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mcwoods 
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 Topic: DTK / WOODS - "Twice the sickness"Posted: 12 February 2008 at 6:23pm |
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Lets go... Ive seen you spitting weak shit..your hardly progressing Cuz ya writtens amount to nothing like unlimited texting!
You asking what im holding,well man all I got is fire
I shifted from last to first like a bad stock driver!
Carrying the heat son,I get bread all this powers rare..
Il have ya mans 'ass strung up' like brazilian beach outerwear!
Yall know what I do..and its not somethin ya wanna get into man
Cuz my shit will leave ya verse 'out of date' like some singles,damn!
My shits hot..so when I rap I just basically spit up dymes
Half yall kids are biters..so you resmble nerdy kids,always tryin 'pick up lines'
Shit..... You people know that we got it, so we should flaunt it And wordplay???, people wanna see D’s like a wet t-shirt contest We the hardest with hammers, ya’ll hardly can stand us We have a “gorilla bin” style…. Even our garbage, bananas (omg) Thats crazy..... Woodsy and I spit sick,on jewlery you couldnt think of what were spending Cuz we manage ice,call us a pair of rink attendents!
Firing at all cylinders!my words easilly like a tech booming
The bullets will 'rip ya top off' like a kinky sex movie..
We straight clever with this..damn you know every free is hard
Top of your class?You must of meant the front you retard..
Cut ya body into peices..have your mug on ya floor all across
Then get rich off your earnings like the days of the Holocaust!
My words hit with brute force,so its normal to be shook see
And you can say we goin condomless..cuz nobody toppin Wood-D there cant be more???...
yano they call me wood, cause im always having mine stay hard cause we expose more hearts, than opening valentines day cards (what???) look at me when im giving you order, im’a boss for fun d’s a god ta some, and people saying ma shit is awesome bruv ill bury you vertical, my punches leave ya coughin’ up Dawg, D is beast, he could leave the devil ta do this Cause he’s the star in more sports, than will ferrel in movies and you would be ass, to think that this wont last we retards in school in this rap game… in a different class (woah)
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Kay B
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Posted: 12 February 2008 at 6:42pm |
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Nice collab, both had good and bad lines in the verse's, woods first bar dont rhyme to me but i guess its accent general content from both was nice, overall a decent collab some dope lines some shit one's
Just wanted to say since dress pointed it out to me We have a “gorilla bin” style…. Even our garbage, bananas (omg) ^ Dope as fuck woods, real nice play....can't say i agree but it's dope lol |
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mcwoods
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Posted: 12 February 2008 at 6:44pm |
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thanks dude, yeah not true lik lol.
nice ass verse DTK, more please.. |
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Posted: 12 February 2008 at 7:02pm |
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Cuz ya writtens amount to nothing like unlimited texting!
I shifted from last to first like a bad stock driver! Cuz we manage ice,call us a pair of rink attendants! cause we expose more hearts, than opening valentines day cards (what???) We have a “gorilla bin” style…. Even our garbage, bananas (omg) ^Those were lines that really stood out to me in this piece..There were one or two lines i thought I've seen something similar to before or i just weren't feeling but that didn't outweigh the number of nice plays you guys had..Twas a very enjoyable read with all the cool plays so keep this kind of stuff up...Very good collab... |
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DressToKill
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Posted: 12 February 2008 at 7:49pm |
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Thanks UNLM..Appreciated
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The original comeback kid
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Posted: 12 February 2008 at 8:07pm |
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DTK's unlimited texting line and woods garbage bananas line were TIGHT.. serious... the rest was just decent tho... nothin special stood out aside from those lines...
this was a solid drop.. but nothin to write home about.... but seriously... those lines i mentioned were real nice... good shit... both of you are improving |
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Posted: 12 February 2008 at 8:37pm |
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A nice drop, I felt woods came stronger, and as most have pointed out, that Garbage, Banana's line was dope as hell. DTK your flow is sometimes off, mainly due to the way you construct your lines. You have really long lines followed by short ones, and it just throws me. Some hot concepts in there though.
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Posted: 12 February 2008 at 8:40pm |
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Thanks both..I gotta agree Nep..Woodsy was real nice here..
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Posted: 12 February 2008 at 9:42pm |
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We the hardest with hammers, ya’ll hardly can stand us We have a “gorilla bin” style…. Even our garbage, bananas (omg)oh my god!!! tight rhymes from both of you, the one above is my favorite |
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Posted: 13 February 2008 at 5:39pm |
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We the hardest with hammers, ya’ll hardly can stand us We have a “gorilla bin” style…. Even our garbage, bananas
dtk's unlimited line was ill too, good drop overall, really enjoyed reading it, fuck all that serious shit, just spit, lol
this that piff
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DressToKill
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Posted: 13 February 2008 at 8:56pm |
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Thanks all..
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