Text Battle Archive: mcwoods vs I-kontinue

due in 48 hours, 12 lines, usual rules.

*Admits he’s never really experienced a lot of what he writes about (has gun talk Open Mics)
**Lil wayne got a teardrop tattoo (after soulja slim’s death)
***Click
****in his avy, said a girl wrote that black on his face, black eye…
***** mcwoods is meant to be pronounced emcee woods, but everybody assumed/assumes it was/is pronounced “mick”woods… Mick = Mickey Mouse. Mouses/rats are pests... and he's an annoying pest with his random disses people say
******Current wrestler, Ex-weightlifter Mark Henry entered and won strong man competitions. Rumored to be the worlds strongest man eva 'n what not: http://www.criticalbench.com/Mark-Henry.htm



I can’t respect a BITCH with no facts in his raps…*
Want to be Wayne? Im’a leave ya feelings matchin’ his tat** (Thank me later..)
You’ll be “permanently crying” when I beat you a third…
“You’ll wanna fly away”… The SECOND time you’ll wish you were “Bird”***
We all know of the 1st… You’re a faggot in taste:
Fuckin’ nerd has grown accustomed havin’ black on his face!****
You CAN’T be “emcee” woods… We DON’T see you as rap…
It’s more like “Mick” to us ’cus you’re more equal the rat*****
I say Henry was a legend, it’s a shame we lost him…
‘Cus I ain’t seen a Mark liftin’ weight via bar SINCE…*******
I STILL ain't seein' how peeps call this boy GOOD
'Cus like Bunyan, "I can use 'BULL' and destroy Woods"

...due today?

Doesn't usual rules include NO FLIPPING?

na the usual rules state flipping is allowed

thanks

vote cancelled.... just cause it wernt explained fully.

Ikon- Opener was a strong one, had a personal in the setup and a strong punch..2nd bar was dope though first two punches used the same personal in a sense and were about Weezy but still they were nice and were a great way to open it up..3rd bar nice not on par with that 2nd bar but still a cool hit...4th bar i wasn't feeling mainly cause i wouldn't have understood it unless you gave an expo which was pretty long and stretched so i thought it was just a bad bar..5th bar picked it up and it was dope second best bar of your verse(best bar was the wishing he was bird)..And closer was a nice strong finish..Overall- Your verse started off nice and finished nice but you had one bar in the middle of it that was very bad compared to the rest of the verse..Nonetheless, nice verse, had some humour and dope bars...

McWoods- Opener was nice but didn't come off as big as maybe you expected, still nice tho..2nd bar was such a dope concept but it needed more work because it works in the sense of "Battle One Eyed Kon" but it doesn't make grammatical sense in "Battle Won Ikon" and the play has to work both ways to be dope IMO..but damn that idea was nice thought it could've been a crazy punch..3rd bar is very similar to the second bar feed, it wasn't worded nicely enough, even making it con-fused wouldn't fix it perfectly yet but it was another dope idea..4th bar WAS dope, no problems with anything there lol..5th bar was a nice idea and a nice punch..Closer was dope too...So, your verse started out with a nice little opener, had two bars in question, and then had 3 strong bars after it..You had a nice verse, great ideas but not all of them were turned into the punches they could've been

 

Overall- It was an extremelly close battle, but both had nice bars throughout with Ikon having one bar i thought was bad while Woods had pretty much two i thought weren't completed the best way with the wording..If he could've worderd it/worked it differently then you could've taken this battle since all his other bars were nice but they turned out to be nice concepts rather than nice bars so Ikon takes this...Plus Kon brought lots of personals to this battle as Woods brought nameplays...Oh yeah, and Woods your pm box was full and i had a big typed out message to send you describing even more in detail why those 2 plays weren't worked nicely enough IMO but alas, it didn't send since ya need to empty it so if ya want, pm me if ya got a problem or want more explanation i took a lot more time than i thought with this vote anyway...

 

V/Ikon...

la voting

hmm so he's ya real leader eh!...

Why not jus take the deserved loss like a man? Yeah, Game didn't come up to his usual standard, but he still beat you IMHO.