Open Mic: 50 Bars Of Brilliance Pt. 1

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    Posted: 24 May 2009 at 10:41am
Check it...

I'll stay rippin' up the Open Mic, flowin' like a breeze do
Knowin' I appease goons, but ain't showin' this to please you
Jus' tryin' to get these keys viewed n' give ya somethin' new to read through
Hip-Hop is the new "Holy Language," That means it ain't fuckin' Hebrew
So be true to ya self first n' fuck the rest of the rules
Now-a-days kids ain't a blessin', They infestin' they schools
Ain't understandin' how every single lessons a tool
So I think war's are neccessary to lessen the fools
My presence is cool, My present's this swaggerful gift of gab
Ain't the head of The Asy', but yes I am the mos' swift wit' jabs
n' my man Swift is Bad To The Bone wit' a style like Kool G.
Hip-Hop is what I know, Can't nobody school me
I know KRS, EPMD, Run DMC... Shit, I even know Schooly
Try n' swagga jack my steez, I'll straight school thieves
I'm a fuckin' rock star, Y'all are just my groupies
N' I ain't talkin' 'bout a bikini when I say this might be a two piece
Me n' Swift rollin' spliff's, Yea' ya know we be smokin' doobies
Stop wit' them Mickey Mouse rhymes, They look fuckin' Goofy
Y'all need to learn how to proofread, I text rhymes like Proof free'd
Spill the illest thoughts straight off the dome n' onto the loose leaf
Jus' like a true beast, I'm too raw, too rare, one of the hardest too feed
Guess no one told you sad clowns, Confidence is somethin' you do need
You see I am good at what I do, B! This ain't an act, so
careful where ya step, I heard i'm droppin' like an asshole
My facts flow wit' ease like when I rap, poetry's in motion
n' when my flow's this sweet, ya know it's the weed i'm smokin'
You ho's are weak, hopeless n' jealous 'cause you'll never be this potent??
If no one agree's you're dope then the last thing you should be is boastin'
Try readin' one of Freeda's open's you little illiterate fucks
So Rap beat me, but believe me even he considers it luck
Yuh, The Ripper's a 'nuck, still rippin' it up like he said he would
I'll come after you nice rappers, so you better be ready woods
I'm done wit' those who ain't any good, some MC's should quit rappin'
When i'm old n' grey i'll be sayin' my favorite past time was bitch smashin'
Rip's snappin' sticks in half, I'm that tit grabbin' kid who can't quit rappin' sick
Whenever I leave a bank on my grind I never leave any cash in it
I'm one of Hip-Hop's greatest lovers, possibly one of the mos' passionate
You can ride wit' me in my car 'til I jump out, then you can crash in it
 This' a homerun you fuckin' homos, ain't no one catchin' it
I refuse to kiss a bitch whose lips always attached to dicks
Unlike you silly faggots, I'll leave you smashed to shit
Maybe I ain't P.C., but atleast i'm teachin' 'em what gay bashin' is
Must not know who they clashin' wit, It's Matt The Rip
Back in this winnin' battles wit' a less passive diss
Killin' pacifists who won't learn that rap battlin' Matt's a risk
to they health when i'm mackin' scripts, they say there's too much crack in it
I'll be busy stackin' bricks, but don't think I won't make time to smack a bitch
Kelly_Vic's probably buyin' wins by showin' sick pics of her ass n' tits
Don't do acid kids, next you'll be poppin' pills, O.D.in' like B. Rabbit did
or admittin' the truth comin' out of denial like, "Man i'm bad at this!"

Gottta get that
Boom boom brr-r-r-raaap!
Gotta get that

You want some?
Come n' get Matt

...or get the fuck outta here!!


Edited by Matt The Ripper - 24 May 2009 at 11:22pm
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That was pretty dope bro, loads of mentionables
Flowed sweet for sure, props
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Man this was nice..content let off in some places but its hard not to when you set a high level for yourself at the first then drop another 40 bars to follow it..Good to see improvement dude, real talk
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Awesome!

Great to see the good looks on this piece, yo. I was nervous about droppin' so many bars.

Shit, glad ya liked it, guys! Thanks for reading!
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I want it...
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sick drop. even though u get on my nerves i cant hate. keep it up
'jaemills' trying to beat me is like a broke pencil. there aint no point
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Originally posted by Kay B Kay B wrote:

I want it...

Then Kay B, you got it!
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Endeavor Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 May 2009 at 12:39pm
Well.. this was something else...
 
Usually I find short ass pieces on this forum which, to be honest, bug the fuck out of me (unless the person sucks) cuz I always want more and it feels like they stop when they just getting heated up, yanno?
 
But you my friend... Ooo-weee, I'd like to quote some parts, but everything is quotable, subliminals included. Bit sad it isnt 100 bars tho :(
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It will be 100 soon, my man. In due time. :)

Thanks for the feed, man!

Glad you liked it!

Thanks to Rhymez, as well! Appreciate it!
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Bumpin' this for those who ain't seen it yet, or any more feed's also always appreciated!


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wow i been down for a minute an Matt comes up wit this!
gud stuff man ya defo progressing an bout tha line wit me considering it luck....lol yea i know ya werent on ya game then so its all gud man ya welcome to re-battle me wenever ya want tho tbh lol ne wayz fuck all that shit,this was by far ya best open i even read newayz so congrates an keep dropping
 
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Thanks Rap! :)
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def a hot little peice..started off flowin nice
 
b.rabbit line had me laughin.. stayed consistent with flow.. alot of good concepts/ideas
 
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Thanks Joey!

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Final Bump for those who haven't seen this or haven't fed it and would like to give me a critique or even let me know what lines you liked, or felt, or what have you... always appreciated!

Thought i'd bump this one last time since it was at the bottom of this page. After this, i'll let it go... and get to work on pt 2. Cool
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