Open Mic: UNLM ft Woods - "you know what it is"

Woods


You should watch what you say cause me n' woods kill it
Have you saying "I.M. dead" like messaging the spirits
Don't you fear it..I mean potential? ya don't even show signs
Cause like psychic whores my punches "blow minds"
Watch my flow shine as i achieve great lines that crank stirs
Cause I receive "your ohs!/euros" like european bankers
I need to drop the anchor and stop all these liars
Cause like Prometheus, ya'll just spit stolen fire
I'm rollin' like tires and stomp your hearts and other parts
Then slice ya stomach n' open a "gas-trick" like i'm faking a fart
I'll show you all up, cause we sickest and the best for real
We know no one on LA has seen a prime like Ledgers career
Preachin' ya good cut the shit cause ya' the worst
You couldn't get your "point a-cross" by fingering a church
I'ma make sure ya face is off of this damned earth
And leave ya crawling outta shells like chicken birth
Ya' not better than me, ya crap with all those played lines
Your level like the “airforce in iraq” you never be "on mines"
We're not diminishing ya skill, our reign will never be taken
Cause even when finishing ya piss, woods is never shaken..haha...

Crazy.... want more...

wood’s shots hit hard, aint stopping till ive whipped ya pale
shit I’ll put this “queen’s head” to the floor, like a coin flipped a tails
U’s sick as well, leave you bleeding like a cut wit’ no stitches
call our punches “retired models” man, they ex-pose bitches
see ya punches are weak, played shit ya regressing
ya just changing up the same material, like marge making dresses
ya messing with the best n’ prolly the sickest, punk
dawg im quick ta rip into ya 6pack, and I aint in ta getting drunk
you must be shitting bruv, to think I aint got guns to burst with
When you say you gotta free-style, that’s means it aint worth shit
see with U and woods, they saying “yo ill beat you, I know im tough”
but people battling us is like kay’s parties, aint that many showing up

Im blowing up, so you don’t even gotta ask who the richest
and closest you get to a compliment, is when people say “U the sickest”
 Me and U, the slickest two, don’t wanna know what we know now
cause U’ll show you up, and I show off, so you don’t wanna showdown
I say NO, clown, just stop before someone found ya dead
people call us the “crusts” man, we always around the bread
ya getting pound instead, U’s plays got people going WOW
and after this you see that we sick, so don’t act like you don’t be knowing now
 
IT's over.....

 

See ima give you an example of a nice idea/concept that is worked badly and makes the play come off as simple. UNLM:

Cause I receive "your ohs!/euros" like european bankers
^Nice idea for a play but waaaaaaaay too simple/spelled out...find a different word than european because it sounds repetive and spelled out. Euro/european. Or at least dont put the "/euro" expo there lol...i see why you did it, but you gotta bring complexity that makes the reader be like "damn thats clever" but still where they will catch it. (Hint: the way to explain ya punch with out the expo is a good set up that leads into the punch ). I admit tho, that i do want to explain my plays alot becuz i never know if some retard is not gonna understand what im writing.

I notice that woods tends to do the same thing at times too. Try to word the punches so that they dont come off as too simple. Sometimes it might take ya a little longer to write ya verse but it will come off as more clever or witty.

 

Both had nice plays in them tho, im not dissin this drop. Woods "ex-pose" line was sick as was UN's "chicken birth" line. These were examples of witty lines that wernt too spelled out. You two are def some of the top ama's here wit lots of potential.

 

Any ways i hope i was able to help you guys. Nice read tho fellas, seriously

 

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