Open Mic: It Builds Character

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   Dick Chainy is back!!! 

just some shit i put together....chea

These rascals that are far from street 
Are traveling the arctic sea like cattle for the sharks to eat 
Beef for the carnivores, 
Sleep on the art of war, get tackled by a Spartan fleet 
That cheats on the law of course 
So you'll prolly catch us in shackles if you call police 
Evil from the get go 
Walking with a basket of apples from the garden's trees 
Creeping through these buildings: castles of the godless g's 
Fighting for a rep or a title like ''exec''
I'll riot for respect, and these battles kept my bars unique 
Yes, it builds character , I rightfully obsess 
About not swallowing my pride, I'm 
Following the guide lines, the righteousness has left
I''m talking to the bosses, the savage men you answered to 
A labyrinth where animals of average strength will damage you 
They're packing things, accidents have happened when 
Bastards with the cannons sinned....tragic ends I can't approve
And everybody's rapping now, that's murdering the rap sales 
''Stories ''bout snitches'' way dirtier than ''rat tails''
I see that they are liars, I''m a student of the truth, yes 
Moving where the goons crept 
Yes, I know the rules, older dudes told the truth 
And schooled me to a true vet 
A lame on the streets is, a fool if he wears gold
With kids on the block still doing what they do best
Like raiders in Egypt in a tomb of a pharaoh .....

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CHAIN Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote CHAIN Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: It Builds Character Posted: 11 November 2007 at 6:46pm
	Dick Chainy is back!!! just some shit i put together....chea These rascals that are far from street Are traveling the arctic sea like cattle for the sharks to eat Beef for the carnivores, Sleep on the art of war, get tackled by a Spartan fleet That cheats on the law of course So you'll prolly catch us in shackles if you call police Evil from the get go Walking with a basket of apples from the garden's trees Creeping through these buildings: castles of the godless g's Fighting for a rep or a title like ''exec'' I'll riot for respect, and these battles kept my bars unique Yes, it builds character , I rightfully obsess About not swallowing my pride, I'm Following the guide lines, the righteousness has left I''m talking to the bosses, the savage men you answered to A labyrinth where animals of average strength will damage you They're packing things, accidents have happened when Bastards with the cannons sinned....tragic ends I can't approve And everybody's rapping now, that's murdering the rap sales ''Stories ''bout snitches'' way dirtier than ''rat tails'' I see that they are liars, I''m a student of the truth, yes Moving where the goons crept Yes, I know the rules, older dudes told the truth And schooled me to a true vet A lame on the streets is, a fool if he wears gold With kids on the block still doing what they do best Like raiders in Egypt in a tomb of a pharaoh .....

Fatal Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Fatal Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 11 November 2007 at 8:58pm
	Nice verse chain...good multies...however ya rhyme scheme was fucked in sections which really slowed down the verse for me...like the "my pride, Im" line really fucked ya flow and the last 8 lines too...the rhyme scheme was off w/ odd rhyming lines continueing on every other line...but yea aside from the odd rhyme scheme i didnt like, i thought the verse a good read...keep droppin man... ...1


CHAIN Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote CHAIN Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 12 November 2007 at 5:14am
	lol ^^^^^funny ...i always write my shit to beats like it's "actual" verse maybe it's just 'cause u can't follow the flow ...funny Edited by CHAIN - 12 November 2007 at 5:28am

Point Blank Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Point Blank Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 12 November 2007 at 12:35pm
	I''m talking to the bosses, the savage men you answered to A labyrinth where animals of average strength will damage you Oh Shit!! This Was One Of Your Sickest Verses I've Seen In A While...Flow An Multies Seemed Perfect To Me. Keep It Up

SwordedStylez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4922 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote SwordedStylez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 12 November 2007 at 12:41pm
	this was tight, the content could be upped in places, but i was really feelin the callback rhymes throughout These rascals that are far from street Are traveling the arctic sea like cattle for the sharks to eat Beef for the carnivores, Sleep on the art of war, get tackled by a Spartan fleet the flow there was real nice (good opener) stay up. Peace.
	Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's)