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 Topic: Point Blank & -Set-... Comfortably NumbPosted: 05 January 2008 at 3:56pm |
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-Set- I'm comfortably numb, oblivious to pain For the rest of my life, in this position i'll remain I'll never reconsider other lyricists again Whether dudes are dope or ridiculously lame Bein vicious an insane, thats how i got where i reside Ignorin all my brothers as they're droppin at my side Copin with the problems that my honesty abides Arguments are startin in my conscious an my mind The nonsense is whats dominant, no knowledge is inside My souls hollow when it comes to talk of confidence and pride But when it comes to rappin, the God's are pushed aside Thats why my occupation an my faith constantly collide I'm obnoxious as a prodigy, but i'm benevolent too Cos if dudes are struggling to die, i'm helpin 'em through My power's causin more shake's than an elephants hooves So you can go to hell if you don't think i'm an elegant dude! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It's night time : I'm sittin by myself in a room Everthing above is simply telling the truth Tryna teach myself that there aint a thing that jealousy soothes In a world where hatred and intelligance booms Focus on what I desire, swirve the irrelevant news Raised like hilter in a room that's infested with jews I smoke the best from the crews, like im puffin a blunt Witnesses who claim their hard struggle to front Truth is im comfortably numb, mankind is ignored I don't listen to anything except my mind anymore Writin all the time, day or night when I'm bored As long as I go down in history as that guy who was raw Inject the words spoke like the verse is a herb smoked eject the worst toke an hop in a hearse curbed, cloaked soaked by a flow joked that only knows one hits n hoes choked on the fumes that loom -now i speak wit tricks n codes im sick wit notes, so to compete wit kids is a fuckin mockery im prevalent to victories wit written hypothesis of hypocrises call me the rhymin socrates wen truth hits the proof is my mind lucid so finding a way to get to me is easy but before defeat i'll leave ya flesh putrid im the coolest, not lupe but this fiasco must come to an end how can you dudes crank dat an not think its the dumbest trend with the time i spend how can you not kick the rhymes i blend im one of the finest men to eva lay a track an break minds to bend i subtract the whack so minus them is a plus while i add da hits im 100 % geniune, pure and raw like uncut coke and no additives yet still im mad at this--tha fact is that i still see none of tha same My conscience and I are the only ones still in love wit tha game.......... im comfortably numb, deaf but not dumb blind to the fact that 99% of you succumb the other..1..sees the light at the tunnel not drained by the same fluid flown in a funnel my rebutle...is none, nada, theres nothin to say ive stopped all and left those chosen fucked to stay enough of yay, enough of hoes, its all misery what happend to storytellin and verses of wizardary want that real, then to the store purchase ur history my chemistry made me comfortably numb, it aint a mystery I walk the path to my own flow n own beat Its just a lil better to enjoy when noone knows me |
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frank white
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Posted: 05 January 2008 at 4:04pm |
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OK.. Point i liked your verse seemed to capture the state that Hip hop is in at the moment.You also laid down the aims that every Emcee should aim for and that is to aim to make their bark on history. Set at first i thought this was going to be a boring multi rhyme driven verse, yet my opinion of you changed by the end of your verse, the last section was just dope and it summed up the situation that mainstreem rap is in at the moment. Nice boys something a bit different which is always good.
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the punching machine
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-Set-
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Posted: 05 January 2008 at 4:08pm |
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well im glad your opinion changed lol..thanks for the feed fam
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lynxx
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Posted: 05 January 2008 at 5:18pm |
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Point - you switched ya flow up from ya normal rhymescheme which was refreshin to me, it worked really well aswel, felt both verses, doesnt really matter who's verse was better because its all about gettin ya message across as you want it in this type of piece, aint seen much if anythin from Set but was cool, as frank said it picked up as the verse progressed ........Keep this sorta thing up boyz.......(take this as my monthly comment or sumin lol) |
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Rameez
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Posted: 06 January 2008 at 12:33pm |
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Hmm ok point your rhyming and flow was fine throughout the verse.. Imo, starting was kinda week in first verse, when u reach these line:
"The nonsense is whats dominant, no knowledge is inside My souls hollow when it comes to talk of confidence and pride But when it comes to rappin, the God's are pushed aside Thats why my occupation an my faith constantly collide I'm obnoxious as a prodigy, but i'm benevolent too Cos if dudes are struggling to die, i'm helpin 'em through" good concepts.. really nice lines.... 2nd part of the verse was also good loved reading it and in this story u had different story about history.. cool stuff Set... starting of good, like the eminem song the one he's falling from building that fucking song can't remember.. anyhow like yo rhyme scheme, smooth flow starting and ending was good Imo.. keep it up.... |
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Posted: 06 January 2008 at 1:48pm |
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i was feelin this.. shit was HOTT..
.. PB you switched it up, lik i said to u- ur flow was impeccable..
.set u was doin ur thing, props bro.. shit was tyte aswell, but lik watt frank said it got betta as it progressed..
props to both.. yah both dropped sum madd shit..
keep it comin..
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Posted: 06 January 2008 at 1:52pm |
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The original comeback kid
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CHAIN
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Posted: 06 January 2008 at 6:14pm |
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I'm obnoxious as a prodigy, but i'm benevolent too
Cos if dudes are struggling to die, i'm helpin 'em through Witnesses who claim their hard struggle to front
what happend to storytellin and verses of wizardary want that real, then to the store purchase ur history my chemistry made me comfortably numb, it aint a mystery those lines stood out to me, point fucking killed it, for real, set was on point too, nh Edited by CHAIN - 06 January 2008 at 6:15pm |
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Posted: 07 January 2008 at 7:21pm |
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This collabo was dope, no question...open mics usually bore me but his one was sick...flow was exellent throughout...keep up
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