Open Mic: A Different Perspective

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    Posted: 16 June 2009 at 8:23am

Story tellin' time...

 
Listen while I describe the birth of a passion
The growth of a rapper as he nurtures his talent
Started years before rhyming words was the fashion
Witnessing his rise as im submerged in the action
Surrounded by doubt, so few knew that he'd shine
As he desired and admired all the beauty of rhyme
As if cupid reminds him of his love for the art
Arrow aimed at his chest and it discovered his heart
Afffection turns to addiction as he gets better with time
Confined, writing rhymes with the pen in his mind
On collision course with greatness, no forks in the road
No brakes, just accelerates at all of his goals
Made a choice to seperate him apart from the youngest
Be the hardest amongst us or an artist of substance?
Became the latter cause the first he regards as a fungus
His destination is success with no car or a compass
Just a pen and a pad cause they're far from redundant
Hard to shine in a time when there's stars in abundance
But if you look he will appear as he's leadin' an Era
A genius, it's no suprise when I reveal it's Calibra
You see to me, the task of eclipsin' the rest is...
Elementary, now it seems all the kids have accepted
That im greater, sarcasm? Not a hint is detected
Never thought descriptive finesse'd get this impressive
Breaking down all the reasons why my scripts are respected
So I had to look at life from a different perspective!
 
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Thought you where in a far far away land?.. Illness though dude, real illness..
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Originally posted by Calibra Calibra wrote:


Surrounded by doubt, so few knew that he'd shine
As he desired and admired all the beauty of rhyme
As if cupid reminds him of his love for the art
Arrow aimed at his chest and it discovered his heart
Afffection turns to addiction as he gets better with time
Confined, writing rhymes with the pen in his mind
 


Thats my best part..
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Classic...?
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Lol im away but there's fuck all here so it's a chillax holiday for me, which means I can write.
 
Classic? That's why you're in New Era Junior, you know quality when you see it haha
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Made a choice to seperate him apart from the youngest
Be the hardest amongst us or an artist of substance?
Became the latter cause the first he regards as a fungus
His destination is success with no car or a compass

certified floetry....and i'ma leave it at that, the rhymes speak for themselves
lol @ my lazy ass,  let's see how the rest responds to it, and maybe we'll call it a classic
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Sick.
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fuckin' iLL!
great flow, nasty multies - some less impressive than others.
Couple nice punches, sick metas and plays.
 
Overall?  Really, really like this one, C.
Nice wit' it.
 
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Dope.
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth


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haha reminded me of sum old skool hip hop like wu tang or sumthing lol i liked tha flow here alot like tha way ya allow tha reader to get in tha mind of tha person i.e

"On collision course with greatness, no forks in the road
No brakes, just accelerates at all of his goals
Made a choice to seperate him apart from the youngest
Be the hardest amongst us or an artist of substance?"

liked that alot rite there keep up Cal'dope shit!
The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!

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Damn, I was really feeling this shit homie.
It felt like it had a lot of heart to it an shit, was fuckin Ill dawg.
Keep up the good work, mad props.
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Edited by Guide - 17 June 2009 at 11:15pm
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whoa...this shit was crazy...like someone said above me this reminded me of some old school type shit...the flow was absolutely flawless...damn....one of my favorite pieces...

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Originally posted by Calibra Calibra wrote:


As if cupid reminds him of his love for the art
Arrow aimed at his chest and it discovered his heart

^my favorite line,

overall this was pretty dope, flow was very nice plus some good imagery,

i would definitely like to see more of this in the future, keep it up
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Thanks alot guys, more to come!
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sick
'jaemills' trying to beat me is like a broke pencil. there aint no point
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yer that shit was dope

dont usually even read stories or topical shit...just stop after a few lines coz it bores me

this kept me interested right till the last word tho....

flow was awsome

well done calibra
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