Open Mic: The Vent 2008

iight, back again.... 

 

but i'm back to vent, 2008 hasn't been good to me..... 

 

yeah sensitive thugs all need hugs.....lol, but this is real talk

 

***************************go in!

 

Does fighting for my freedom make me a terrorist?

The righteous won’t believe the hate I inherited

But darkness is my allergy, cleansed by harsh realities

The pureness of my core is sacred like marriage is

Cured from all the wars still going on inside

The soldiers of my anger are too crazy for therapists

Its pride over love and players will share a bitch

Looking fine as hell with the brains of that Paris chick  

Low like the morals, all these rappers mean it

Talking ‘bout some dumb shit, all these brats believe it

If you got some heat on you, u gon’ have to squeeze it

What’s it gonna be? Catch a case or catch a beating?

That alpha male role has a catch to it, so blame rap music

For all the bastards leaking that had to act stupid

For no apparent reason, like ‘why he had to do it?’

Look at your friend, either dusted or on crack

Is it safe to say u ain’t a man if u comfortable with that?

…If the question sounds retorical, yes you a brilliant man

Studying my peers I can’t help but to feel advanced

Futile like this exercise, I’ll never see a million scans

Might as well enjoy this shit, and do it like Will-I-Am

Mating with a chick I might sweat away a kilogram  

A slave to the bankers 'cause the unity is scarce

Give the masses currency, it usually dissolves

The unity of course, a eulogy should follow

So learn form the past and be a student of tomorrow

Or join another gang with ruges' for you to borrow

They cool enough to smoke?..give the stupid fucks a bottle

Looking at my own life, like “this is not fair to me”

But somewhat acceptable long as I got air to breathe

long ass read. init?  

 

lmao

 

Edited by CHAIN - 04 February 2008 at 5:50pm

Yea this was nice, good to see you back. Rhymescheme was a bit dodgy at the start but it got better. Keep it up.

i for one like the rhymescheme...i kinda figured where u were headed as i was readin it...i enjoyed it...rhymin was so cleverly used...it seems readin ur stuff, i always find myself sayin "i wonder if i cuda made somethin out of that multi the same way"...shit was nice tho...u were speakin some real shit too...niceness...