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SwordedStylez
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Topic: Spread The LovePosted: 10 June 2008 at 9:37am |
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These are the lyrics for the audio song i'm recording on my joyous world beat, will be up end of this week i hope.
i love the world, and everything that makes it great rise above the pain'n suffering, distaste n hate i never listen t'society, disgraceful fakes who don't appreciate or notice it's the greatest place where we come from, maybe y'all should open ya soul take a look around the beauty 'fore ya broken'n old before ya take ya last breath, breathe the freshness of life if ya lookin for some meanin, it's the best ya can find take a second t'try, find a place ya can sit out in the country where it's quiet'n away from the shit that causes sadness, madness, people tryin t'hurt find release in god's creation, y'may find it'll work set ya spirit free, let it fly with the birds i can feel my spirit soaring as i'm writin these words demonstration of the passion that i feel f'the earth place my love into my music so it's easily heard... (sung)don't wanna live in a world where people die
don't wanna listen to the sound of a baby cry let's make a change to our time we can make it good take a stance we can spread the love(singing ends) forget ya petty wars, let's come together the world
shout out loud t'make a diff'rence never end til we're heard yeah we spreadin the word, we gonna make a change take away the social boundaries, each race the same n we'll displace the pain til no one left is hurt turn pariahs into paragons'n bless the cursed we'll stress the words of universal love t'the people redesign the way we live'n bring some good from the evil deep inside our minds, if we try we'll find a resolution to ALL problems, get'em right this time hold our hands up high'n then we'll make a stand an example of the utmost of what's great in man it's our destiny, let's choose a path collectively dont wanna ever think ya never had the best of me our time aint over, so much left t'see never wanna see a world where mankind rests in peace.. (sung)don't wanna live in a world where people die
don't wanna listen to the sound of a baby cry let's make a change to our time we can make it good take a stance we can spread the love(singing ends) i fill my raps with elation, attackin frustration
i'ma rediscover love'n bring it back t'the nations enrapturing places, smiles're crackin the faces i'll impassion kids who haven't felt like laughin in ages happiness n success, they're both the same t'me people seem so scared t'smile as if it aint fa free i never claimed to be the best kinda man but i try wanna claim i tried t'change'n made a stand when i die coz what is life but a memory of what you acheived? hopin i can make change, and i've got to believe that when my number's called, n my curtain is closed that my legacy remains just like my words were in stone martin luther had a dream, i got one of my own everybody lives in piece'n noone longs for a home away from violence'n hatred, repression'n pain heed my words'n take 'em in, it's a lesson of change.... (sung)don't wanna live in a world where people die
don't wanna listen to the sound of a baby cry let's make a change to our time we can make it good take a stance we can spread the love(singing ends) |
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Kay B
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 11:00am |
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Dope, flow was perfect the way i read it and general content was a nice read and message was nicely presented, should make for a decent audio
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 4:53pm |
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Good looks on the feed kay, uppin.
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Freeda5thDawg
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 6:40pm |
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definitely...such a perfect balance IMO when i flowed it...you definitely put real focus on the rhyme schemes without distractin u from deliverin the message...but somethin hit me and made me start wantin to see somethin corruption, lol...and made me think, i wanna do the complete opposite of this piece...nonetheless, great message, real nice style, overall, it was a good read...
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SwordedStylez
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 6:50pm |
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oh, for the complete opposite of this pice, there's my drop "heathen" probably a few pages back ;) #
edit:as i'm not sure if you saw this and i'm such a nice guy, here's the "exact opposite" for your viewing pleasure http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=15075 Edited by SwordedStylez - 10 June 2008 at 6:55pm |
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Posted: 11 June 2008 at 9:53am |
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uppin for more feed....
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Posted: 11 June 2008 at 6:22pm |
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This was hot, bro. Flow was on lock and it showcased a positive message...should make for a dope audio...props
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Posted: 14 June 2008 at 7:18pm |
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That is the best peice of work that I have seen on here yet
it was so easy to read, wicked flow, gorgeous lyrics............if only man
Yeah its a nice little number for anyone to think on ..........Loved it
RESPECTING YA
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