yall honest, even tho i personally think i got this battle...props to jr...2-1 Una...upps fa votes...
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Prophecy
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Joined: 16 September 2006 Status: Offline Points: 549 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-7-0 Form: Unknown |
Posted: 29 October 2006 at 8:51pm |
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Una Flash 'top's' no-one in the field's, shame it's true.. Fatal
The Break Overall Vote-Fatal I felt he had better personals and stronger punches, He really came strong on this one, Good work man, Props 2 both |
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I Fuckin Suck
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ILLSTARRR
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LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 29 October 2006 at 9:01pm |
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whoa flash sickest verse I ever saw u spit.. good shit yo keep it up
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Junior Shade
Superior Member
Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 30 October 2006 at 9:46am |
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Lol... ANOTHER Dynasty for Dynasty... It's getting kind silly now..
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 30 October 2006 at 1:07pm |
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Dope battle from both....
Iv not got long so im goona keep it short, if either want a better explanation just say and i will re-post later tonight. opener - una closer - una punches - tie wordplays - una flow - una personals - fatal Enjoyment - Una This was a hard battle to judge because both gave and took dope punches, This come down to who's verse i enjoyed more and felt was slightly harder hitting, and that verse was...UnaBombers, Not to say fatals verse didnt hit because he threw some dope punches, i just feel the punches that i loved in una's verse hit harder.....Dope battle Vote - Una |
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