Open Mic: A Different Perspective |
Post Reply
|
| Author | |
Calibra
Standard Member
Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Topic: A Different PerspectivePosted: 16 June 2009 at 8:23am |
|
Story tellin' time... Listen while I describe the birth of a passion
The growth of a rapper as he nurtures his talent Started years before rhyming words was the fashion Witnessing his rise as im submerged in the action Surrounded by doubt, so few knew that he'd shine As he desired and admired all the beauty of rhyme As if cupid reminds him of his love for the art Arrow aimed at his chest and it discovered his heart Afffection turns to addiction as he gets better with time Confined, writing rhymes with the pen in his mind On collision course with greatness, no forks in the road No brakes, just accelerates at all of his goals Made a choice to seperate him apart from the youngest Be the hardest amongst us or an artist of substance? Became the latter cause the first he regards as a fungus His destination is success with no car or a compass Just a pen and a pad cause they're far from redundant Hard to shine in a time when there's stars in abundance But if you look he will appear as he's leadin' an Era A genius, it's no suprise when I reveal it's Calibra You see to me, the task of eclipsin' the rest is... Elementary, now it seems all the kids have accepted That im greater, sarcasm? Not a hint is detected Never thought descriptive finesse'd get this impressive Breaking down all the reasons why my scripts are respected So I had to look at life from a different perspective! |
|
![]() |
|
Junior Shade
Superior Member
Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:43am |
|
Thought you where in a far far away land?.. Illness though dude, real illness..
|
|
![]() |
|
Junior Shade
Superior Member
Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:45am |
Thats my best part.. |
|
![]() |
|
Junior Shade
Superior Member
Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:46am |
|
Classic...?
|
|
![]() |
|
Calibra
Standard Member
Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:59am |
|
Lol im away but there's fuck all here so it's a chillax holiday for me, which means I can write.
Classic? That's why you're in New Era Junior, you know quality when you see it haha
|
|
![]() |
|
CHAIN
Standard Member
Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 16 June 2009 at 10:41am |
|
Made a choice to seperate him apart from the youngest
Be the hardest amongst us or an artist of substance? Became the latter cause the first he regards as a fungus His destination is success with no car or a compass certified floetry....and i'ma leave it at that, the rhymes speak for themselves lol @ my lazy ass, let's see how the rest responds to it, and maybe we'll call it a classic |
|
![]() |
|
Cuba
Senior Moderator
Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332 ![]() Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 16 June 2009 at 10:47am |
|
Sick.
|
|
|
|
![]() |
|
Madeye
Standard Member
Joined: 25 March 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1177 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:21pm |
|
fuckin' iLL!
great flow, nasty multies - some less impressive than others.
Couple nice punches, sick metas and plays.
Overall? Really, really like this one, C.
Nice wit' it.
One ['1]
|
|
|
<font color=darkgray>I'm only offended by those I respect... and I don't respect you[/COLOR]
|
|
![]() |
|
Matt The Ripper
Superior Member
Joined: 19 March 2008 Location: Cultus Lake, BC Status: Offline Points: 4042 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-40-2 Form: WLLLLL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 17 June 2009 at 2:09am |
|
Dope.
|
|
|
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
|
![]() |
|
rapdisup
Standard Member
Joined: 08 January 2009 Location: U.K Status: Offline Points: 1856 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-20-0 Form: WWWWLL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 17 June 2009 at 1:42pm |
|
haha reminded me of sum old skool hip hop like wu tang or sumthing lol i liked tha flow here alot like tha way ya allow tha reader to get in tha mind of tha person i.e
"On collision course with greatness, no forks in the road No brakes, just accelerates at all of his goals Made a choice to seperate him apart from the youngest Be the hardest amongst us or an artist of substance?" liked that alot rite there keep up Cal'dope shit! |
|
|
The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
|
![]() |
|
Guide
Groupie
Joined: 11 June 2009 Status: Offline Points: 42 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 17 June 2009 at 11:09pm |
|
Damn, I was really feeling this shit homie.
It felt like it had a lot of heart to it an shit, was fuckin Ill dawg.
Keep up the good work, mad props.
~1~ Edited by Guide - 17 June 2009 at 11:15pm |
|
![]() |
|
Exoduzt
Superior Member
NaCl Joined: 08 April 2006 Location: Long Island Status: Offline Points: 5331 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-7-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 18 June 2009 at 4:54am |
|
whoa...this shit was crazy...like someone said above me this reminded me of some old school type shit...the flow was absolutely flawless...damn....one of my favorite pieces...
|
|
![]() |
|
![]() |
|
aminal
Standard Member
Joined: 15 May 2009 Status: Offline Points: 245 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-6-0 Form: LLWWLL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 18 June 2009 at 5:10am |
^my favorite line, overall this was pretty dope, flow was very nice plus some good imagery, i would definitely like to see more of this in the future, keep it up |
|
![]() |
|
Calibra
Standard Member
Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 18 June 2009 at 1:25pm |
|
Thanks alot guys, more to come!
|
|
![]() |
|
Rhymez
Standard Member
Joined: 13 April 2008 Status: Offline Points: 163 |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 18 June 2009 at 11:09pm |
|
sick
|
|
|
'jaemills' trying to beat me is like a broke pencil. there aint no point
|
|
![]() |
|
R.L.H
Groupie
Joined: 07 June 2009 Location: blackpool england Status: Offline Points: 96 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-3-0 Form: WWWLWL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
Quote Reply
Posted: 18 June 2009 at 11:23pm |
|
yer that shit was dope
dont usually even read stories or topical shit...just stop after a few lines coz it bores me this kept me interested right till the last word tho.... flow was awsome well done calibra |
|
![]() |
|
Post Reply
|
|
|
Tweet
|
| Forum Jump | Forum Permissions ![]() You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot create polls in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum |
|