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    Posted: 10 June 2008 at 9:37am
These are the lyrics for the audio song i'm recording on my joyous world beat, will be up end of this week i hope.

i love the world, and everything that makes it great
rise above the pain'n suffering, distaste n hate
i never listen t'society, disgraceful fakes
who don't appreciate or notice it's the greatest place
where we come from, maybe y'all should open ya soul
take a look around the beauty 'fore ya broken'n old
before ya take ya last breath, breathe the freshness of life
if ya lookin for some meanin, it's the best ya can find
take a second t'try, find a place ya can sit
out in the country where it's quiet'n away from the shit
that causes sadness, madness, people tryin t'hurt
find release in god's creation, y'may find it'll work
set ya spirit free, let it fly with the birds
i can feel my spirit soaring as i'm writin these words
demonstration of the passion that i feel f'the earth
place my love into my music so it's easily heard...
 
(sung)don't wanna live in a world where people die
don't wanna listen to the sound of a baby cry
let's make a change to our time we can make it good
take a stance we can spread the love(singing ends)
 
forget ya petty wars, let's come together the world
shout out loud t'make a diff'rence never end til we're heard
yeah we spreadin the word, we gonna make a change
take away the social boundaries, each race the same
n we'll displace the pain til no one left is hurt
turn pariahs into paragons'n bless the cursed
we'll stress the words of universal love t'the people
redesign the way we live'n bring some good from the evil
deep inside our minds, if we try we'll find
a resolution to ALL problems, get'em right this time
hold our hands up high'n then we'll make a stand
an example of the utmost of what's great in man
it's our destiny, let's choose a path collectively
dont wanna ever think ya never had the best of me
our time aint over, so much left t'see
never wanna see a world where mankind rests in peace..
 
(sung)don't wanna live in a world where people die
don't wanna listen to the sound of a baby cry
let's make a change to our time we can make it good
take a stance we can spread the love(singing ends)
 
i fill my raps with elation, attackin frustration
i'ma rediscover love'n bring it back t'the nations
enrapturing places, smiles're crackin the faces
i'll impassion kids who haven't felt like laughin in ages
happiness n success, they're both the same t'me
people seem so scared t'smile as if it aint fa free
i never claimed to be the best kinda man but i try
wanna claim i tried t'change'n made a stand when i die
coz what is life but a memory of what you acheived?
hopin i can make change, and i've got to believe
that when my number's called, n my curtain is closed
that my legacy remains just like my words were in stone
martin luther had a dream, i got one of my own
everybody lives in piece'n noone longs for a home
away from violence'n hatred, repression'n pain
heed my words'n take 'em in, it's a lesson of change....
 
(sung)don't wanna live in a world where people die
don't wanna listen to the sound of a baby cry
let's make a change to our time we can make it good
take a stance we can spread the love(singing ends)
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Dope, flow was perfect the way i read it and general content was a nice read and message was nicely presented, should make for a decent audio
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Good looks on the feed kay, uppin.
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definitely...such a perfect balance IMO when i flowed it...you definitely put real focus on the rhyme schemes without distractin u from deliverin the message...but somethin hit me and made me start wantin to see somethin corruption, lol...and made me think, i wanna do the complete opposite of this piece...nonetheless, great message, real nice style, overall, it was a good read...
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oh, for the complete opposite of this pice, there's my drop "heathen" probably a few pages back ;) #
 
edit:as i'm not sure if you saw this and i'm such a nice guy, here's the "exact opposite" for your viewing pleasure http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=15075


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uppin for more feed....
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This was hot, bro. Flow was on lock and it showcased a positive message...should make for a dope audio...props
 
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That is the best peice of work that I have seen on here yet
it was so easy to read, wicked flow, gorgeous lyrics............if only man
Yeah its a nice little number for anyone to think on ..........Loved it
RESPECTING YA
 
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