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    Posted: 30 December 2007 at 4:17pm
Out in Round one you lot stupid ?? Go wank over your multis

Saw the wack votes, and im trying to keep calm
Gonna kill you for being a bitch like voters in Pakistan
I come through and punch all the rest? They bitch slap
They all delusional, people they like the Don Quixote of rap
Im so good, you all know that, i do this shit with ease
like joe budden mixed with a brilliant brain like Socrates
People be talking shit about me ? you watch your mouth
Or ill hit you so hard your end up looking like Amy Winehouse
Dont need faith im the best, reason make you beleive
Where all your bars sell out like its New years eve
Call me Lloyd mayweather cause these punches never cease
lyrically you have no weapons like you in the mexican police
Your not on my level even call you wack to an extent
Winning by fraud like you were kenyas fucking President
Average, I read your verses every fucking punch missed
While people asking me for more like i was Oliver twist
I aint a Jew im an atheist i listen to the logic and reason my rhymes are perfect like the New England Patriots season
Ask around people, theyll tell you that i dont play
And my punches hurt more then your head on new years day
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I Mauled Ya Rep,And Ya Dignity's About To Fall Next
Frank Couldnt Be Eating Me If His Chips Were 'All Dressed'!
Dude You Got Dull Text,So My Skills Will Handle Yah
You Claim Your A Punchin Damager,But You Aint Got The Stamina..
I Put Frank In The Dirt Now,Damn Il Put Ya In A Hearst Clown
Wait..Didnt I Already Leave You In The Past Of The First Round!?
I Put This Jerk In His Place,Hes Pissed Cuz He Couldnt Finish First In The Race
So I Made Him An Archive,And Wiped The Dumb Smirk Off His Face
His Impact Is Dim,He Talks Big But In Actuallity His Raps Are Slim
So Watch Dress Throw-Back At Him Like Shaq Under The Rim
Il Amount To Hundreds Of Wins,While This Dude Is Left Running
He Couldnt Break Me Down If I Was Food In His Stomach
Thats Right Franky..Your Tryin To Be Ressurected But You'll Fall Hater
And Your Shots Dont Count For Nothing Like Black 70's Baseball Players
You Say Your Hot,Well I Can See Your Less Than A Hall Of Famer
Your Shots Couldnt Be In-D(Indy) With All The Pacers..
 
 
 


Edited by DressToKill - 30 December 2007 at 4:44pm
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Lol wasnt even dissing you, but fair play. Should be fun, not bad man, like to see an emcee trying.

Edited by frank white - 30 December 2007 at 4:45pm
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Originally posted by frank white frank white wrote:

Out in Round one you lot stupid ?? Go wank over your multis

Saw the wack votes, and im trying to keep calm
Gonna kill you for being a bitch like voters in Pakistan
I come through and punch all the rest? They bitch slap
They all delusional, people they like the Don Quixote of rap
Im so good, you all know that, i do this shit with ease
like joe budden mixed with a brilliant brain like Socrates
People be talking shit about me ? you watch your mouth
Or ill hit you so hard your end up looking like Amy Winehouse
Dont need faith im the best, reason make you beleive
Where all your bars sell out like its New years eve
Call me Lloyd mayweather cause these punches never cease
lyrically you have no weapons like you in the mexican police
Your not on my level even call you wack to an extent
Winning by fraud like you were kenyas fucking President
Average, I read your verses every fucking punch missed
While people asking me for more like i was Oliver twist
I aint a Jew im an atheist i listen to the logic and reason my rhymes are perfect like the New England Patriots season
Ask around people, theyll tell you that i dont play
And my punches hurt more then your head on new years day
 
Pretty much thought it was aimed at me cuz of that..been droppin alot of multies lately..
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Not at all man, a random verse, but hey would be rude not to reply
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Ill...opener was sick as, mexican/kenya/closer were excellent too, another very good read...stay at it

DTK, not your best, nothing stood out really...nice rhyming, etc, but nothing really hard in there
Не все потеряно пока...
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Dude i know deep down you a fan though
Elton john get the fuck behind your piano
Why the fuck you got your girl in every pic for ?
Dumb wanker acts as if hese never seen a pussy before
You a Steve Howard Rapper you aint never scoring
Ask around even Sparta thinKs your verses are boring
Your weak noone listen when you attempt to speek
Imitate a rapper? Rameez has been doing you for weeks
Like i said before, its nice to see that you tried
your Verse like Big Ls ? Well maybe after he died
I aint gonna loose you aint ever been on a streak
Your styles played, like having a Turkey sandwich this week

Your my Fermina Daza, I Love Martin Jol {legend} says:
damm his verse was boring
pick up the phone, fucker says:
yeah, i know

Edited by frank white - 30 December 2007 at 5:13pm
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"Imitate a rapper? Rameez has been doing you for weeks"

da reply came off more aggressive but ur random verse was def more lyrical...nice shit all the way thru, i did enjoy ur plays...dress was alright, kinda sounded too quickly done imo...closer was the most worthy hitter there...
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Originally posted by frank white frank white wrote:


Imitate a rapper? Rameez has been doing you for weeks

your Verse like Big Ls ? Well maybe after he died
 
lol at those two punches, nice..your original verse was dope too lots of nice plays in there..And Dress, you had nice multies in your drop seemed like that's what you aimed for most..but yeah, nice stuff Frank..keep it up...
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