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CHAIN 
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 Topic: Reality Check (Cash It In)Posted: 19 June 2008 at 6:51pm |
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It's the return of Dick Chainy
I'm influential my G....
peep game:
Won’t tell’em what I earn, that’s a bread winner’s secret
I’ll tell’em what I’ve learned from a cess slingin’ genius; Stop leaping in to beefs and let’s think strategic Hotheadedness will leave a vexed king defeated Chessboard maneuvering till techs end my speeches It’s me against the world till death wins the beef, this… Life is a tragedy, but checks bring some peace, bliss… Like this ignorance till I rest in a deep ditch Rotting in a wooden box, chest skin all greenish Grey teeth in black gums…breath mints are needed Till that day comes, this blessed sinner speaks his… Truth in its true form, no ex-tended remix I’m all about change like them left wing extremists Tryna save that green, and my best friends can see this Ears to the street ‘cause the net trends don’t mean shit Not going off on what the yes men agree with Keep’em under pressure ‘cause the stress injures teams if… Their bond is not tight and sets tend to be dis- -functional, destructive, their death sentence’s pre-fixed Regretting all the promises; a threat sender’s weakness Never walked whatcha talk till the press prints them features Like ‘Young Man Stabbed’, his flesh minced to pieces Blood on his ball cap and his Guess denim jeans, shhhhhit Yes I’d rather be on them West Indies’ beaches Fornicating daily with a sex scented penis Water bed sessions leaving wet women sea sick Jet engine powered, I’m a Fresh Prince, conceded… *sigh* …. Just tryna escape reality Edited by CHAIN - 19 June 2008 at 7:09pm |
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 7:01pm |
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Pretty nice stuff, Chain...
My favorite bar was: Truth in it’s true form, no ex-tended remix I’m all about change like them left wing extremists |
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CHAIN
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 7:06pm |
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much appreciated, thank u ....lol
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CHAIN
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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 2:22pm |
 fuck y'all niggas, man
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Kay B
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 10:34am |
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Dope shit man, as usual flow was on point and general content was dope as hell...impressive |
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 8:07pm |
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Ears to the street ‘cause the net trends don’t mean shit Not going off on what the yes men agree with lol hot shiz
whole piece came cool, flow and multis hard, message was cool... felt more emotion in this piece
keep doing.. |
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 8:25pm |
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Yea i thought this was cool. Flow was your strong point as usual...Good read bro
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 10:51pm |
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Life is a tragedy, but checks bring some peace, bliss… Like this ignorance till I rest in a deep ditch ^that and the line wood's quoted were my favs...tight piece, flow was nice and was liking the multies, emotion, swagger, and message..keep droppin' |
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 1:50am |
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not gonna lie, i LOVE you flow ( no dick riding )not so much this peice ( still a bit tho ) but a lot of your peices flow reminds me of eminem in the way i am.. lovin the vocab to, a lot of big words in there used properly.. just not thrown in there to make it sound all safistacated. likin some of the shit your sayin to.. especially "Life is a tragedy but checks bring some peace" that shits just real and down to earth..
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 11:26pm |
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content was depicted nicely with good usage of vocab and well balanced flow and rhyme scheme...always have those certain one liners where i go "shit's true" or could really relate to cause they have that kinda impact...coolness man...
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