Open Mic: Behemoth

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   Behemoth

I'm still the illest, the god's been blessin' Nep wit' these..
sick drop's that that kill kids with an incessant text disease
I'm reppin peace, but my writes are just the foreplay for sinners
when my chips are down, I take the Las outta Vegas cos im always a winner
i got a little smitten rep, an' i drop punches with no intermittent's, next
an I'll flip flips of flipped flips and still be the flippin best..
you know i'm the sickest, its like i've been right from the start
The Behemoth, impale my chest on the pen an' straight write from the heart
I got the magic cloak but you stuck wit' the same powers
its a shame cowards, cos neps clearly on another level, like dane bowers
I know my words are hard, and you dudes fear though, I'll spit it off
NepentheZ, A Warlock, A Devil, A True Hero.... a Behemoth

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NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote NepentheZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Behemoth Posted: 25 January 2008 at 9:01pm
	Behemoth I'm still the illest, the god's been blessin' Nep wit' these.. sick drop's that that kill kids with an incessant text disease I'm reppin peace, but my writes are just the foreplay for sinners when my chips are down, I take the Las outta Vegas cos im always a winner i got a little smitten rep, an' i drop punches with no intermittent's, next an I'll flip flips of flipped flips and still be the flippin best.. you know i'm the sickest, its like i've been right from the start The Behemoth, impale my chest on the pen an' straight write from the heart I got the magic cloak but you stuck wit' the same powers its a shame cowards, cos neps clearly on another level, like dane bowers I know my words are hard, and you dudes fear though, I'll spit it off NepentheZ, A Warlock, A Devil, A True Hero.... a Behemoth
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

Bolo Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member ¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Bolo Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 January 2008 at 1:09am
	The Behemoth, impale my chest on the pen an' straight write from the heart ^i liked that alot man, very nice the "las outta vegas" line was pretty decent too, clever not sure who dane bowers is...looks him up...oh, ok...decent line i guess the flip/flips/flipped/flippin line was pretty cool first bar wasnt that great...last bar was ok, but the choices for titles that u chose could've probably been better (since their completely objective in both their meanings and order, u couldve worked it to flow better)...and the fact that Behemoth appeared twice in the verse kinda detracted from the ending as well... overall, that one line really made me like this alot, some of the other lines were decent as well....but as a verse it couldve been better, especially the last line....pretty good though (btw, i didnt remember reading anything of urs since u were scorpia king, so this is definitely a big step up since then, hah)
	I am the one that knocks...

NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote NepentheZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 26 January 2008 at 7:15am
	Cheers Bolo. Yea, I only realized after I posted it that I had Behemoth in there twice :( - I just keyed it up for a bit of fun. Thanks for the Scorp Comment :) - I'm a long way from there nowadays.! Cheers for the feed. Peash
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote NepentheZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 January 2008 at 9:10pm
	Fuck you whores. :) - aka, Bump.
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

Rameez Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 31 July 2007 Location: Brampton, CDN Status: Offline Points: 3922 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-40-4 Form: NWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Rameez Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 January 2008 at 10:35pm
	talking high and mighty thats all I see... kinda lame to me..imo


U.N.L.M. Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 19 December 2006 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1955 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-15-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote U.N.L.M. Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 January 2008 at 10:45pm
	That flipping flips flipped line was pretty damn dope IMO..Las Vegas line was another cool idea..write from the heart line was a cool line and the Dave Bowens was alright, had to look him up so you lost points for making me research j/p..Flow and rhymes were nice, would've liked to seen more but it was nice for the amount you gave..Keep droppin' you beast... Edited by U.N.L.M. - 27 January 2008 at 10:45pm