Open Mic: 50 Bars Of Brilliance Pt. 1 |
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Matt The Ripper
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Topic: 50 Bars Of Brilliance Pt. 1Posted: 24 May 2009 at 10:41am |
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Check it... I'll stay rippin' up the Open Mic, flowin' like a breeze do Knowin' I appease goons, but ain't showin' this to please you Jus' tryin' to get these keys viewed n' give ya somethin' new to read through Hip-Hop is the new "Holy Language," That means it ain't fuckin' Hebrew So be true to ya self first n' fuck the rest of the rules Now-a-days kids ain't a blessin', They infestin' they schools Ain't understandin' how every single lessons a tool So I think war's are neccessary to lessen the fools My presence is cool, My present's this swaggerful gift of gab Ain't the head of The Asy', but yes I am the mos' swift wit' jabs n' my man Swift is Bad To The Bone wit' a style like Kool G. Hip-Hop is what I know, Can't nobody school me I know KRS, EPMD, Run DMC... Shit, I even know Schooly Try n' swagga jack my steez, I'll straight school thieves I'm a fuckin' rock star, Y'all are just my groupies N' I ain't talkin' 'bout a bikini when I say this might be a two piece Me n' Swift rollin' spliff's, Yea' ya know we be smokin' doobies Stop wit' them Mickey Mouse rhymes, They look fuckin' Goofy Y'all need to learn how to proofread, I text rhymes like Proof free'd Spill the illest thoughts straight off the dome n' onto the loose leaf Jus' like a true beast, I'm too raw, too rare, one of the hardest too feed Guess no one told you sad clowns, Confidence is somethin' you do need You see I am good at what I do, B! This ain't an act, so careful where ya step, I heard i'm droppin' like an asshole My facts flow wit' ease like when I rap, poetry's in motion n' when my flow's this sweet, ya know it's the weed i'm smokin' You ho's are weak, hopeless n' jealous 'cause you'll never be this potent?? If no one agree's you're dope then the last thing you should be is boastin' Try readin' one of Freeda's open's you little illiterate fucks So Rap beat me, but believe me even he considers it luck Yuh, The Ripper's a 'nuck, still rippin' it up like he said he would I'll come after you nice rappers, so you better be ready woods I'm done wit' those who ain't any good, some MC's should quit rappin' When i'm old n' grey i'll be sayin' my favorite past time was bitch smashin' Rip's snappin' sticks in half, I'm that tit grabbin' kid who can't quit rappin' sick Whenever I leave a bank on my grind I never leave any cash in it I'm one of Hip-Hop's greatest lovers, possibly one of the mos' passionate You can ride wit' me in my car 'til I jump out, then you can crash in it This' a homerun you fuckin' homos, ain't no one catchin' it I refuse to kiss a bitch whose lips always attached to dicks Unlike you silly faggots, I'll leave you smashed to shit Maybe I ain't P.C., but atleast i'm teachin' 'em what gay bashin' is Must not know who they clashin' wit, It's Matt The Rip Back in this winnin' battles wit' a less passive diss Killin' pacifists who won't learn that rap battlin' Matt's a risk to they health when i'm mackin' scripts, they say there's too much crack in it I'll be busy stackin' bricks, but don't think I won't make time to smack a bitch Kelly_Vic's probably buyin' wins by showin' sick pics of her ass n' tits Don't do acid kids, next you'll be poppin' pills, O.D.in' like B. Rabbit did or admittin' the truth comin' out of denial like, "Man i'm bad at this!" Gottta get that Boom boom brr-r-r-raaap! Gotta get that You want some? Come n' get Matt ...or get the fuck outta here!! Edited by Matt The Ripper - 24 May 2009 at 11:22pm |
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I-SEE-GRIPS
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Posted: 24 May 2009 at 6:39pm |
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That was pretty dope bro, loads of mentionables
Flowed sweet for sure, props
Peace
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Posted: 24 May 2009 at 10:47pm |
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Man this was nice..content let off in some places but its hard not to when you set a high level for yourself at the first then drop another 40 bars to follow it..Good to see improvement dude, real talk
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The original comeback kid
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 24 May 2009 at 11:08pm |
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Awesome!
Great to see the good looks on this piece, yo. I was nervous about droppin' so many bars. Shit, glad ya liked it, guys! Thanks for reading! |
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Posted: 24 May 2009 at 11:22pm |
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I want it...
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Posted: 24 May 2009 at 11:22pm |
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sick drop. even though u get on my nerves i cant hate. keep it up
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'jaemills' trying to beat me is like a broke pencil. there aint no point
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 12:07am |
Then Kay B, you got it! |
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Posted: 25 May 2009 at 12:39pm |
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Well.. this was something else...
Usually I find short ass pieces on this forum which, to be honest, bug the fuck out of me (unless the person sucks) cuz I always want more and it feels like they stop when they just getting heated up, yanno?
But you my friend... Ooo-weee, I'd like to quote some parts, but everything is quotable, subliminals included. Bit sad it isnt 100 bars tho :(
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#Bananas
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 26 May 2009 at 2:39am |
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It will be 100 soon, my man. In due time. :)
Thanks for the feed, man! Glad you liked it! Thanks to Rhymez, as well! Appreciate it! |
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Posted: 30 May 2009 at 5:02am |
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Bumpin' this for those who ain't seen it yet, or any more feed's also always appreciated!
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Posted: 30 May 2009 at 10:07am |
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wow i been down for a minute an Matt comes up wit this!
gud stuff man ya defo progressing an bout tha line wit me considering it luck....lol yea i know ya werent on ya game then so its all gud man ya welcome to re-battle me wenever ya want tho tbh lol ne wayz fuck all that shit,this was by far ya best open i even read newayz so congrates an keep dropping
Peace
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Posted: 30 May 2009 at 10:51am |
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Thanks Rap! :)
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Posted: 30 May 2009 at 10:26pm |
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def a hot little peice..started off flowin nice
b.rabbit line had me laughin.. stayed consistent with flow.. alot of good concepts/ideas
props
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Posted: 31 May 2009 at 2:29pm |
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Thanks Joey!
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Posted: 05 June 2009 at 2:38am |
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Final Bump for those who haven't seen this or haven't fed it and would like to give me a critique or even let me know what lines you liked, or felt, or what have you... always appreciated!
Thought i'd bump this one last time since it was at the bottom of this page. After this, i'll let it go... and get to work on pt 2. ![]() |
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