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mcwoods
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Topic: Freestyle....Posted: 03 July 2008 at 2:15pm |
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yo i keep the tool on me, but i aint fixing shit
stickin' pricks for the' clips, bricks, whips n' shit listen bitch, im ahead of my time and the rest of the time, im a head of ya rhymes im at tha head of the lines, of the nicest emcee's they might get ripped see, but they know not to test me i stay on the grind like a skateboard, its known im great bitch n' ya bitch ain a great bitch bitch i get more-face off her than neo in matrix you aint sick, you healthy, well a least for the minute you'll be deceased for tha sinnin, cause im a beast when im winnin' was given these gifts, to cause rifts in the rap world i told ya'll to up ya flow, ya' probably tried ta make tha tap twirl im past first, im nothing.. zero almost certainly defeatin' me is a rarity, cause ya'll combined can't compare to me leave you in tha worst daze, happy like it my birthday you aint nice, outta me and you... ya'd come in 3rd place! you a nerd, ace, you aint even a threat putting bitches to sleep, and i aint even a vet ya crew will hate ya, they dont believe ya tha best have ya like a rude tennis player, have leavin' ya set you aint gonna beat me, listen to ya im speaking about you like aids, the possibilty of you hurting me is so small, it aint even worht thinking about you can take a swing, maybe connect.. maybe draw a lil blood do what you want, my punches move buildin's and my flow is still fudge that mean it is dope, and i meanin it so
that mean you better get mean, or the ya sipping tha lean through a strow' you my back dawg, cause i aint seeing you though now real talk kid, even you aint believin' you dope you can say it if you want, but you aint gotta respond, b or ill end ya happy days quicker than boddyin' fonzi you want me, come get it, im hear waiting ya bitches but ya heads like bad bowlers, it aint NUTHIN' ta split it you aint want me ta hit it, ask ya girl what it does tell her ill fuck this pussy up, worse than her's when im done so ya'll can say i lost it, but maybe i hide it, you clueless bitch ass ya girl, she give me mourn-e, than slim shadys eulogist im better with rap, but still i kill, i stay ready ta clap ya cats be shaking when ya see tha gat cause im steady with that
gotta aim like lazer, ill maim ya no' fakin' leave ya face fucked and ya'll need ta claim ay nose later i expose fakers, you no you aint breakin the streak of a life time like nudisits with no patience
me n' my squad, squad up, we quick ta stamp ya after we beat ya wont be quick ta hairy back, like pete sampras slam dunk, wait he slam at the net in tennis you just look at our names, n' you can bet i rap' better
cause you never rap? never, you spit too much shit then you complain cause you not gettin praise well tough bitch |
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I-kontinue
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 2:51pm |
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Lol.. This is a straight freestyle, as in the person is right there, actually hearin' you go off the top, but it's not worth reading honestly... if you get where I'm comin' from... Stay up tho
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mcwoods
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 3:00pm |
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lol, true words.. thanks for the feed
i rapped this on audio you use cool edit / nick does.. any advice firstly i recorded the verse, then i recorded a 20 sec beatbox sample lol, to go as the beat, which sounds decen enough to be fair problem one - beatbox is too loud, that needs turned down, no idea how to problem two - i cant get the thing too play them both symutaneously, the beat box will go for twenty seconds, no verse, then the verse will kick in any help would be further appreciated.. |
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 3:10pm |
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Lol... You just beat box for 20 seconds? Usually people loop it after a couple seconds if they're gonna do a whole track on it... And there's no way this long ass thing is gonna only take 20 seconds... And won't the beat be off from the flow if you werent hearin it while u spit?.. Unless it's one of those simple ass beats that ANYTHING could go to... Lol... You on that REAL primitive shit.
Is your voice and the beat on 2 separate tracks? The beat should be Track 1 and your verse should be Track 2... Make sure they are... And then the volumes are right under the Track 1 and Track 2.... Then to move them left to right, you right click them and just drag... |
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 3:51pm |
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woods, i was at work when u hit me up on msn.. hit me up again ill help you out..
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 4:00pm |
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ffs, lost the vocals now, lol, will have to redo it...
ill get at you when i have them done
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